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mactwok
04-11-2008, 03:03 PM
Plz I need you to rate these anims. Also C&C too.
Here are the links:
NB:All stks are by me except the bursts, the line of smoke and the pistol.
http://i182.photobucket.com/albums/x141/Jit_13/walking-1.gif

http://i182.photobucket.com/albums/x141/Jit_13/running.gif

http://i182.photobucket.com/albums/x141/Jit_13/jumping.gif

http://i182.photobucket.com/albums/x141/Jit_13/football.gif

http://i182.photobucket.com/albums/x141/Jit_13/gunning.gif

Thanx for lookin':Happy:

power fuse0
04-11-2008, 03:25 PM
The walking the legs are stiff and its a little choppy
The running is really choppy and really odd i dont like it
The jumping one. The first jump was off. waaaay off. The backflip was kinda nice but unrealistic. & the third just had not physics.

The rest seem choppy with bad movements.
Like add just a few key frames and some nice movements on the last one. and it will be good. Like really good.
keep working on them

mactwok
04-11-2008, 03:51 PM
Thank you for the critisism, I tried real hard though...

power fuse0
04-11-2008, 04:47 PM
Thank you for the critisism, I tried real hard though...

Yeah man
They're good
Improovemants can be made though :)

Kitsune
04-11-2008, 05:10 PM
Walk needs to unstraighten the back

Run less wobbly and better physics

GREAT blood for pivot, and even for flash. The last one was best.

There are no pros in pivot, just people who can't upgrade to Flash.

lol

mactwok
04-12-2008, 03:11 AM
Could you give me some tips?

zawmbee
04-12-2008, 06:25 AM
its too unrealistic, the way he bops up and just slouches, but keep trying i guess.

Jet
04-12-2008, 08:49 AM
the last one had VERY good movements, if you improved the generalness of it it would be like, high begginer.

zawmbee
04-12-2008, 12:25 PM
also thats doodsy's blood, give him credit

sss
04-12-2008, 12:38 PM
the last one had VERY good movements, if you improved the generalness of it it would be like, high begginer.

umm no .

Mantha
04-12-2008, 12:41 PM
sss, why don't you post an argument that could support your opinion?

sss
04-12-2008, 12:43 PM
well,everyone were giving him good comments ,and i thought...those anims doesent look so good to me...maybe its my pc so i didint say anything

mactwok
04-13-2008, 09:11 AM
also thats doodsy's blood, give him credit

Umm, those are mine. I used lines and cicles. Look closely.

zawmbee
04-13-2008, 09:12 AM
no thats his blood from his default bashing, i asked him

mactwok
04-13-2008, 09:23 AM
No its not, honestly.

sss
04-13-2008, 01:27 PM
liar liar pants on fire

Darc
04-13-2008, 07:23 PM
Even if it was his, he didn't use it right, the blood disappeared way too fast, try to make it splat on the ground, or don't even use blood until you're better.

Some one bad at animating usually makes bad blood, because they usually don't know physics too well. That blood was pretty good, but again, it disappeared too fast.

kinto
04-13-2008, 07:26 PM
sss, why don't you post an argument that could support your opinion?

Because he's a stupid ****. The animations seemed very odd, I mean, you wouldn't take a step, then take a step, then take a step. It would make you look retarded. Try and have the other leg moving slightly forward even before the other leg has hit the ground.

=Rock=
04-13-2008, 07:57 PM
Because he's a stupid ****. The animations seemed very odd, I mean, you wouldn't take a step, then take a step, then take a step. It would make you look retarded. Try and have the other leg moving slightly forward even before the other leg has hit the ground.


what's wrong with everyone

yea for some reason my pc always shows teh gif images like chopped in half or something. the top would be likfe faster than the lower half, it's really weird.

and omg the head looks retarded sorry.

sss
04-14-2008, 07:20 AM
Because he's a stupid ****. The animations seemed very odd, I mean, you wouldn't take a step, then take a step, then take a step. It would make you look retarded. Try and have the other leg moving slightly forward even before the other leg has hit the ground.

suck it

sizzle
04-15-2008, 03:18 PM
im not a pro but that's awsome

Dragonkof
04-16-2008, 12:33 AM
There are no pros in pivot, just people who can't upgrade to Flash.
i have flash. Im just shit at it.