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Cronos
09-12-2009, 02:25 AM
Yeah, first every explosion in flash.

http://www.truploader.com/view/719167

Comments please.

Also, I made this awhile ago, pretty scabby but yeah. I honestly have no idea why I added a reflection to this one.

http://www.truploader.com/view/672372

Hope you guys comment. Thanks.

fla5hy
09-12-2009, 03:20 AM
wow ! ... great Animation ... love both (:

Cronos
09-12-2009, 03:33 AM
Thanks mate. :3

N T
09-12-2009, 04:31 AM
Really good dood. Keep it up

Avian
09-12-2009, 05:38 AM
The first one is really good.
I think he shouldn't just stay in the same vertical position during the second part of the flip.

lincoln10
09-12-2009, 06:15 AM
really good:Smile:

MaxZ
09-12-2009, 06:17 AM
Mirror masking makes everything look good :/

alcaknight
09-12-2009, 09:57 AM
I like the way the explosion dissapated, but there could have been at least some particles. :/

Nice job, though. :3

Kieran.
09-12-2009, 11:56 AM
You have "the talent".

1lasthero
09-12-2009, 12:35 PM
Both of them are pretty good. Btw how long have you been animating for?

Arch-Angel
09-12-2009, 01:33 PM
The second was alright. Short and very very basic though. The flips should haven't just been rotated in mid air and then moved, but it's okay I guess.

The explosion was horrible :/
Explosions are a vast amount of colors, and they don't stop and then explode again (unless it's more than one bomb. In your case, it didn't look like it). You need particles, smoke, and fire. Try to make a tremor effct as well and maybe a slight blur to show strength.

Cronos
09-12-2009, 05:49 PM
Thank you everyone for your comments.

Arch-Angel: Thank you, finally someone who gave me some proper feedback.

With the explosion, how would you go about adding fire? I was also going to add particles like little stones, but the layers were being a bitch and I got too annoyed with it.

Thankyou :3

Vile.
09-12-2009, 06:52 PM
Shade the smoke and add some sort of firey effect or something.

Miccool
09-12-2009, 08:37 PM
Explosion looked pretty decent to me... smooth...

Cronos
09-12-2009, 08:50 PM
Thanks. Also, out of interest, how long did the explosion at the beginning of CBC2 take you? Its the best I have ever seen in Flash.

Miccool
09-12-2009, 09:02 PM
umm.. don't really remember, lol. Maybe an hour? dunno

Cronos
09-12-2009, 09:06 PM
Well dam, I cant imagine that taking less than 5 hours.

insanesk8er!!
09-13-2009, 12:39 AM
The explosion would have been better if it wasn't just smoke
100th post! yay

Cronos
09-13-2009, 05:45 AM
Thanks, im working on that.

Also, screw this one, check out my second ever explosion.

http://www.stickpageportal.com/forums/showthread.php?p=1592139#post1592139