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Jkyiij
04-18-2008, 10:13 PM
Part 1 to the series called "Forgotten Past" that I'm making now =]
Please comment and stuff...

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Bonk
04-18-2008, 10:42 PM
It went way too fast, as in there wasn't enough frames. It looked like they were just teleporting around at some points, and the action was sort of hard to follow.

It was very choppy at some points, and sort of smooth at others. I reckon you need to just have more frames for every movement you do.

The start was random too.

Jkyiij
04-18-2008, 10:52 PM
Okay... Before this post I had same amount of posts as you haha :D

Ssjbryando
04-19-2008, 04:57 AM
Everything what bonk said kinda =3 Thx for having me in it btw!! but it was fast, and some movements where not noticeble, it is way to fast, you need to put more frames in between and make it slower and smoother, Dont think about lenght =3 Quality is what counts! O-o then lenght kinda T_T I guess.

But wasn't to bad =D Keep it up!

Jkyiij
04-19-2008, 06:09 AM
Thanks, and your welcome haha.