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Jet
04-06-2008, 08:54 AM
My first ever EZtoon :)

For my first try is it pretty good?

http://pivothost.org/public/pbserver1/1207545653.gif

ari904fx
04-06-2008, 10:51 AM
like i said on Pivot Stories

its good, but the trigger could have been more exciting

Jet
04-06-2008, 11:42 PM
trigger?
its mah first time ^.^
im lieking.

Jet
04-10-2008, 01:28 PM
...umm...bumpmuch?

god...post, people...

tgayfox
04-10-2008, 04:15 PM
The explosion expands real slowly at first but then branches off pretty fast. I don't like the disappearing effect of the explosion at the end, it's to fast. It's better than my first explosion, and it was my 12th animation. Nice job.

Jet
04-11-2008, 07:16 PM
okay taaaaa.
im making another.

LN3uq
04-11-2008, 07:21 PM
It expanded too slowly at first, so it didn't look like there was much force behind the exlopsion. Besides that, it was kind of wobbly, but it's very good for your first easytoon, much better than mine.

fidex
04-13-2008, 10:42 AM
its pretty good but it was kinda slow.
it shoulda either expanded slow like u started it or fast like u ended it.
it just didnt look right to me.

Jet
04-17-2008, 04:24 AM
ill add another few xplosions that i amde, going up from first made to my most recent. that on ewas my first.
<3<3<3

dawG
04-17-2008, 12:32 PM
I liked it, maybe like some of the guys said, it expand a little slow.
But anyway i thought it was nice.

^^

Jet
04-17-2008, 12:33 PM
Thaks Mynx <3
ILY ALL!

Automaton
04-19-2008, 09:22 PM
yeah and to make it fade away, start to make holes in the smoke starting from the bottom center and then more and more that join together until eventually everything disappears.

Jet
04-20-2008, 04:00 AM
i have on mah other thread.
LOOK FOR JET!
xxxxxxxxx <3

Jackanack
04-25-2008, 05:32 PM
Good for first.

Jackanack
04-25-2008, 05:33 PM
Good for a first!