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cronose
04-09-2008, 12:51 AM
http://www.swfup.com/file/182509

A little short I'm working on. I absolutely love the red sticks movements, except for the last landing.
Best anim by me happy loopa doopa doo?

mraznbuddy
04-09-2008, 01:44 AM
it was actually pretty good.
some things that troubled me was when the white stick pushed the black one, it didnt flow well together with the kick.
also the tree in the background bugged me when the red stick appeared and started to move. It sort of blened in with it and made it difficult to see what was happening.

besides those two i thought it was great. nice style

cronose
04-09-2008, 01:45 AM
Is your pc brightness down or something? I can see the red stick moving just fine.

Aycaramba
04-10-2008, 12:59 AM
Lul.
Stickskeleton.
It was good.
Continue.

NubbyGG
04-12-2008, 03:42 AM
I liked when the dude turned into a skeleton that was really good effects

Jousteh
04-12-2008, 04:46 AM
I liked it too but the movements lacked force in my opinion.

rx00worth
04-13-2008, 02:53 AM
the red guy seems so small

and that he doesnt jump high, not even like 30cm

(and i know that it was since he was far in the background, still is small and small jump)

STUFF
04-13-2008, 08:51 AM
Didn't look much like a kick, it seemed like the white stick speed jumped to the black, placed his foot behind the black stick's foot and shoved.

The rest was alright, but I suggest you up your brush smoothness by 5.

New Generation
04-13-2008, 10:02 AM
I guess it wasn't that bad, but you need to work on your special effects and easing too. Good luck.