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Vile.
12-24-2009, 06:11 PM
Updating this thread alot now so yea keep coming back :D

http://filebox.me/view/k09xyfc0h arms are dumb...

http://filebox.me/view/jw998khh9

Flood
12-24-2009, 07:57 PM
not enough to c&c really. it doesn't even look like dancing yet.

Zero
12-25-2009, 02:29 AM
Its not dancing. Its just swaying there.

vaka
12-25-2009, 06:44 AM
it seems as if nearly every time her hand is quiet and gives a weird expression

Vile.
12-25-2009, 01:41 PM
http://filebox.me/view/jw998khh9 update

BluGil
12-25-2009, 03:14 PM
Make the arm parts the same color and remove the outline where they overlap so that it looks more together. Nice 3-D ishness goin on there.

bloodwarrior
12-25-2009, 10:15 PM
Its not dancing. Its just swaying there.
You animated a box... so don't complain.

Zero
12-25-2009, 10:18 PM
You animated a box... so don't complain.

Roger that Bloodwarrior. :3

vaka
12-26-2009, 02:57 AM
That's better! but try to rise the arms.

hecktwopointo
12-29-2009, 11:13 PM
ok..... its ok.......

Arch-Angel
12-30-2009, 04:01 AM
Here's a jolly grand idea before you continue this any further.
Hoow about sitting down, hitting yourself in the head for a second, play some music, and come up with an idea instead of saying "I'm going to animate a girl dancing". Anyone can do that.

It's obvious at this point that you animated the hair, added the chest piece, and then tweened the arm just so they were moving. It is also obvious that you had to plot or concept whatsoever of what you wanted the final product to look like.

I say start something different and actually make at least 80 frames of an animation before posting it. It will honestly help you if we have something to critisize you on rather than most noobs gagging over the fact that they can barely animate stick figures but you can do this.

It will help you in the long run to take my advice :/

Grey
01-03-2010, 05:32 AM
Its good. needs more work. its starting to creep me out...