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TimeToPerish
12-04-2009, 01:13 PM
Welcome to my thread! If by any case you stop by for a coffe, make sure you also leave a commentary to help me improve each time more and more.

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Newests are always on top and on img code.

http://pivotup.com/files/a9pfrbzg.gif
Lovelly, the name is Smooth Prescotness because the base is prescot's, and the animation itself is shmoof.

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Flying Combos

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Fast action

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CCC Failed

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Mr. Pivad Tribute

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Gorgeous frontflip

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Failed anim

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Runnin Dude

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Shaolin Monk

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Monk Moves

Old

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Back to Black

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Spy Attack

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Walk to run

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Failed Rawr Clan Entry {.PIV}

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Über Default

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Free Run

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Orange World (Rust)

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Rust Breaker

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IGC (InGenerality Collab Entry)

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Bad Luck Runner

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Joint With Pilow

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The Head Hunter

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Centered Origin

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Run Loop

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Walking Test

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Freak


Credits:
Prescot
Bhari
TRGG
Picto
Ipwnall
Droidz[/center]

Zed
12-04-2009, 01:33 PM
Flying combos is a .piv file, as is runnin dude. Not sure if that was a mistake, but I couldn't be bothered to download atm.

As the arms come to a stop when he's upside down in Fast action, I think the spacing was still a little heavy right at the end. Either he kept moving for a few too many frames for the easing to work properly or the easing just didn't take the speed down far enough, but it didn't quite look right. The rest of that one's a nice little bit of momentum usage. I like it.

On ccc failed it was a bit too stiff. I can't be more specific because it was fairly stiff everywhere. I think it would benefit from more than one back joint in your sticks. There wasn't enough bending, and consequently not enough downforce, on the red guy before the jump. It made that bit look a bit choppy. Not enough easing on the trampoline either.

Gorgeous Frontflip: I've mentioned your running before. Again, the downforce wasn't enough. You need to bend down much more before a jump or it doesn't look right. I'd say you could spend a few more frames on the landing too to absorb and ease out of the impact more.

With Shaolin Monk, I think he moved too far and too fast with each stroke in the water but otherwise it was nice.

I think Monk Moves was missing a frame or two to get the movement looking right to the eye, but it was ok.

Overall, pretty nice, just work on loosening up a bit more, especially before jumps. There was quite a bit there so I left out compliments and went straight to what can be improved, but I would certainly have praised some of it had I had the time.

poppetje3D
12-04-2009, 02:15 PM
hey I saw you on DD.

Wanna joint or pivot war?

MonsterBreath12
12-04-2009, 07:10 PM
Pretty much what zed said. So if your aiming for realism just listen to what zed says.

Teriyakid
12-04-2009, 07:44 PM
Dude... I LOVE this guys style... I wanna animate like him lol...
Same with this other guy by the name of Dozx or something like that O.o?
Doz ( I think ) and Perish are my idols in animating

AND NO I'M NOT SUCKING UP, I JUST LIKE THIS GUYS ANIMATIONS

Mark
12-04-2009, 07:53 PM
I wanna animate like this guy too........Not to fast not to slow.......very smoothed.....keeps the rythem goin......

Thats the style I wanna adapt into

TimeToPerish
12-05-2009, 07:09 AM
Thank you guys, this makes me proud of being an animator. :333
I'm so happy and motivated now.

Vorpal
12-09-2009, 11:57 PM
Dude... I LOVE this guys style... I wanna animate like him lol...
Same with this other guy by the name of Dozx or something like that O.o?
Doz ( I think ) and Perish are my idols in animating

AND NO I'M NOT SUCKING UP, I JUST LIKE THIS GUYS ANIMATIONS

Yeah, a lot of people wanted to now everyone does. That's why I really don't like the style, A lot of people do it so there isn't any originality in it all.

Cronos
12-10-2009, 01:27 AM
Hey TTP, you finally came to spp.

megaanims
12-12-2009, 07:53 PM
Hey TTP, you finally came to spp.
I was gonna say the same thing.

aakash77
12-15-2009, 03:14 AM
it might be unoriginal but i still like it coz it looks awesome