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poppetje3D
03-14-2010, 06:37 AM
http://www.truploader.com/uploads/311700thesupernatural.gif

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Peppar
03-14-2010, 08:18 AM
:3 great so far. but i hate how that when the guy falls down, he bounces weird.

poppetje3D
03-14-2010, 09:13 AM
I know , I rushed that =|

Zed
03-14-2010, 01:46 PM
Arms look shaky as he bounces off the ledge, and I'd have been inclined to push his arms out to the right as he kicks to the left. And, yeah, needs a bit of work on the dead guy bounce. Otherwise, nice.

poppetje3D
03-15-2010, 03:13 PM
Idk what you mean with the shaky arms. =|

Zed
03-15-2010, 03:41 PM
http://i771.photobucket.com/albums/xx353/Zed31415/Poppet1.png

About here. It looks like it either shakes a bit or goes from bending one way to the other and back again in three frames.

Tawnik
03-15-2010, 03:51 PM
I have to agree with Zed, theres something wrong going on with them.

poppetje3D
03-15-2010, 04:16 PM
Ah yes , do you mean these frames? >.>
http://www.truploader.com/view/415577
http://www.truploader.com/view/536477
http://www.truploader.com/view/134351

Zed
03-15-2010, 04:20 PM
Yeah, that looks like it.

Tawnik
03-15-2010, 05:30 PM
Haha, thats something really weird :D The wrist should go down all the time, it can stop and move just a lil bit, so it looks like it drags behind the body, but it cant go up like that, imo.

Saha
03-15-2010, 10:41 PM
Its not really exciting because there is no storyline. Therefore, its not interesting or worth to watch. You have good skill but, you don't have good ideas for an animation.

poppetje3D
03-16-2010, 11:17 AM
Ill try to make something with a storyline and fancy backgrounds soon.
I think. =D

Gyohdonz
03-16-2010, 04:20 PM
Nice one bro.

Keep it up.