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White Spiral
08-09-2009, 06:51 PM
http://www.truploader.com/view/592293

Let me know what you think and what could be improved. Its 24 frames per second. I based it off a tutorial I saw on Newgrounds. I think its pretty good.

Dudeman
08-09-2009, 07:09 PM
Moved to the flash section. Be sure to show off your animations in the Community animations, please.

White Spiral
08-09-2009, 11:55 PM
Oooooh this is where it went. Lol I couldn't find it after it moved and thought it got deleted....

**stickman**
08-12-2009, 12:15 AM
ummm....make it not so thick and add a little shading...dat would make it better.
but it wasnt bad

flayne
08-12-2009, 02:30 AM
it was pretty smooth, but not so thick or make really tiney particles at the end

Rabstar
08-12-2009, 02:39 AM
Needs easing.
Needs teh particles to stay longer.