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xpwnx
12-23-2009, 04:15 PM
hey guys hows my punching/kick going?

http://www.truploader.com/view/705764

fyi i just got flash about 5 days ago

Sunder Forge
12-23-2009, 06:05 PM
You got most of the steps down, except some minor flaws.
If you're going for a strong punch, then just have him wind up, and show the result with no inbetweens, such as arm next to body. ( you did that for two frames for some reason) You have the right idea for reaction, which is nice.
Try not to do so many double frames, they ruin the pace and force if put in the wrong spaces. You wanna put them after, or befor a big hit, not during the process of motion (Middle)
The red guy however, after the kick, should of bent into a V shape for maybe a couple frames, as it was a dick kick. Maybe walk back abit too from the force, like when he got punched.
ut it's rather good for a beginner, so good job, keep at it.

sunnygo
12-24-2009, 05:52 PM
My only comment is, he waits before stretching his punch and kick.

And i agree with Sunder Forge