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Mark
02-06-2010, 07:27 AM
I dont really like making my own thread for one animation...
So ill try to update this one :3
Ive only made one animation and I cant find my old thread :T
(and I really dont want to >.>)
SO
Ill use this one.
It's marks thread because it's my real name and Moch12 is getting on my nerves

Newest
http://img521.imageshack.us/img521/6413/defaulte.gif

Ill update this bad boy Everay day :3
I just need some comments first >.>

Edit....
To see my progress flip through the pages : p it gets better

Peppar
02-06-2010, 07:39 AM
Nice. good easing. :D

Mark
02-06-2010, 10:06 AM
Come on people More Comments :T
sheesh....
Ill update in a few minutes....maybe a half an hour

Zed
02-06-2010, 10:08 AM
All the individual people move well, but it's sometimes hard to see how they fit together, eg. when the guy kicks forwards and a guy slightly behind him falls over.

Gyohdonz
02-06-2010, 10:16 AM
looks pretty good.

Try something with better stickmen.

Mark
02-07-2010, 08:38 PM
Update!!!:
I wanted to base this off of Crono's run and his MPJ entry.......But that's impossibe xD
But I tried.
His is very well eased :T
http://img38.imageshack.us/img38/8234/bestyet.gif

FEATURING THE STICK I MADE!!!!!!
His Name Is Mark........
Never wouldve guesed that huh?

ANOTHER UPDATE!!!!!!
Im bored as hell....
Still no new comments :T
The gravity is super heavy in this animation.
http://img33.imageshack.us/img33/1349/animm.gif
I dont think ive animatied like this befo
Well I might as well make somethin actiony.
But that shall be latez

Gyohdonz
02-08-2010, 08:19 AM
Look's very good.

But you overease your animations.

Try spacing them a bit.

Mark
02-08-2010, 02:27 PM
K .

MonsterBreath12
02-09-2010, 03:23 PM
Not bad, loosen up your guys movment hes too up-tight.

mapex
02-11-2010, 09:04 PM
The one with the green background is by far the best in my opinion. In the first one, I don't get why he kicks his leg out when he elbows the second guy. The second I have no comment on because I haven't seen the work you were basing it off of.

Mark
02-13-2010, 12:56 PM
:Update:
This doesnt look right.
Probaby de nek
http://img153.imageshack.us/img153/4534/somestuff.gif

Peppar
02-13-2010, 01:04 PM
Nice effect, Love it.

poppetje3D
02-17-2010, 07:23 AM
But dude , I am commenting you on msn.
So there is not reason for me to comment you in your own thread again. =)

Zed
02-17-2010, 09:46 AM
Ooh, an update that I missed.

It's looking a very ASOT style, which is good. I'd say you undereased the arm that went back first as it started to go forwards again by one frame. Edit: no, wait, just as it finishes going backwards. That's where ya want the frame.

Also, when he was vaporised there was nothing coming off the arms. I'd say, rather than adding a new vapour there, the best way to fix it would be to have the vapour at the end coming in to the middle more for a couple of frames. Like this (but loads better):

http://i771.photobucket.com/albums/xx353/Zed31415/Briefvapourisation-1.gif

Other than those points, which are very minor, it's looking really good.

bubbles
02-17-2010, 10:41 AM
I love it moch, i love every bit. thier awsome. They are very awsome and you've gotton very good, VERY good.

Mark
02-17-2010, 08:52 PM
(Bows respectfully)
Thank you Ghostly
Thank you Zed
http://www.truploader.com/uploads/782535Its_been_a_while.gif
http://img246.imageshack.us/img246/81/itsbeenawhile.gif
I havnt used Bob here in a while :O
He's gotten modded so now he's type midgety


Hmm
Now whos Asot?

Vorpal
02-17-2010, 09:01 PM
Holy shit, you animate like I used to back in the day. If you have any questions just pm me or send me your msn bro I would be glad to help.

Mark
02-17-2010, 09:16 PM
:3
O.k .

Zed
02-17-2010, 09:40 PM
Who's ASOT? Who's ASOT? Have I really been here that long that I remember awesome animators who don't come around any more?

AsSeenOnTv made these:

http://i345.photobucket.com/albums/p377/AsSeenOnTV6/triplekill.gif
http://www.imageflock.com/img/1257719876.gif
http://www.imageflock.com/img/1255548888.gif
http://www.imageflock.com/img/1252787462.gif

He always did beautifully smooth stuff with great victim reactions. One of the first to move to Stykz if I remember correctly.


On your new one, I'd say the run looked really good and the kick was nice. The pause between different parts of the punch looked a bit strange to me, but the movements in it were good. It's more great work.

Mark
02-17-2010, 09:47 PM
Whoa
I like the Sword one :3
It's Actiony
His full body are great :O
Dam
Who IS HE!!!!!!

LeoZXC
02-19-2010, 03:31 AM
apparently someone pretty pro o.O
dude with your zapping one? when the black guy turns to zap the blue guy? Im not quite sure as to whether he is actually turning or kinda doing it behind his back :/
but otherwise wow, you have improved SO much since i last saw you man, keep it up :D

FoShizzle
02-19-2010, 03:49 AM
(Bows respectfully)
Thank you Ghostly
Thank you Zed
http://www.truploader.com/uploads/782535Its_been_a_while.gif
http://img246.imageshack.us/img246/81/itsbeenawhile.gif
I havnt used Bob here in a while :O
He's gotten modded so now he's type midgety


Hmm
Now whos Asot?

Wow. You've REALLY improved

Mark
02-19-2010, 02:55 PM
Thanks Foshizzle : D
:3
Ill update later on this weekend

leo...
Your epic.
Make a thread.
Let us rip into your soul with our C&C

Mark
02-24-2010, 06:07 PM
DUDES MY THREAD IS DEAD!!!!!!!!
no it's not

The people on DD told me that I should learn how to Heavy space and that some parts have to be Choppy in order for the anim to look right......
UUUUGH
So Im trying to heavy space but it's not comein out right

Default Randomness
http://img51.imageshack.us/img51/6692/55655.gif

poppetje3D
02-24-2010, 07:13 PM
I flip off the people who said that on DD.

heavy spacing is bull crap.

Topleggedskater
02-24-2010, 08:49 PM
Look's very good.

But you overease your animations.

Try spacing them a bit.

Wutchu talkin' 'bout Willace?
Overeasing is a wonderful technique, that doesn't look bad at all. IF you're doing a fight or something, spacing is needed; But with fluid combos, the animation looks wonderful while overeased. Mark, your animations are wonderful, and your style is very nice. I really will keep stopping by to see your thread and help you with CC. :) Some people are good with heavy spacing. Others are not. Whichever path you choose and master, it'll still come out sexy! :3

Vorpal
02-26-2010, 01:43 PM
It only looks bad if it is way to slow, but that could technically be called under eased because it isn't implicate it properly.
But don't be hating, that's the exact same style of easing I use.

Mark
02-28-2010, 07:13 PM
AAAAAAGHGHGAHGAGHAGHAHHAHGHAHGAHGAGGHGH
MY WORSTE ANIMATION IN SO LONG!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
The only part I actually enjoyed was the 2 second 3-D
Other than that
To many effects
http://img401.imageshack.us/img401/7746/worstepivotyet.gif

rival2
03-01-2010, 12:24 AM
I like it alot, but the only thing is: there were alot of effects, wich were great, but a lot less movement. I can't CC much since I can't see any real movement other then then the shot and the shot block.

With the shot: I think you should do a little more with the legs, they're not moving at all.

Zed
03-01-2010, 01:57 PM
I think the punch at the end lacked force and the movement in that area was generally off and unreal, but other than that I liked the cinematic style.

Mark
03-01-2010, 07:16 PM
This may be my new samurai Comp entry if it turns out how I want it to
http://img199.imageshack.us/img199/5586/samuraipractice.gif

Besides the fact that the Foot placement is HORRIBLE I think it looks awesome :3
And With the arms after he fell I wanted to see If I could Make things Flow
And
OMFG it worked

Tawnik
03-02-2010, 04:27 AM
Hi there,

two big things that I notice
1. the poses that the attacker is in is un natural and looks very stiff and random
2. when the attacked guy stands back up it should be faster, delete a frame or two in the middle

also the whole thing could be faster a lil bit, if 10 is normal speed, that Id like it to be and 1 is slowmotion then your animation is 7-8 :)

Hope I helped you.

Zed
03-02-2010, 12:52 PM
I guess, basically, I second what Tawnik said. Maybe a wider stance when he stops moving would be better, because as it is it looks off balance to the left. Not one of your best, I think, but still reasonable.

Fries
03-02-2010, 09:28 PM
cool :3
good job, mate :D

Minesa
03-07-2010, 03:19 AM
Nice... LOL I'M DUMB! I'm barely new to this and I'm criticizing and making a fool of my self by extending emotiones too much!

Mark
03-11-2010, 09:22 PM
This Animation Is based off of an animation on DD....I thought It was funny when I saw It so I tried my own Version xD

The word at the end is my new LOGO!!!!!
http://img85.imageshack.us/img85/1338/lolcj.gif

Now can I please have some C&C :3

Zed
03-12-2010, 09:32 AM
The good guy was off balance when he leant back, and the foot placement looked a little shaky. And it was a dd idea so it's intrinsically bad :P

Pretty cool effect on the M.

Mark
03-14-2010, 09:55 AM
Thanks Zed...

But since My thread is Dieing I NEED MORE COMMENTS!

Peppar
03-14-2010, 10:11 AM
It was good, more updates!!

Mark
03-16-2010, 04:41 PM
http://img11.imageshack.us/img11/7817/comboc.gif
Yes A random Combo...
With
A New BASE!?!?!?!
his name is Typo :3

Tortuga
03-17-2010, 02:20 AM
Clear your inbox, I need to send you something...

<_<
>_>

important

bubbles
03-17-2010, 11:14 AM
Holy crap when did you get so good?
damn I really havn't been here in a long time.

Mark
03-19-2010, 04:00 PM
ANOTHERE ANIMATION!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
I figured out how to flow my runs :3
http://img12.imageshack.us/img12/2803/toasts.gif

Zed
03-19-2010, 04:05 PM
It's all brilliant, except I think the runs need longer strides.

Mark
03-19-2010, 10:48 PM
I honestly agree about the strands.
But I kinda like them :T
Can you show me how you run then Ill expirement with it :3.

I wanna see : p

demonkilo
03-19-2010, 11:01 PM
Awesome! I see big improvement between your past two animations. Keep up that smooth style and work on realism and you'll be top notch ^.-

Mark
03-19-2010, 11:04 PM
Realism=Physics................................... .

(Came To A Conclusion)
Im gonna go make a parkour then.
That will be my realism/Physics test.
I never liked animating them so this should be a challenge

ishi
03-19-2010, 11:27 PM
your better than me:Nooooooo:

Peppar
03-23-2010, 05:16 AM
Realism=Physics................................... .

(Came To A Conclusion)
Im gonna go make a parkour then.
That will be my realism/Physics test.
I never liked animating them so this should be a challenge Yes! do parkour! make moar!!!

Mark
03-23-2010, 02:26 PM
RANDOM paRKOUR!!!!!!!!!!!!!
This was the animation I was talking about but naturally I didnt like it so Im just gonna post it xD
Im pretty sure that im gonna fix it up
http://img257.imageshack.us/img257/6516/dumbparkour.gif

Maybe my Worste Anim in a while o.o

poppetje3D
03-23-2010, 02:34 PM
I like it , But you rushed the last part? =D
looks like it.

Covalence
03-23-2010, 02:47 PM
parkour in an anti-gravity chamber never comes out well

Zed
03-23-2010, 03:49 PM
I quite liked it personally.

Peppar
03-23-2010, 05:49 PM
RANDOM paRKOUR!!!!!!!!!!!!!
This was the animation I was talking about but naturally I didnt like it so Im just gonna post it xD
Im pretty sure that im gonna fix it up
http://img257.imageshack.us/img257/6516/dumbparkour.gif

Maybe my Worste Anim in a while o.o Actually, its the best pivot parkour I HAVE seen in a while.

Mark
04-01-2010, 10:43 AM
Thanks Guys.....
I already got some C&C on this animation but....I changed a part of it.
It was originally a Slide Kick but now it's a Face kick : D
http://pivotup.com/files/q0364h1i.gif

It's not my best...and it's pretty rushed.....But running is fun : p


Try This
http://i41.tinypic.com/2kh5as.jpg

poppetje3D
04-01-2010, 11:05 AM
The link doesnt work for me >.> =/

Mark
04-01-2010, 11:23 AM
Look poppet : p .

poppetje3D
04-01-2010, 11:26 AM
Oh man Mark you turned so ****ing awesome.
There isn't much to say , maybe add a bit more and move that line in the background with the movements , that's all.
Good job =)

Yummerz
04-01-2010, 11:46 AM
Oh,man!

These were my new pants!

Mark
04-02-2010, 11:29 AM
Thanks Guys
New animation
SPINNEH!!!
http://img185.imageshack.us/img185/9291/spinneh.gif
Hoep you guys like it
It was fun to make >x3

Zed
04-02-2010, 12:05 PM
Very nicely done.

Yummerz
04-02-2010, 12:08 PM
Looks great.
I like the shadow.

bubbles
04-02-2010, 12:09 PM
Thanks Guys
New animation
SPINNEH!!!
http://img185.imageshack.us/img185/9291/spinneh.gif
Hoep you guys like it
It was fun to make >x3
O______O















Oh
















My










God.
I find myself sexually attracted to your animation it's THAT good. May I please have the piv? I have pivot3 beta now so it will work.

Yummerz
04-02-2010, 12:11 PM
Looks great.
I like the shadow.

Mark
04-03-2010, 03:10 PM
O______O
Oh
My
God.
I find myself sexually attracted to your animation it's THAT good. May I please have the piv? I have pivot3 beta now so it will work.
rofl
not now but later i will send the File


Looks great.
I like the shadow.

Thank you : p


Very nicely done.

Thank you Zed : 3

Fairytail
04-03-2010, 03:25 PM
I liked it, really smooth and no weird sticks, the movements are cool but I can't really seem to follow what happens at the beginning (I'm talking about the first vid), does he pull out a gigantic hammer, or is it just some effect?
About the second video, if there is a huge gravity why does the arm fall to the left when the figure falls, He should not be doing that since both arms are at the same height and length.
I'm not going to comment on all your videos, but I just saw them and I was stunned! They all look amazing! I love your style and you might be my favorite (pivot) animator :3.
One more thing, I personnaly preffer it when an update is put on the first post and not having skip through all the pages to see all the animations.
**maybe i should give pivot another try**
Good job!

Teriyakid
04-03-2010, 03:32 PM
I'm speechless lmao... I don't even get how you can improve that fast but w\e lol.

Anyway, on your SPINNEH!!!! how come his knee pad on one of his legs appeared on the back of his leg after he spun :o?

Mark
04-03-2010, 07:32 PM
I'm speechless lmao... I don't even get how you can improve that fast but w\e lol.

Anyway, on your SPINNEH!!!! how come his knee pad on one of his legs appeared on the back of his leg after he spun :o?
Well thats a good question o.o
Well I guess its the way I made the Stick

Mark
04-04-2010, 05:33 PM
Guys Im making a joint right now....I cant tell you who it's with...But Ill give you a hint She's not on this site......WHOOO it looks epic so far.
I cant show you but I went back to my old stye for this

RUiN
04-04-2010, 05:51 PM
Your shits nice man keep it up.

Cronos
04-09-2010, 08:31 AM
Love the newest one Mark.


http://img33.imageshack.us/img33/1349/animm.gif


Also, the color you used here is inspiring me to make something.

Zero
04-09-2010, 09:19 AM
Dude, I just realize that when the stickman falls to the ground, his left hand is shaking. Nice animations though. =3