View Full Version : My first posted flash!

10-24-2009, 03:36 AM

Well i've been avoiding posting my animations and have been practicing instead. I'm getting better but i'm still a noob, and i know my clip has flaws in comparison with the pros. Watch the 4 second video if u wish and if u want gimme CONSTRUCTIVE criticism and enjoy.

~Heres d link~
(just add the www)
Bye Bye!

10-24-2009, 06:30 AM
alright first of all, dont post on youtube, the quality sucks. post here:
as for the animation itself, it lacked some force. The trail was ok, not great, and it looked like there wasnt much gravity. Overall tho, it wasnt bad for a first. keep tryin!