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Stormwalker
04-09-2008, 07:56 AM
Heres a project i have started , it goes ok for now , but i need to know what you think , and should i continue / finish it. I will make episodes of course , if it will be good enough.

http://uploaded.pivothost.org/stormwalker/OP15o6.gif

SRC
04-09-2008, 08:36 AM
that was awesome... i think you should continue it because i've yet to see a good pivot action series (this looks like it's action)

Stormwalker
04-09-2008, 10:08 AM
Thanks , any more?

sheezy2
04-09-2008, 11:11 AM
it was ammaaziiizzzziiizzingzznggg!!! i dont think ur low beeg u could be med or high beg easily

EDIT: i was a bit exagurating lol bbut there was a part where he throws the grenade he fidgets and after that its a bit stiff

Stormwalker
04-09-2008, 11:18 AM
lol that low beg stuff is a joke , im around med-inter :D

joeyodaguy
04-09-2008, 11:33 AM
That was COOL! You should make more. It was brilliant.

sheezy2
04-09-2008, 11:34 AM
no i dont think inter yet probably border but not med inter yet

Stormwalker
04-09-2008, 11:37 AM
Have you actualy seen my other animations ? :D

Kaas
04-09-2008, 11:58 AM
no i dont think inter yet probably border but not med inter yet

I don't know why but for some reason, I can't completely fathom, you're not one to judge or rank the person in question. But hay, he needs an opinion so badly.
I personally don't have an opinion, I'm a sheep.

Doomdooer
04-09-2008, 12:00 PM
Looks fine.
I disliked the large amount of doubleframing during the drop and grenade throw.
The explosion looked ok.
The shotgun cock looked off.

Stormwalker
04-09-2008, 12:14 PM
thanks , :D lol Kaas. Dod, there was so much Double Framin during the drop cause it was too fast on its own. But thanks , so i guess that means , continue?

Doomdooer
04-09-2008, 12:33 PM
Yeeeeaaaaap .

Stormwalker
04-09-2008, 02:58 PM
Ty <3 btw just fixed , or atleast tryed to fix that shotgun load. And the explosions is a bit better now , and a bit shit added overall. Ty for the C&C and the support.

Chimaera
04-09-2008, 03:06 PM
It looks almost exactly like Berts DD 6 or 5 entry.

Still, pretty hot.

Stormwalker
04-09-2008, 03:13 PM
heh lol . might be , but looks way better now , and differnet. I knew you'd comment :D <3

=Rock=
04-09-2008, 10:38 PM
i couldnt tell what really happened. I had to watch it five times before I got it.

Make throw more obiouse, Make the grenade a bit more obviouse please, like maybe a grey canister/tube with a red dot on top, and at the end did the building blow up or did the guy slam into it?

the jump part was great, but it seemed the string was dangling in mid air and he like appears and disapears in front of the screen before he goes through the viewpoint (while jumping off building)


Great Job! If you want my rating here it is :: (7->8/10)

Stormwalker
04-09-2008, 11:55 PM
The string was going fast it wont go slow when he is falling off a roof. And how much obvious can it get , i cant loose the speed.

Kitsune
04-10-2008, 12:13 AM
Heres a project i have started , it goes ok for now , but i need to know what you think , and should i continue / finish it. I will make episodes of course , if it will be good enough.

http://uploaded.pivothost.org/stormwalker/OP15o6.gif

You would be so good in easytoon or flash.

Keep making these things and setting examples for pivfags everywar!

:P

MrCheesy
04-10-2008, 03:09 AM
Great, didn't like the double framing though....
Liked the explosion very much...
Defiantly worth continuing....
You have inspired me to do a series like this now :P

Dragonkof
04-10-2008, 04:31 AM
did he throw a brick into the vent?

Kaas
04-10-2008, 05:11 AM
did he throw a brick into the vent?

Yep an exploding brick. Durrr...

Dragonkof
04-10-2008, 05:18 AM
then what.... oh my god. (looks at the brick wall next to me.)

Kaas
04-10-2008, 05:24 AM
then what.... oh my god. (looks at the brick wall next to me.)

Good thing you're not a stickfigure, or are you?

x-file
04-10-2008, 06:15 AM
wow. thats a awsum animaeshun.
continue?

Stormwalker
04-10-2008, 09:31 AM
yeh Drag, he was building a house of bricks in the vent! And can you loose the habit of spamming in threads?