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RawGreen
02-07-2010, 02:00 AM
you know what I want...

read the description on the newgrounds page if you don't.
http://www.newgrounds.com/audio/listen/309798

<3

RawGreen
02-07-2010, 03:00 AM
I got the help I needed on newgrounds ;)

:p

Tawnik
02-07-2010, 10:45 AM
Thats pretty neat :) Im not a music expert but I like it, 0:55 favorite part.

Exile
02-08-2010, 06:53 PM
You have some extremely harsh upper-end bells going on, I don't know what they are but they physically hurt to listen to in some parts. Like :50ish and the end, cut it at least in half volume-wise, for the sake of those of us using headphones.

You still don't have enough bass. Use what are called sub-basses, they're just simple sine waves that play at an octave, sometimes two, underneath the actual bassline. It fills up all the lower frequencies without getting in the way of anything else, and lowcut everything else that would otherwise occupy those frequencies to avoid things from getting muddy.

Your music is really linear, and for the most part doesn't have a strong focus. Don't be afraid to drop things out and introduce new elements. Have an actual melody in mind when you write a song, there really isn't one that stands out in the song which just makes things sound hectic.