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unkn0wnx
12-14-2009, 03:09 PM
Here is my first beam test I ever made take a look and plz tell me what you think thx. :D

http://img205.imageshack.us/img205/9246/beam12.gif

Made the edid you said Zed what you think now??

Zed
12-14-2009, 03:35 PM
Did you make the beam itself or did you download it?

Teriyakid
12-14-2009, 04:01 PM
Did you make the beam itself or did you download it?

I bet he downloaded it =\

Fries
12-14-2009, 07:19 PM
downloaded im guessing.

unkn0wnx
12-15-2009, 03:37 AM
Like I said before I make everything myselfe And so yes I made the beam myselfe do not want to sound mean but you should not take conclusions if you do not know fore sure

It is not that hard to make a circle and a strait line thats al it takes ow and the line around the beam of course but thats a long strait line whit a lot of joints.

aakash77
12-15-2009, 06:45 AM
well the beam doesnt really look that good because the lines around it dont move during the blast and its all stationary.
Personally i make mine much shorter with one quick burst. And so that everyone knows no i didnt make them myslef i downloaded the basic sticks from doridz and edited them.

unkn0wnx
12-15-2009, 07:11 AM
I don't really get what you mean, can you explain plz. XD

aakash77
12-15-2009, 09:04 AM
After he shoots the beam the big line(s) that made up the main beam were fine but the small wavy line that was around it didnt look good.
(the blast = the time when the beam is fired to the time it finishes)

Zed
12-15-2009, 12:28 PM
The wavy line could look good - it just needs to slowly move towards the man. For an effect you made yourself it's extraordinarily good.

unkn0wnx
12-15-2009, 01:15 PM
The wavy line could look good - it just needs to slowly move towards the man. For an effect you made yourself it's extraordinarily good.

I just made the small change you said i think it look a lot better now thx.
You take a look to plz.

Zed
12-15-2009, 01:35 PM
Better. Great work.

aakash77
12-16-2009, 12:48 AM
Good job i likw it :D
Now for some CC
The beam is good but the stickman's feet move a bit funny when he fires it.
One possibility is to make him lean forward a bit more or make him take a step back to emphasise the recoil of the beam

Scarecrow
12-16-2009, 12:56 AM
The beam itself looks nice, but everything else is poorly done (movements of the guy, the beam charging up, etc)

I can understand that if you were focusing only on making the beam though.