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Vile.
01-04-2010, 01:51 AM
http://filebox.me/view/rbcjdfz67

ehg colouring was lazy sorry c&C please

http://filebox.me/view/fa2wk8fi2 now the bits flying out have purpose lol


IMADEITMOREPOWERFULL
http://filebox.me/view/tpergemwu

eightnine
01-04-2010, 02:37 AM
Not bad. The only thing I found a little weird was the way the two shoots of smoke came out at the top. Since it's a smoke bomb, I just expect one big poof. The animation was really smooth and looked great, imho.

Vile.
01-04-2010, 02:51 AM
Oh yea, i was going to add something coming out of the smoke but I got bored and lazy.

2-D
01-04-2010, 06:02 AM
look at me im posting in your thread are you happy now

Vile.
01-04-2010, 10:56 AM
look at me im posting in your thread are you happy now
Slightly ...

+Omega
01-04-2010, 12:22 PM
it's made good and it's smooth

Cronos
01-06-2010, 09:03 AM
Get rid of the three extruding plumes that appear a second or so after the initial blast and dissipate the explosion.

Also, if you want the other 3 plumes to stay, make them expand slower, and make sure they appear at roughly the same time everything else does.

Vile.
01-06-2010, 01:22 PM
Get rid of the three extruding plumes that appear a second or so after the initial blast and dissipate the explosion.

Also, if you want the other 3 plumes to stay, make them expand slower, and make sure they appear at roughly the same time everything else does.


no. its a bomb, it goes off.. text comes out at alternating times.

Cronos
01-11-2010, 05:02 AM
Oh, I see. Well you should still add some debree and maybe a tremor with the vcam.

RawGreen
01-12-2010, 03:02 AM
not much more powerful, just bigger in scale. The smoke coming towards the viewer comes in too late and makes the balance of the animation off set.

降世神通
01-12-2010, 07:57 AM
Good job.But I think if the screen have some red or yellow,it must be better.