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Lag
04-08-2008, 12:04 PM
http://antiup.net/view.php?id=50217844867dodge%20this.swf

Short. Nearly the only thing I have animated in the past days. Or past Week. Or weeks. My memory sucks.

Aycaramba
04-08-2008, 12:30 PM
No dick?
It was good.

Tolin
04-08-2008, 03:39 PM
Floor got smashed a little to early, if you get what I mean. The block was like hitting on the dude, and the floor gets crushed pretty far from the block.
But that could maybe be because the blocks weight..?
You are putting details like hair and such, and that makes it look good.

Spitzer
04-08-2008, 03:50 PM
Nuck ?

Lag
04-08-2008, 03:50 PM
Thanks.
Thanks.
The floor should actually shatter farther than that, I mean it is a big block of pwning stone. And it just should. I think.
hair actuallly came liek, an excuse not to draw the face.
Thanks.

kinto
04-08-2008, 03:52 PM
The hand ****s up and the back swing. I know you were making it look like it was moving away but it just ended up looking like a tentacle. He has no pee-pee.

Nhazul
04-08-2008, 04:00 PM
Not bad, its pretty cool how the ground breaks, why he be naked?

Lag
04-08-2008, 04:07 PM
Thanks. I always have probs with making that look semi-real(the hand).
Why should he have a peniz, if he is a freak? =p

Aycaramba
04-08-2008, 04:14 PM
Because even freaks have penises.

NCz
04-08-2008, 04:42 PM
Thanks. I always have probs with making that look semi-real(the hand).
Why should he have a peniz, if he is a freak? =p

This question goes against all common sense.

Animation was awesome, but taking his robe thing off was kinda weird. He should've had some awesome muscle shirt or something else. Shorts at least.

Kitsune
04-08-2008, 04:48 PM
Too Short!!!

If you make it longer, it's a sure spot in my collab! ;)

That's the only thing I have to say. It's great!

Omega
04-08-2008, 05:38 PM
It's alright. The box smash was pretty cool.

I'd like to see you move back into stickfigures though.

Opted
04-08-2008, 06:12 PM
Some proportion issues there.

To be honest, I wasn't sure what the person was doing until I read kinto's post.
I'm assuming you wanted him to change to the side but it doesn't work because his feat are at the same "ground level".

Technically one of them should be more far back then the other, to kind of
portray the pivoting/swinging motion.

The height kind of messes up the on how you view it too,
because if the person was swinging back, he wouldn't actually be that "short".

Basically think more 3-D. But that's of course assuming you wanted him
to swing back, which I could be wrong on. =/

But otherwise it's really smoothly animated and has a kind of cool Eztoon
feel. (especially with the Smash part)

Congrats on the work in flash. I, personally, can only do some in Eztoon.

bacon man
04-08-2008, 07:19 PM
Lol, everyone asks the same question. :)

I liked it, the big block was funny.

Lag
04-09-2008, 10:20 AM
Thank you for comments.

Omega, I seem to start sucking at sticfigures, fullbody goes better for me, or so it seems. Thanks.

Opted, thanks, I always have problems and unnerving proportion fuckages. I see, I'll keep that in mind.