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Cronos
08-09-2009, 05:54 PM
Heres my first explosion :3

I posted it in a new thread to get heaps of CC.

Took 5 hours

http://img217.imageshack.us/img217/8992/esplosion2.gif

Thanks.

PS: I might aswell post this while im at it, 33 Fps test.

http://www.truploader.com/view/557086

The animation is kind of dodgy, but 33 Fps is pretty hard, and its my first. CC please.

Also, random:

http://img207.imageshack.us/img207/2266/whatacrapday2.gif

http://img233.imageshack.us/img233/1302/bluragewithtremerandfad.gif

White Spiral
08-09-2009, 11:52 PM
I never thought Pivot could look so good.

Zed
08-10-2009, 03:30 AM
On the explosion, where the guy's elbow bends just after he gets hit in the head; I just think it doesn't look right. Almost like it bends the wrong way because he's turning around at the same time. I might have tried making him stiffer and more jerky when he got hit, and then turned him around seperately. Besides that, it was perfect. The explosion was excellent. The physics were beautiful.

The back foot in the 33fps slides along the floor, which I generally dislike although it doesn't have to be technically wrong.

On the other bit, again with the floppy arms. I would like to at least try out what that looks like if the arms stop before they hit his hips. They also don't trail.

To sum up, I'm nitpicking because I'm jealous. Stop being better than me.

Cronos
08-10-2009, 04:52 AM
Thank you so much Zed, excellent critisism. <3