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09-09-2009, 08:26 PM
...of sorts, just a 30-minute-to-make test.
C&C please

lolg2g noaw.

09-10-2009, 12:44 AM
lol, i liked it :P
but you should've made him like on some kind of rolling thing
like this:http://images.encarta.msn.com/xrefmedia/sharemed/targets/images/pho/t628/T628871A.jpg
you know, pople keep coming, and he sits there bam! bam! bam!

sorry if i'm unclear...
good job though :3

09-10-2009, 12:48 AM
Looks very tweened D:
Plus, the shading on the ban hammar looks weird D:
Eh, Prty good, though, I guess. =/

09-10-2009, 03:22 AM
Seemed to have lack of force, easing wasn't very good. Blood was a little too much, It does look sorta tweened actually. Hammer looked more like a... screwed up ice-cream bar or something. When the hammer hit him, his head stretched, it should have exploded or something after that, but it went back to normal, then the next few frames were very confusing :/
Keep practicing, you'll get better.

09-10-2009, 05:36 AM
It was alright. The arms were confusing. I couldn't tell which arm was the left and which was the right. They seemed to switch places.

It would also probably look better if he was smashed, when the recoil of the first hit smashes the stick instead of just laying like that haha. But not bad.

09-10-2009, 09:00 AM
It's a little hard not to rush it when your mom starts yelling at you to get off >.>

I suppose I shoulda took my brothers advice and worked on it later, but who knows when I coulda used the home computer next :\