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RawGreen
02-03-2010, 06:03 PM
A simple and not so generic loop.
I suppose I could have added more variation...people are trying to blam it because it's not what they're used to...at least they could tell me what's wrong with it for Gods sake!

http://www.newgrounds.com/audio/listen/308946

please, criticize it...

Exile
02-03-2010, 09:44 PM
at least they could tell me what's wrong with it for Gods sake!

okay

it's a mess, there's no chordal structure or progression (if there is I don't hear it), the sounds are clashing everywhere and the bass really sounds bad

I think you need to listen to more electronic music to get a better idea of what sorts of sounds are commonly used, if you don't already. your ideas are okay but the sounds themselves are lacking, I don't know if its your equipment or if you think they sound good because you don't know anything else, but either way try to work past it.

RawGreen
02-06-2010, 08:29 AM
hahah, I did this for amusement somewhat. My dad plays random garbage on the guitar and always the same thing whenever he picks it up.

Just doing something random ;)
yeah, it sounds bad-ishk lawlawlawl

thanks for the crit ;)