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Lolzafish123
02-20-2010, 01:18 PM
Lolzafish1234's Thread of Thread-Iness...


Flow test? (http://pivotup.com/files/4gl5nwp6.gif)

Pokémon battle I lost interest for... (http://pivotup.com/files/sp6xio7b.gif)

Base 7 testing (http://pivotup.com/files/d826kqh7.gif)

Tribute/RIP-OFF of Alchemist's PW with Lewk (http://pivotup.com/files/13a4sqwf.gif)

More will be added.

Zed
02-20-2010, 01:25 PM
Ranks are meaningless. And [insert the other 9 reasons they're shit here]. If you're good, you and I and everyone else'll know you're good when we see your work.

Now then, first thing I think you need to learn is easing. There's a tutorial for it in the pivot tutorials section. Basically it's accelerating and decelerating your movements with small spacing followed by large spacing. This will massively smooth up your animations and probably make most of the movements look right.

Generally the positions and stiffness were decent. It's just choppy. Get the easing sorted and it could be pretty good.

Lolzafish123
02-20-2010, 01:27 PM
Ranks are meaningless. And [insert the other 9 reasons they're shit here]. If you're good, you and I and everyone else'll know you're good when we see your work.

Now then, first thing I think you need to learn is easing. There's a tutorial for it in the pivot tutorials section. Basically it's accelerating and decelerating your movements with small spacing followed by large spacing. This will massively smooth up your animations and probably make most of the movements look right.

Generally the positions and stiffness were decent. It's just choppy. Get the easing sorted and it could be pretty good.

Easing is like this: - = movement
| = Frames

|-|--|---|--|-|

I'm a nerd :P

Zed
02-20-2010, 01:49 PM
Mmmm. That's the basic idea, yes, but you're certainly not doing it enough. Try more like this:

|| |-|--|----|---------|----|--|-| ||

bubbles
02-21-2010, 06:28 AM
Lol the third one looks like he's having a fit.

Peppar
02-21-2010, 07:29 AM
Here is a important thing, The force on the kick was good, But if you do less frames on the kick, It does not have enough force. (Unless you want to do slow-motion.)

zawmbee
02-21-2010, 08:02 AM
Your signature stick...has a weiner on his head.

Lolzafish123
02-21-2010, 05:09 PM
Lol the third one looks like he's having a fit.

That is not helpful at all.


Here is a important thing, The force on the kick was good, But if you do less frames on the kick, It does not have enough force. (Unless you want to do slow-motion.)

Thank you for giving me CC, I will try to do this.



Your signature stick...has a weiner on his head.
How mature, actually comment on my thread or don't comment at all, it is not a weiner, it is a horn, he is horny.

zer0gravity
02-22-2010, 12:58 AM
bro... you can't demand C&C. If anything, you need to earn a reputation befor trying. plus, All the problems have been covered

Zed
02-22-2010, 04:39 AM
I think he can expect cc. That's what the thread's here for. Anyone who posts an anim should get cc.

Might wanna watch you you get it from though, since the reason the kick lacked force wasn't that it had too many frames, but that there weren't enough frames in the anticipation to give the speed of the kick contrast with the fluidity of the rest of the movements.

Vile.
02-22-2010, 09:08 PM
Mmmm. That's the basic idea, yes, but you're certainly not doing it enough. Try more like this:

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DEMONWINGS
02-22-2010, 09:13 PM
really as first animations i'd have to say these are relatively good, especially with that fourth one. they do look a little sloppy though, and easing would do you good.

Lolzafish123
02-23-2010, 02:19 PM
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:I

Unhelpful comment win...


really as first animations i'd have to say these are relatively good, especially with that fourth one. they do look a little sloppy though, and easing would do you good.

Thanks man, I am kinda lazy... I prefer heavy spacing so my easing looks kinda bad :(
Anyway, UPDATE: http://pivotup.com/files/gb14ixm3.gif

Kinda weird >.>

Lolzafish123
02-28-2010, 04:39 AM
UPDATE: Very short but I think it is a new style

http://pivotup.com/files/3e1z9ost.gif

Zed
02-28-2010, 09:03 AM
Save it smaller and it'll look better. Add some frames at the start where nothing moves to make it more watchable. Then, probably just add more easing during the crouch so that it doesn't stop but moves slowly throughout, and that'll make it a load smoother and more fluid. More easing everywhere would be nice.

Lolzafish123
03-13-2010, 08:02 AM
Lol, thread cleaned and made more professional.