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zer0gravity
10-10-2009, 12:28 AM
hi. just made this animation. i got EZ toons yesterday so im new. tell me what you think and post replies on how i can improve. thanks.


http://img43.imageshack.us/img43/2050/sticknbrick.gif

Frodomoj
10-10-2009, 10:37 AM
Hey there. For what's presumably one of your first animations, this isn't bad, but you need to work on the stiffness of your figures. Use more frames and less noticeable movements to make everything flow and then your stuff will be more enjoyable to watch.
Also, carry on those particle dispersions for a few more frames. To me it seems like they're disappearing altogether far too quickly.
Having said that, you used some good effects like that spin when the dude was in the air. Good luck and continue animating! :]

ruanlmaa
10-10-2009, 01:58 PM
good efects and good easyng...

zer0gravity
10-10-2009, 04:47 PM
Sweet Thanks!!!!

alexkosirev
10-15-2009, 01:28 PM
Cool anim. You good.

Vendetta
10-16-2009, 05:37 PM
very good, just work on making it more smooth and fluid