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fla5hy
09-29-2009, 10:04 AM
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alcaknight
09-29-2009, 04:09 PM
What a big explosion.

Couldn't really see anything wrong with it, but not that exciting.

Tidus
09-29-2009, 04:37 PM
What a big explosion.

Couldn't really see anything wrong with it, but not that exciting.
You are Squall.
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Kitsune
09-29-2009, 05:05 PM
That was a good simple sufficient explosion.

I found 1 problem that sort of bothers me though.

During your explosion right as the tips get off the ends of the pointed clouds of smoke the made up your explosion, your central cloud comes back in to the center. I used to do this as well. The point of an explosion is that a blast is forcing smoke and fire AWAY from the bomb. Nothing should force any smoke back inward in all directions (unless it's a mushroom cloud, which is completely different anyway) because if you think about it its illogical. Your cloud doesn't go back as a whole, just the front part of it, but that makes it look like the whole thing's going back. So my recommendation is to keep it going at an eased speed outward from the blast and dissipate it as it goes out until it's nothing OR you can have wind take the cloud away OR you can tween SECTIONS of the explosion cloud so that it has activity going outward and you can fade it out. if you know other ways to get rid of smoke please tell me. I'm trying to figute that one out for myself. :/

Keep practicing!