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Jet
04-17-2008, 04:56 AM
Mah Xplosions:

http://pivothost.org/public/pbserver1/1208492546.gif
http://pivothost.org/public/pbserver1/1208460763.gif (http://pivothost.org/public/pbserver1/1208492546.gif)
http://pivothost.org/public/pbserver1/1208498262.gif
http://pivothost.org/public/pbserver1/1208470976.gif
http://pivothost.org/public/pbserver1/1208440260.gif
http://pivothost.org/public/pbserver1/1208477043.gif
http://pivothost.org/public/pbserver1/1208438829.gif

Mah Other Ones:

http://pivothost.org/public/pbserver1/1208520579.gif

Im new to EZToon and these are like, my first eight of em. I really like em for my first tries, tried to do effects which failed epiclly, but nevertheless C&C please.
<3<3<3

shudokai
04-17-2008, 04:59 AM
i like the third, but you should make the core of the explosion disappear and use more particles.

Raffi
04-17-2008, 05:00 AM
The fourth explosion was cool. The mushroom cloud was strange, cuz it went out then went in again, it should go out and keep going out till it disappears. The others were ok, but I'm mentioning the to specificlly because they were different from the others. Plus I'm lazy.

The animation with the sticks were pretty well eased at somepoints, but were WAY too fast and confusing.

shudokai
04-17-2008, 05:05 AM
Raffi your signature is broken!
maybe i should write more private messages.

btw .... running into walls rulez ^^

Raffi
04-17-2008, 05:30 AM
Raffi your signature is broken!
ORLY?!

Thanks btw.

Frodomoj
04-17-2008, 07:52 AM
They were mostly bad, but I liked the last one.
Get back to Pivot naow. >:C

Jet
04-17-2008, 08:34 AM
=o mostly bad? topugh critique, guys, its mah firsties. well, tough critique frodo, anyways.

Im making anew piv. which is PARKOUR and should make me high or borderline pivot, yes?

LOVE YOU FRODO <3