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RawGreen
01-17-2010, 11:59 AM
There's allot to read under the comment, so I shouldn't keep you on this page too long.

http://www.newgrounds.com/audio/listen/304735

C&C appreciated.

Exile
01-17-2010, 03:11 PM
The two synths that come in are clashing pretty hard, they sound dissonant. The one with all the resonance doesn't sound particularly good on its own, I would have found a better sample...

Same deal with your other song, what's there is good, but I'd work on your musical forms, it really doesn't progress into anything interesting.

Vendetta
01-17-2010, 03:18 PM
Pretty boring to be honest. And the sounds seem a little off....

RawGreen
01-17-2010, 09:57 PM
Hmm, I like the different bass sounding sounds personally but, I can hear the clashing. I've never been completely good with progression too much but it happens in my music by one way or another without trying to sometimes. Are there any particular artists you could recommend me to that have allot of progression in them or possibly something I might be able to study?

Exile
01-17-2010, 11:52 PM
Different sounding basses are one thing, but basses with a ton of resonance don't sit well in a mix unless there's a lot of other stuff going on.. even then it's a stretch. You'll get an ear for it eventually.

As far as learning song progressions, I just follow trance because it's a simple buildup-breakdown-climax progression, but you can listen to any song just to see how they switch to different sections to keep the songs from getting stale. Maybe listen to Vospi? He makes electronic music in a ton of different genres and you might be able to get some ideas:

http://vospi.bemafia.ru/

RawGreen
01-18-2010, 02:38 PM
Thanks mate .

Spamm
01-18-2010, 03:11 PM
It's nice music to work to, but by itself I agree with Vendetta that it is kind of boring. You're great at making all those different sounds work together so well!