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Devour
04-19-2008, 05:00 PM
I worked on this animation for about a day. I think it's my best yet.

http://www.*************/open/1208640202
18 fps

http://www.*************/open/1208640357
24 fps

C&C

Jousteh
04-19-2008, 05:04 PM
It would be very nice if it wouldn't be so wobbly.

You are definetly improving.

kinto
04-19-2008, 05:33 PM
Extremely wobbly, though it looks smooth.

Devour
04-19-2008, 05:34 PM
Okay. I'll work harder on redrawing, then. More C&C

blacknaturestick
04-19-2008, 07:11 PM
nice, but it r wobbly

Kitsune
04-19-2008, 07:29 PM
A bit of leg resizing, and the landing of the jumps don't look so impacted as he lands from a gymnast's moves. Would you bounce that little in reaction to those moves?

I think not. >:(

It's overall not bad. Keep free-style-ing your animations and you will get better as time slowly goes on.

dawG
04-20-2008, 07:27 AM
You probaly heard this...wobbly.

But I like your style, and it seemed very smooth to.
So, just fix the wobbly :D

Later.