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Scorpioxxx
11-07-2009, 08:46 AM
http://darrenargo.deviantart.com/art/Getting-back-into-this-142793859

Usual, opened flash, made something short thats not all that entertaining and covered in pointless extras yet being posted anyway.

Tawnik
11-07-2009, 08:49 AM
Actually it was pretty good, apart from the last kick that lacked
-gravity
-easing
-timing
-force
-and the feel to it

Scorpioxxx
11-07-2009, 08:54 AM
Actually it was pretty good, apart from the last kick that lacked
-gravity
-easing
-timing
-force
-and the feel to it

Yea, I'll make a note to work on kicks, I don't think I made a good kick animation, ever. Thanks.

Tawnik
11-07-2009, 09:06 AM
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=msbTN7YWlBg
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=lBMA2wWuqh8&feature=related

Both were leaning back when kicking, your stick is leaning forward, thats the biggest mistake that you made ;) stand up and try kicking yourself =) record it if you dont feel like you can tell whether you're leaning forward or backward.

Sliced to piezez
11-07-2009, 09:07 AM
Nice flash... Don't know anything that was wrong in it.

Scorpioxxx
11-07-2009, 09:34 AM
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=msbTN7YWlBg
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=lBMA2wWuqh8&feature=related

Both were leaning back when kicking, your stick is leaning forward, thats the biggest mistake that you made ;) stand up and try kicking yourself =) record it if you dont feel like you can tell whether you're leaning forward or backward.

I did martial arts, oh 2 years back, and I remember being told I lean into kicks to much and that that affecting my landing/balance.

Zofar
11-08-2009, 09:14 AM
Was a nice animation. Very smooth, though the last kick is about 1/8 of a second long xD

Miccool
11-08-2009, 07:35 PM
A bit stiff.. otherwise cool

Scorpioxxx
11-09-2009, 12:51 PM
A bit stiff.. otherwise cool

Thanks, but how do I make it not stiff? I'm kinda buggered on figuring that out.

Arshokun
11-10-2009, 11:56 AM
I really liked that animation dude ^^, since im new on to Flash, it was pretty good in my opinion, congrats!

Draunia05
11-10-2009, 01:12 PM
Very Nice Short, nice smooth animating, though I do agree with Tawnik, that last kick is Lacking.

Miccool
11-11-2009, 08:09 AM
Thanks, but how do I make it not stiff? I'm kinda buggered on figuring that out.

What I try to do is to always keep every ligament moving every frame, even if it's only a little bit.. dk, if it will help you though, but it certainly helps me.

4RR0W
11-15-2009, 07:43 AM
Nice anim, very smooth, but i think the body and the shadow were out of sync.

Scorpioxxx
11-15-2009, 08:22 AM
Nice anim, very smooth, but i think the body and the shadow were out of sync.

They go out of sync if you have a very slow computer and/or are using IE as I found out, the shadow skips ahead but if you play it from your desktop it shouldn't.