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young sticky
12-24-2009, 04:59 PM
how strange that i posted my second first anyway this is ma first animation strangely i think its smoother than my second :s


12-24-2009, 08:48 PM
Decent. Pretty smooth and nicely done. Maybe make it a bit faster.

the darkest white
12-24-2009, 11:34 PM
Wobbly but its getting better, the particles should be more defined and the scribbly lines have to go. You've got a good sense of attack. Maybe also speed up the black flashes, Make each black frame only last for half as long as the rest, makes it look better.

young sticky
12-24-2009, 11:56 PM
k thanks ill make shore to do that and uknow for some strange reason my stick figures are only wobbly in easytoons i got flash today and it wasnt wobbly at all! but that doesnt mean im changing from easytoons

the darkest white
12-25-2009, 12:48 AM
orly? have you posted any of your flashes?

young sticky
12-25-2009, 08:53 AM
no but im gonna soon not done withem yet oh my gosh im done yep still wobbly :S i dont think i can change that only way is unless i use line and line sucks!!

the darkest white
12-26-2009, 06:08 AM
Nope, it can be changed, just take your time, a rushed anim is a crap anim. If it wobbly just do it over n over till it looks right.

12-26-2009, 08:49 AM
Actually I thought it was decent, I really liked the idea you did with the sword. I just might take it.