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Jousteh
04-04-2008, 03:34 PM
So yeah.

I started to animate it like 2 months ago and I ran out of ideas and then I took 1 month break of it >.<

And now I've decided to remake it.

Heres what I've got so far:

http://www.antiup.net/view.php?id=97912025183~Unchained_anim_intro.swf

I'll add the names of chars later + will fix the blue guys landing on the ground.

C&C

NCz
04-04-2008, 03:44 PM
without a V-cam or over-exaggeration most of the moves looked really really weak. The pause thing or the guys fall once the pause ended also looked really weird.

armygeidon
04-04-2008, 03:46 PM
Sweet. Yeah fix the guys landing... it didn't look right. But anyway, the punch was awsome, the blood looked cool. Keep anmating good animations.

Jousteh
04-04-2008, 03:48 PM
without a V-cam or over-exaggeration most of the moves looked really really weak. The pause thing or the guys fall once the pause ended also looked really weird.

Actually, I was thinking of adding a V-cam.

Thanks.

Strills
04-04-2008, 04:38 PM
The text is too fast.

It's hard to read it, before it goes away.

ITS NICE THO

Jousteh
04-04-2008, 04:49 PM
The text is too fast.

It's hard to read it, before it goes away.

ITS NICE THO

Read more books young boy, to improve your reading skills. :]

Okai. Later will fix that.

Thanks.

Drifts
04-04-2008, 05:32 PM
Read more books young boy, to improve your reading skills. :]

Okai. Later will fix that.

Thanks.

I second that...STRILLS!!! REad more books!!! lol nope just joking, i know you can't be bothered.

anyway, it was good, the background looked very good and the fighting does need a little bit more impact but it's getting interesting, keep it up

Ssjbryando
04-04-2008, 05:50 PM
The text is too fast.

It's hard to read it, before it goes away.

ITS NICE THO

Wow. text was perfect =P really perfect speed. unlike your animation :O lol jk. >_>

I liked it alot, don't see alot wrong with it. Fall could be betta I gues.

Jousteh
04-06-2008, 08:11 AM
I know Ssjb, about the fall. :]

Thanks for comments.

zawmbee
04-07-2008, 11:18 AM
that was amazing <3
the text was perfect, read everything, get some new eyes strill >_>
lol i love the idea and the concept of the freeze thing.
nice one hope it goes well :D

Jousteh
04-07-2008, 11:45 AM
that was amazing <3
the text was perfect, read everything, get some new eyes strill >_>
lol i love the idea and the concept of the freeze thing.
nice one hope it goes well :D

Thanks.
I hope it will go out well too. :]

.Aklemo.
04-07-2008, 01:09 PM
Thanks.
I hope it will go out well too. :]

Lol, isn't that obvious for any animator?

Jousteh
04-07-2008, 01:11 PM
I have seen ones who give a **ck about how good the anim is turning out.
Lol.

mraznbuddy
04-07-2008, 04:38 PM
aw i liked the older intro better :c
its no problem though, im still looking forward to it :D

neon-drane
04-07-2008, 04:46 PM
Very nice intro!

The very movements were pretty cool! though when the animation started it kinda seemed a bit too slow compared to the song, but still i'm assuming that its going to kick up a bit over time! STILL! very nice, can't wait to see the final product :'D!

Kitsune
04-07-2008, 09:18 PM
I agree that a V-Cam is needed here, and to compliment the Invert, maybe a blur. Overall it looks great so far. The menu is aesthetically pleasing, but the introtext is a bit fast.