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flashace38
12-30-2009, 08:18 AM
well here is my third flash i hope you like it:heh:
http,:/,/www,.truploader,.com/view/861435
Remove the commas and it should work

b0mb
12-30-2009, 09:20 AM
First: The url. You only need to put one space in somewhere. much easier to find than a comma next to a period (I've done debugging on code. commas and periods are a bitch to find)

next, the animation. waaaay too fast to read any of the text, the text was far too small. for what you had, increase the size of everything. Good use of the blur function. Not eased at all. No anticipation on anything.

Nice try though. just practice.

.Aklemo.
12-30-2009, 11:04 AM
Or you could just - http://www.truploader.com/view/861435

Please, post this animation in the beginner's thread and you will receive helpful comments there.

Wsheerio
12-30-2009, 03:02 PM
The animation is very choppy, try adding more frames to each movement. I agree with .Aklemo., the beginners section is for you.