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cronose
04-06-2008, 09:08 PM
He made an animation.
http://aaa.antiup.net/view.php?id=43213495710battle%20thing.swf


Longest animation I've made in a WHILE.

ferganim
04-07-2008, 06:52 AM
Nice effects. Added a professional polish to it, though the sticks were a tad small. V-cam?

Bonk
04-07-2008, 07:13 AM
No, I'm sorry, it was bad.

No offence, but there was little movement, no more than 2 seconds of straight fighting at any time, too many words and scene changes, and too small sticks.

I think you were aiming big, but it went better in your head.

Raise the framerate, it looks like it is at 12. Makes sticks bigger as well, and you'll improve more rapidly.

cronose
04-07-2008, 03:48 PM
No, I'm sorry, it was bad.
duh. lol.
No offence, but there was little movement, no more than 2 seconds of straight fighting at any time, too many words and scene changes, and too small sticks.
Sorry if I sound rude or something, but you stated the obvious
I think you were aiming big, but it went better in your head.
not really, animated at around 1am and did it out of boredom
Raise the framerate, it looks like it is at 12. Makes sticks bigger as well, and you'll improve more rapidly.animated at 15FPS. My style. I'm going to start doing more full body.

Sorry if I sounded like a jerk. I do appreciate ou taking your time to tell me your thoughts.

Omega
04-07-2008, 04:03 PM
So, are you staying with Flash now?

Those explosions were really pivoty. Add particles.

kinto
04-07-2008, 04:58 PM
Yea you are teh sucketh now. Too much Gaylo 3 for joo :D.

cronose
04-07-2008, 06:18 PM
yah. I dislike pivot now. I've been doing other things in flash.
This isn't my best. or is it? No, it isn't.

bowstick
04-07-2008, 06:50 PM
nah i liked your "other stuff"

sticks werent redrawn that well...(you can really only tell when zoomed in )

try not to leave again ok....

Msn?
AIM?

kinto
04-07-2008, 07:02 PM
I know it but I no give you it :D.

bowstick
04-07-2008, 07:49 PM
awww....ok.




back to the thread....(sorry demi...i mean cronose?..)

Kitsune
04-07-2008, 07:53 PM
The particles were a bit too orderly. You need some particles coming out from the back and center of the explosion. Not the whole thing reaching out to the edge of it's peak and disappearing in an orderly line. Smoke and particles do not work like that and don't look good in a style.

Some movements needed easing and smoothing. It's overall a filter-whore animation that's well done and deserves more than 10 comments.

cronose
04-08-2008, 09:28 PM
Not really a filter whore. I was mainly just making something out of boredom, and using a few tricks I learned. I think the white guys movements were the best and most smoothed. I also liked my little pipe moving thing.