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doc
01-17-2010, 01:12 PM
http://www.truploader.com/view/347746
my third fight lately, after taking a huge break from animating. What do you think? Should I continue this? Am i improving at all? 24 fps

Peppar
01-17-2010, 01:20 PM
Really good overall.

doc
01-17-2010, 01:28 PM
thanks! :D any CC?

Vendetta
01-17-2010, 03:36 PM
You're definitely improving, but the movement are still a little off and you should work on stick figure construction. Try using the brush tool maybe?

LN3uq
01-17-2010, 04:14 PM
Their arms look really short in comparison to the rest of the body, and they seem to come out of the middle his head rather than the shoulders/neck area

Vendetta
01-17-2010, 04:23 PM
Their arms look really short in comparison to the rest of the body, and they seem to come out of the middle his head rather than the shoulders/neck area

Exactly. That's what I was trying to get at with stick construction.

doc
01-17-2010, 05:50 PM
ok thanks both of you!

Vendetta
01-17-2010, 06:02 PM
keep practicing, you're improving fast.

doc
01-17-2010, 06:45 PM
ill have another one up by the end of the night :D

RUiN
01-17-2010, 06:49 PM
Nice, It'll be cool to see. Still say you need to straighten out your kicks more because I don't know if I'm retarded but I don't kick with my leg bent that way

doc
01-17-2010, 07:29 PM
haha, ya ur right mstick. Ok, ill continue this and try to use what you all said.

RUiN
01-17-2010, 08:01 PM
Yea alright post it when your done I want to see