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improv
04-01-2008, 10:50 PM
Hey Im Back Bin out dabbled in and out here's what i got
2months ago..
Clone Did this like 2 months ago... a simpler piv... Rate Separate 1-5
http://img135.imageshack.us/img135/575/clonegj4.gif (http://imageshack.us)


I Call this one.. Spin Kick.. For obvious reasons. 2 hours ago. first time doin it to So Rate This as a Whole then rate the Kick Separate 1-5 please..
http://img132.imageshack.us/img132/1516/spinkicknc1.gif (http://imageshack.us)

=Rock=
04-01-2008, 11:31 PM
smooth first anim. Creative, didn't quite understand it though but it was good.

falling was a bit slow on the last part on second piv.

I think the guy should follow through with the sword on second piv.
But the spiky hair guy had a great spin kick.

GJ

pivotfreak747
04-02-2008, 10:32 PM
the first one what are those bubbles smoke because if they aRE stop using them also when the guy takes a piece from the garbage can it goes smaller other whise i liked the walking the first animation 3/5 2nd would be 2/5 needs some work

improv
04-03-2008, 07:37 AM
thanks but your doin the samethin everyone else did along time ago when they say it needs work. they dont tell me what to work on...

joeyodaguy
04-04-2008, 05:20 AM
The sword needs to follow through, not just tap him on the head.

StickSlamSam
04-04-2008, 05:37 AM
Yeah, your sword control wasn't that good. The clouds could be improved alot and the way you use them, but other then that they look pretty nice.

improv
04-04-2008, 10:52 PM
hmm. no offense but why is it only beginners with like 20 posts commenting as if they are experts i mean yeah i appreciate that but really look at your anims then mine?