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poppetje3D
12-14-2009, 10:33 AM
http://www.truploader.com/view/954365

Its an pretty empty room so I think they will go outside later.
C&C please :)

And does any one know some good sound packs ?

Edit:
http://www.truploader.com/view/677761

Bonk
12-14-2009, 07:01 PM
Waaaaaay too much down time where nothing is happening, insert a text intro over that part of the music or just cut it, because it's just boring to be honest. I'm not really sure about the animation because it lasted for such a short amount of time, but the background was cool. Do more and fix the intro.

poppetje3D
12-15-2009, 09:26 AM
Ah okay i get it.
Ill fix that now.

Edit :
Is this better?
http://www.truploader.com/view/677761

poppetje3D
12-16-2009, 10:35 AM
Bump . Need some comment on the edit.

Vendetta
12-16-2009, 07:35 PM
It's really smooth and everything, but the movements just don't seem very natural, if you see what I'm saying. For example, when he first jumps his body comes down at the same speed as when he jumped. This does make it look fluid, but when he jumped it was forced, whereas the fall only had gravity involved in it, which means the jump should have been faster than the fall. Also he should have fallen straight down, not forward.

What does W.I.P. stand for?
EDIT: I just thought about it and figured it out, nevermind.

poppetje3D
12-17-2009, 04:35 PM
Aha , Okay.
I actually like the jump , But I get what you mean.
Thanks :)