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bowstick
04-06-2008, 08:41 AM
wel...ive been REALLY REALLY busy with school and just threwe these together yesterday.

the first is not finishded

the second one is just kinda stupid

http://www.*************/open/1207611096



http://www.*************/open/1207611075

Shanto
04-06-2008, 08:42 AM
Whoa, love them, man.

bowstick
04-06-2008, 09:04 AM
thanks....any more comments?

supranova
04-06-2008, 12:02 PM
There both pretty cool, all I can say is to try to put in some more particles. (like in that trail of blue/green smoke)

bacon man
04-06-2008, 07:07 PM
I really liked the first one. The beam thing was cool.

armygeidon
04-06-2008, 08:16 PM
I thought the beam should have been particalized[if thats a real word.]. Otherwise, I liked the second one better.

Karthago
04-07-2008, 01:58 PM
both of them dont work for me... could you upload anywhere else again please

bowstick
04-07-2008, 07:05 PM
****fixed link****

Kitsune
04-07-2008, 07:44 PM
The first one is unfair how it just stops with particlization. That is the only thing holding that back. MAYBE faster with the ball and less resizing with the stickfigure, but it's all well done.

The second one I liked. It was neat and funny. Add more maybe and make more.

bowstick
04-07-2008, 07:47 PM
what exactly do you mean by unfair..
did the first one resize a lot....because to me it does just a tad..when he recovers from the jump

thanks for the comments

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Kitsune
04-07-2008, 07:50 PM
what exactly do you mean by unfair..
did the first one resize a lot....because to me it does just a tad..when he recovers from the jump

thanks for the comments

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That's what I mean about when he resized. By unfair, I mean unfair to the rest of your work. That blanking out on particles just demolished the effect. You just need to finish details like that next time, because unfinished work is always hard to C&C.