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Mesmay
04-13-2008, 03:42 PM
http://www.antiup.net/view.php?id=71113173276Brute.swf

Filters raped the ending, so I need help on how to redo it.
Normal help with movements choreoraphy etc is needed desperately too

Ssjbryando
04-13-2008, 03:58 PM
I liked it like I said, but adding sounds will boost the animation a 100x D:

didnt like the end, a round thing, and lag and boom, animation stopped =p

BUT YEAH I REPLIED BECAUSE I OWN! >:3 jk jk /brag >:\ keep it up, and remmember I rejected you my love.

mraznbuddy
04-13-2008, 04:05 PM
yeah add sound and it'll be a lot better.
O~O and the end was a little weird, but the animation was cool. nice blood style

New Generation
04-13-2008, 04:05 PM
Did SSJBryando really get banned?

XD

The movements were okay, but need some fixing. The blood was fine but it's just a lot of small lines, dark red and red. :/

T Man
04-13-2008, 04:07 PM
Impressive and appealing, yet somewhat heavily flawed imo.

The moves were very soft, no force, as i bet if you took the vcam out, they'd look like taps.

The blood on the walls shouldn't bee there, as i wasn't able to see the actual animated blood.

Some movements were wayy to fast, as when he threw the guy at another guy (i didn't even know there was another guy.)

The physics were off when he caught the guy in the air.

and you need to work on your effects lol.

sounds would also give it an added touch.


this was harsh crit, but you need to know cuz you're gonna be really good...
so good job.

Mesmay
04-13-2008, 04:16 PM
Impressive and appealing, yet somewhat heavily flawed imo.

The moves were very soft, no force, as i bet if you took the vcam out, they'd look like taps.

The blood on the walls shouldn't bee there, as i wasn't able to see the actual animated blood.

Some movements were wayy to fast, as when he threw the guy at another guy (i didn't even know there was another guy.)

The physics were off when he caught the guy in the air.

and you need to work on your effects lol.

sounds would also give it an added touch.


this was harsh crit, but you need to know cuz you're gonna be really good...
so good job.

Thanks.
I can take harsh criticism, dont worry.
How can I improve the force of the hits? I try but I honestly have no clue of how to add force.

I know the effects sucked and the physics sucked sometimes.

Also, does anyone know a good site for sounds?

New Generation
04-13-2008, 04:19 PM
Try having a bigger gap between the enemy, then in the next frame *BAM!*

Also use a touch of blur, helps sometimes.

NCz
04-13-2008, 04:27 PM
and you need to work on your effects lol.


This coming from Tman.


But I actually agree with alot that he said, most of the hits were really weak, and the sticks that were coming in seemed to appear from nowhere. The effect at the end and his energy sword thing were pretty weird.

The black blur thing you used on the edges of the animation could've been removed. They didn't add much in my eyes.

Edit: shut up James, blurring movements can kill an animation if you don't use them exactly right. Plus i think Mesmay has a better grasp on framing and anticipation then you.

New Generation
04-13-2008, 04:38 PM
Maybe. But soon I will beat him =)

Nice name, lol.

Ssjbryando
04-13-2008, 04:39 PM
Did SSJBryando really get banned?

XD

The movements were okay, but need some fixing. The blood was fine but it's just a lot of small lines, dark red and red. :/

Can't you tell I'm a bad bad boy... ;) *big wink*

Yeah I noticed, forgot the say, the moves where pretty soft yeah, thats why i said sounds would make it feel heavier, makes it feel like the hit is harder. You beat mesmay? Your additude has changed :O nice.

New Generation
04-13-2008, 04:49 PM
lol seriously? .

SSOutPhase
04-13-2008, 05:03 PM
So THIS is where you've been mesmay? Animatin somethin epic I see. But Yeah, Tman got it all down for you. I love it, keep it up.

Knightsy
04-13-2008, 05:19 PM
i love the way he crushes him with his ''HEAD''

NCz
04-13-2008, 06:36 PM
Maybe. But soon I will beat him =)

Nice name, lol.

i hate you again already.
I prefer NC.

New Generation
04-13-2008, 06:52 PM
Oh ok, That's at least better T_T

rx00worth
04-14-2008, 05:02 AM
good

blood was cool....
it went spazamalistic at the end

Mesmay
04-14-2008, 10:47 AM
Thanks people
I would add sounds but Im really not that good at adding them, I always add the wrong one and they end up sounding horrible :/
But yeah, Ill bear it in mind and Ill try and make my next animation a bit better, and actually use some half decent effects.
And can someone help me with force?
Is it just that I have to make the punch kinda go through the other stick, (not literally) so it looks more powerful? I really dont get it. :/

SSOutPhase
04-14-2008, 10:53 AM
And can someone help me with force?
Is it just that I have to make the punch kinda go through the other stick, (not literally) so it looks more powerful? I really dont get it. :/

Force is an easy trick to do.

What you do is make maybe 2-3 frames with the stick moving for the attack. Then in the next frame make the stick do the actual attack.

Frame 1: Holding back punch
Frame 2: Holding back punch some more
Frame 3: Holding back punch
Frame 4: PAUNCH!!!

I hope you understand. Check out my animation in my thread and look at it FBF to see what I'm talkin about.

Mesmay
04-14-2008, 01:55 PM
Yeah, I get it.
Thanks.

Ive tried something similar, but not so many build up frames.
But yes, I get it and Ill have a go.

And Ill look at your animation, Mr my-animations-have-perfect-force.
Joke. Lol. ^_^

the afro ninja
04-14-2008, 07:38 PM
try findsounds.com and expirement

btw, sexeh animation

Tawnik
04-15-2008, 11:32 AM
That's really amazing

Lixu
04-16-2008, 09:01 AM
You can join Shiftlimits (http://www.shiftlimits.com/) Forum, be nice, get 100 posts and 2 weeks old, and download pepper's sound pack. Not only for that! The tutorials are great there, just like the crits of people.
And I can give you a link for xiao xiao sound pack and some ki blast sounds.

Nice anim, only end a bit weird

Cheers

Tawnik
04-16-2008, 01:08 PM
lol at you Lixu

Kitsune
04-16-2008, 01:29 PM
Make it longer and add music.

New Stickpage.com animation.

Mesmay
04-16-2008, 01:32 PM
Lol.
<3


I dont think one of my animations would ever get on SP at the moment.
Hopefully they will some day, but not any time soon, lol.


But yeah, thanks for all your replies, Ive taken in all the crit (I hope) and Im hopefully going to prove it when I show you what Ive done on Brute (Im going to lengthen it)

Kitsune
04-16-2008, 01:39 PM
Lol.
<3


I dont think one of my animations would ever get on SP at the moment.
Hopefully they will some day, but not any time soon, lol.


But yeah, thanks for all your replies, Ive taken in all the crit (I hope) and Im hopefully going to prove it when I show you what Ive done on Brute (Im going to lengthen it)

Great!

But really, the only problem I see is length.

Tawnik
04-16-2008, 02:29 PM
[QUOTE=Mesmay;1219195]

I dont think one of my animations would ever get on SP at the moment.
Hopefully they will some day, but not any time soon, lol.

/QUOTE]

lolatyoumesmay