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megaanims
10-28-2009, 05:40 PM
http://pivotup.com/files/qnxvi3ja.gif
I was never good to begin with.
http://pivotup.com/files/hez97tw5.gif
tried something new will continue it later.
http://pivotup.com/files/h8g079wp.gif
I was going for that smooth style I see these days.

demonkilo
10-28-2009, 08:36 PM
Those are really well done! The jump was a little fast, but thats a simple fix. Your movements are nice and you ease fairly nice. Overall good job :)

megaanims
10-28-2009, 10:35 PM
thanks ,any other comments?

Zed
10-29-2009, 03:54 AM
A rusty but? That must be painful.

On the top one, I don't think he bent down far enough before the jump to get that sort of speed up. When he turned around after it, it was too quick and needed more easing into the next bit of movement.

On the second one, the double framing seemed really out of place and everything needed more anticipation.

On the third one, the head needed a lot more anticipation at the start and the arm movements were choppy and uneased on the last bit.

Overall, yeah, you've gotten quite rusty. Especially the easing. Your movements aren't bad in general though.

megaanims
10-29-2009, 03:58 AM
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continued.

poppetje3D
10-29-2009, 07:23 AM
There is no rusty , there is good or bad.

I don't like your style , Its to fast and it makes it looks stiff.
That's all that I wanted to say.

megaanims
10-29-2009, 07:30 AM
I respect your opinion poppet since you're my good friend but that's my style man.