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(=-ice-=)
04-13-2008, 09:53 AM
Hi, I'm new to StickPage and I only got Flash yesterday.
But anyway here it is!
My first Flash.

swfcabin(Dot)com/open/1208092222

Sorry, apparantly I need 20 posts for a direct URL.
(Put a . where it says '(Dot)')

I know it's a bit basic.
Please comment on it and say what I can improve on (etc.) !

:Smile:

Aycaramba
04-13-2008, 10:33 AM
http://*************/open/1208092222



It was ok. Very good for a first.

Shanto
04-13-2008, 10:38 AM
Better then what I can do already.

Good job.

New Generation
04-13-2008, 10:46 AM
I can see you are already practicing particles and using high fps. Good :P

Not bad but I think you might want to post that in the beginners section for now. Also show us some real stick figure movements you can do, then I will be able to criticize it properly.

(=-ice-=)
04-13-2008, 11:09 AM
If you mean the 'Beginners, Post your Flash animations here' thread, it's locked.

Anyway, thanks. I'm gonna start another animation with sticks in it

ck2100
04-13-2008, 12:11 PM
Nice man! I think it's preety cool.
(I'm Back Baby! XD)

torque
06-24-2008, 12:14 AM
where can i post my animations? I'm a beginner.

Schwa
06-24-2008, 12:24 AM
Torque if you are really not all that good make one thread and just update it with your animations in it. That way people won't get annoyed when you post a bunch of bad animation threads because they will all be in one thread.

At OP.

The animation was very basic, but good, it seems that you've got a handle on easing and basic effects. I suggest attempting to do something that you might find in one of the tutorials in the flash section, like stickfigure's or explosions.

I suggest explosions because they are cooler and not that many people can make good ones.

dogmeat
06-24-2008, 03:58 AM
ok so i jus wanna ask.. well someone said the 'begginers post your flash's here' thread was closed or locked and i jus wanna know why its locked or closed whatever n if it will open or somethin

Lixu
06-24-2008, 04:02 AM
Is it just a ball flying around or am I missing somehting? Nothing to c&c at.

Prince of PIMPs
06-24-2008, 10:05 AM
Is it just a ball flying around or am I missing somehting? Nothing to c&c at.

I still think It looks nice =), It's cool at least ^-^

Lixu
06-24-2008, 10:11 AM
People are talking about particles, but I only see 1 ball, so I was just wondering if i was missing something.

kayzer
06-24-2008, 10:35 AM
its good for a first.. try making a stick animation

Ssjbryando
06-24-2008, 10:37 AM
I see you understand easing which is good. but animating real movements is probably harder, but you understand easing it seems. The lines became pretty big at first tho. maybe make it thinner just to make it look nicer.

unkownthous
06-24-2008, 01:13 PM
lol its the mighty ball of circles and stuff.. yh

chriisck
06-24-2008, 01:19 PM
nice, good easing its better than most of my first animations

toshiryu
06-28-2008, 07:23 AM
darn it. wish my first is as good as this lol

Tommysenf
03-02-2009, 02:27 PM
WOW you are very good, when this is your first you are very good^^

Foda
03-02-2009, 02:49 PM
very simple but very good for a first

Shanto
03-02-2009, 03:08 PM
Old thread is old.

Same with the phrase, but yeah.

Zero
03-25-2010, 08:17 AM
It was pretty great but i suggest you add some music so that the watcher won't get bored of watching a ball move(with really nice trails of course) again and again. Ice, your new at stickpage? Look at your join date.