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flayne
08-13-2009, 09:02 PM
http://www.truploader.com/view/111439
http://www.truploader.com/view/959292 (my FA/RHG demo, already in the flash portal)
http://www.truploader.com/view/461792 (this one i have done 3 weeks ago)
http://www.truploader.com/view/764706 (pretty old)
http://img10.imageshack.us/img10/880/gifimagevesp2.gif (http://img10.imageshack.us/i/gifimagevesp2.gif/) and this a gif image of my RHG character at fluidanims.com ;)

I hope u like em ;)

White Spiral
08-14-2009, 01:12 AM
On the first one add more frames to the smoke and animate it frame by frame for an enchanced effect.

It was really good up until the end. You should add more frames to that power up thingy so people have more time to grasp what happened.

Have the guy's arm raise to do the blast not teleport to the space.

Anticipation.

flayne
08-14-2009, 01:27 AM
lol i know, all of these are old, that first one's like the second oldest, the second i meant to do that rapid power up to show a sense of speed, surprise and inner madness, and the third i wanted to create a sense where the blast came in naturally with the movement of his arm, rather than to make it look laggy and slow (my personal opinion), ive mostly gotten past the anticipation problem, thanks for the advice :)

cakes
08-15-2009, 05:04 PM
Cool, the first one's explosion was a little quickly-done and to fast, and the second one you should add lines on the ground or in the background and make them blurry or do something to make it look like the stick man is actually moving, because to me it looks like he's just floating in place which when you think about it that way it looks really weird. Good job though~

flayne
08-16-2009, 09:30 AM
thanks, yeah i kind of forgot to put the line in the background lol, thanks for the advice and the explosions, i still have to work on lol, ;)

daneximuz
08-17-2009, 10:11 AM
The first one looks pretty good but the smoke disappeared too fast.

I like the second one a lot! It's epic. Nice job, but the power should have been a bit slower, maybe add more frames there.

dad_13
08-17-2009, 07:43 PM
jjajaj kind of cool, I'd like it. Even when the efect was to fast in the third one, I like it because it was really good developed. Kepp up the good work =)

flayne
08-18-2009, 11:15 PM
thanks guys, i shall keep all that advice in mind ;)

kyleism
08-20-2009, 09:30 PM
the one where the orange guy punts the blue guy made me laugh really hard! It could have been longer, but it definitely was better than animations which are way too long and repetitive