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ragingrasengan
04-07-2008, 04:20 PM
School giving us a week break, so i started this, its gna be something big, probably my longest anim yet. So far i think its ok, anything i can fix ?

http://www.antiup.net/view.php?id=87616086283Bigfight.swf

armygeidon
04-07-2008, 04:31 PM
Awsome. Can't wait for the finished proect to come out. Keep it up man.

Index
04-07-2008, 05:15 PM
Looks pretty cool, it's awesome what you've done with the preloader.

Kitsune
04-07-2008, 07:48 PM
For now, it's too little to judge. Make more, and I'll post more.

For now:
-You only have a week. take off the heads to save time and add them later just to help your work flow be sufficient.
-Tidy up the brushes when you finish the duration. It looks a bit sloppy.
-There's no easing on some motions. Especially the final jump out of the ground move. The absence of easing there is so flagrant it brought the rest of the animation down in my opinion. On impact while going up, you may want to just have an impact, and make everything move slower as you go along, and have gravity take it.

Great job so far, and I hope you finish and edit it to be another great stick film.