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tballa33
08-12-2009, 09:39 AM
okay
i havent been here in a while
so i thought i would post a ani
plz rank
coz i have gotten so much better :p
http://img87.imageshack.us/img87/6081/combo.gif

tballa33
08-12-2009, 09:45 AM
sorry for double posting
i just
want
to be ranked plz

Rival
08-12-2009, 10:21 AM
Can't deny the fact you've improven ALOT. Almost can't believe it's yours ._.

Zed
08-12-2009, 10:22 AM
Hey, it's this guy:


wtf ever
u got mad probs man
i way better than a low-begginah

I'll give you a rank if you promise to accept it this time. Don't get angry. Don't flame. Accept the criticism, work out what it means, and apply it next time, ok?

If you highlight the invisitext below, you'll find my cc and ranking. By doing so you are acknowledging that you wish to receive my cc and rank. If you don't like it, it was your responsibility and you have no right to flame, understood? I just want to make sure, we're absolutely 100% clear on the no flaming here, right? Don't say I didn't warn you.

It was about med beginner if I give you the benefit of the doubt on gravity. I'm assuming you wanted slow motion for that last kick.

When he lands at the beginning, I dislike the way that each leg bends in opposite directions. It will probably look better if you make them both bend the same way - the way he's facing (right).

The punches were a little too fast and that meant that there was no time to ease in or out of them. An extra few frames on each punch would have helped.

When he steps forward the foot in the air flops too much. It wants to be only a little looser than when it's on the floor but in yours it was straight in line with the leg.

He also needs to step further forward so that the front knee locks out. At the moment he seems off balance and unnatural. This is another thing that would be helped by adding more frames per punch as he would have the time to step further forward.

That's all I can see that's wrong with the animation itself. Additional points would be:
-Make a stickman with more than one back joint - four or five is better.
-The arms of that stickman look too long.
-You didn't need to double post there at all. For times when more does need to be said, use the edit button.
-When you post you tend to type each sentance on a different line. It makes it harder to read. It's easier to use full stops and then only use line breaks for paragraphs or lists.
-Watch your spelling and grammar too.

On the bright side, you have improved since last time. Keep trying.

That's everything. I wonder if he'll read it.

Rival
08-12-2009, 10:36 AM
-Make a stickman with more than one back joint - four or five is better.


I usually use 2 to 3, mostly 3. Wth 4 or 5?

And you obviously do not know him well enough. Afcaurse he won't accept he's med beginner. Though miracles exist.

tballa33
08-12-2009, 10:49 AM
Can't deny the fact you've improven ALOT. Almost can't believe it's yours ._.

lol
u want the piv?
lmao
and zed i wont no more
lol
and
idc if im med beg here
im med beg on DD :p lol

pdeathz
08-12-2009, 05:58 PM
the punches were really to fast, and well yeah i would say med beg to

Rival
08-12-2009, 06:04 PM
Weren't you banned, Pdeathz?

tballa33
08-12-2009, 09:41 PM
Weren't you banned, Pdeathz?

lol
ur kinda getting a lil off topic
XD

Rival
08-13-2009, 04:04 AM
I don't ****ing care.

Avian
08-13-2009, 06:20 AM
You improved a lot.

Hey, it's this guy:



I'll give you a rank if you promise to accept it this time. Don't get angry. Don't flame. Accept the criticism, work out what it means, and apply it next time, ok?

If you highlight the invisitext below, you'll find my cc and ranking. By doing so you are acknowledging that you wish to receive my cc and rank. If you don't like it, it was your responsibility and you have no right to flame, understood? I just want to make sure, we're absolutely 100% clear on the no flaming here, right? Don't say I didn't warn you.

It was about med beginner if I give you the benefit of the doubt on gravity. I'm assuming you wanted slow motion for that last kick.

When he lands at the beginning, I dislike the way that each leg bends in opposite directions. It will probably look better if you make them both bend the same way - the way he's facing (right).

The punches were a little too fast and that meant that there was no time to ease in or out of them. An extra few frames on each punch would have helped.

When he steps forward the foot in the air flops too much. It wants to be only a little looser than when it's on the floor but in yours it was straight in line with the leg.

He also needs to step further forward so that the front knee locks out. At the moment he seems off balance and unnatural. This is another thing that would be helped by adding more frames per punch as he would have the time to step further forward.

That's all I can see that's wrong with the animation itself. Additional points would be:
-Make a stickman with more than one back joint - four or five is better.
-The arms of that stickman look too long.
-You didn't need to double post there at all. For times when more does need to be said, use the edit button.
-When you post you tend to type each sentance on a different line. It makes it harder to read. It's easier to use full stops and then only use line breaks for paragraphs or lists.
-Watch your spelling and grammar too.

On the bright side, you have improved since last time. Keep trying.

That's everything. I wonder if he'll read it.
it's invisible!

And now stop act like a giddy goat, tballa.

Rival
08-13-2009, 06:29 AM
He didn't actually this time. He accepted he's med beginner :S

walron
08-13-2009, 07:23 AM
hey If you wanna see my anim ill post it next time I post in this thread. I think it should be about med/high beg just give me the rank I dont really care just as long as I get better :D. Im new so I cant post URLs yet and the file is too big to fit on the page so Ill be back :)

walron
08-13-2009, 07:24 AM
Oh and I'd love any joints ( anyone pm me what that means because I stopped animating for a week and a half I've benn trying to concentrate so I forgot D:) and a mentor :D:D:D:D:D:D:D

tballa33
08-13-2009, 07:57 PM
Oh and I'd love any joints ( anyone pm me what that means because I stopped animating for a week and a half I've benn trying to concentrate so I forgot D:) and a mentor :D:D:D:D:D:D:D

umm what rank r u?

flayne
08-13-2009, 08:25 PM
wow thats pretty smooth for pivot, nice work ;)

pdeathz
08-14-2009, 01:20 AM
Weren't you banned, Pdeathz?

nope i have never been banned :S

Cronos
08-14-2009, 01:31 AM
hey If you wanna see my anim ill post it next time I post in this thread. I think it should be about med/high beg just give me the rank I dont really care just as long as I get better :D. Im new so I cant post URLs yet and the file is too big to fit on the page so Ill be back :)

Dont double post please. Also, can you make a new thread for your animations, or post it in the beginner section. Dont post them in this thread.

tballa33
08-14-2009, 09:12 AM
Dont double post please. Also, can you make a new thread for your animations, or post it in the beginner section. Dont post them in this thread.

umm yeah ill do that
xD
idk twhy though

Cronos
08-14-2009, 09:24 AM
No, i was talking to walron, you can continue to post your animations here. Its your thread.

You've improved alot by the way.

tballa33
08-29-2009, 09:10 AM
kk thanks
:P lmao

kidwiththeshoes
08-29-2009, 04:57 PM
That's everything. I wonder if he'll read it.

Zed, you're so helpful ^_^