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Vervanda
04-15-2008, 05:28 PM
http://www.*************/open/1208296432

tell me what to improve on it.



UPDATE:
redone polemonster
added second polemonster in back
moveable clouds.
fade out to next scene

Shanto
04-15-2008, 05:30 PM
When the head goes down, it looks too uneased.

Also, shouldn't this go in flash?

Vervanda
04-15-2008, 05:34 PM
no it shouldnt

Etch
04-15-2008, 05:41 PM
I don't like the eyes, and the head itself.

Is it a stick?

Background is sexy in my eyes. Not much to give crit on, just the head is awkward.

Vervanda
04-15-2008, 05:41 PM
its a pole monster, this is going to end up in like a series like brackenwood or something, with lore and such

STUFF
04-15-2008, 06:00 PM
The particles are wobbly. The pole monster thing didn't look too attractive, mainly the eyes.

Also, do you have special privileges or something? expecting a smartass "yes"
Why don't you post it in the Flash section?

Vervanda
04-15-2008, 06:01 PM
mom said i was the most special person in the world

Sawc
04-15-2008, 06:01 PM
This definately shouldn't go in main.

Vervanda
04-15-2008, 06:46 PM
ill absolutely work on the polemonster

Index
04-15-2008, 06:58 PM
its gud, but it's too slow

Vervanda
04-15-2008, 07:05 PM
thats why i turned the fps from 15 to 20

Vervanda
04-15-2008, 08:44 PM
http://www.*************/open/1208308084
UPPPPDATE

Mr potato head
04-15-2008, 09:59 PM
second one looked like a penis... lol and it was obviously the same mc. Keep it up.