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Peppar
04-04-2010, 06:53 PM
So, yeah. Animations. http://filebox.me/files/nwuhh87hc_asdert.gif movements tester.http://filebox.me/files/i5ksw5iym_aseries3.gif my new bot.


more to come C&C? http://filebox.me/files/0cjp91bsj_aseries3.gif

Sumfink
04-04-2010, 07:04 PM
Left: Major foot shakiness on the landing, and the head and arms are stiff. I think you're getting better at flow though.

Right: It seems like he jumps before he's fully stopped, so he should have some forward momentum on the jump. Other than that I see no problems, it's pretty basic.

Peppar
04-05-2010, 06:38 AM
Update! http://filebox.me/files/0cjp91bsj_aseries3.gif flip. :3

bubbles
04-05-2010, 08:40 AM
I'm gonna do an overview on all your animations.
So, there are some shakyness problems that need to be sorted out, remember followthrough everything you do and ease to a stop instead of changing direction suddenly. The easing is generally good but not perfect, there could allways be more. You allso need to watch your foot placement there cause that's a real problem, don't worry I had the same problem up until recently. What to do is do the frame, then go back and edit the frame you just did to get foot placement right. Do that with every frame and the foot shakyness should go away. I can see you've started to develop your own style, and this is a critical moment so I'm not gonna tell you exactly what to do to allow you to dovelop your own style which is why I'm not individualy CC'ing each of your animations. Your starting to get rid of stiffness which is good. Keep at it mate. :)

Peppar
04-05-2010, 05:44 PM
http://filebox.me/files/pm62kkxks_aseries.gifbackflip fail.

Peppar
04-06-2010, 12:33 PM
New, wouldnt let me edit. so 3d kick! hya? http://filebox.me/files/wq6bw8i56_asdert.gif (no, i did not get it from droidz.org :D)

bubbles
04-06-2010, 12:44 PM
New, wouldnt let me edit. so 3d kick! hya? http://filebox.me/files/wq6bw8i56_asdert.gif (no, i did not get it from droidz.org :D)
Nice work with the 3D there, it looks smexy =3

Peppar
04-06-2010, 12:51 PM
Thanks. :) Im making a project. Ill post the preview later, i just have to find the file. -.-'

bubbles
04-06-2010, 01:01 PM
Thanks. :) Im making a project. Ill post the preview later, i just have to find the file. -.-'Can't wait mate.

Peppar
04-06-2010, 06:13 PM
Im gonna try tommorow. I have no inspiration. Any ideas?

Vendetta
04-06-2010, 06:35 PM
You've definitely gotten better, easing is a lot less of an issue now. Just work on making them a bit smoother.

RUiN
04-06-2010, 07:08 PM
The jump was a little off. Seemed strange but its all smooth

Peppar
04-06-2010, 09:01 PM
Ideas for a project name? in pivot.

Teriyakid
04-06-2010, 09:08 PM
The Project Z!
I dunno lol

But that 3D kick you did, are you sure thats yours :o?
If it is, that's by far the best thing I have ever seen you animation.

Zero
04-06-2010, 09:27 PM
Lol. You really are improving in pivot now I have a question. Do you have flash because if you don't I'll Pm you the steps to get it.

Peppar
04-07-2010, 06:10 AM
Yeah, i need flash naow!!


@Teriyakid: Yes that was my 3d kick.

Yummerz
04-07-2010, 06:14 AM
Lol. You really are improving in pivot now I have a question. Do you have flash because if you don't I'll Pm you the steps to get it.

I wantz it Too!

Peppar
04-07-2010, 06:42 AM
Edit: it wouldnt let me. again. D:<



Anyways, preview! not my best, but it is gonna have lots of effects. http://filebox.me/files/jb35bn0g8_aseries.gif

Zero
04-07-2010, 06:47 AM
Okay. Only you two will get flash.

Peppar
04-07-2010, 06:50 AM
Could you pm us now to tell us how to get it?

Zero
04-07-2010, 07:10 AM
I Pm you cinnamonbun but it said your Pm storage is full. Delete it and I can send you the Pm message.

Zero
04-07-2010, 07:11 AM
I wantz it Too!
Don't you already have flash?

Peppar
04-07-2010, 07:19 AM
Alright, i emptied it.

Zero
04-07-2010, 07:24 AM
Did you get my PM?

Peppar
04-07-2010, 07:54 AM
Yeah, i got it. is this legal?


(yes i got the pm and flash.)

Zero
04-07-2010, 08:16 AM
Yes. : )

Peppar
04-07-2010, 08:34 AM
Ah, :D im planning to make a flash project.

bubbles
04-07-2010, 09:22 AM
Ah, :D im planning to make a flash project.
Talking about free flash now are we? If you got flash for free, no matter WHAT he says, it's illegal.

Peppar
04-07-2010, 06:53 PM
Meh-ish. I was joking. i knew it was illegal. Now, back to animations...

Zero
04-08-2010, 08:30 AM
And yet the force with this one is strong.

Peppar
04-08-2010, 08:34 AM
:/. Well im making a ninja competition with my freind in pivot. Ill post the whole thing later.

Zero
04-08-2010, 09:19 AM
Sorry about that previous post. I couldn't resist for my father was watching starwars in the other room. Good luck though.

Peppar
04-09-2010, 11:22 AM
Here is a preview. (run away from droids.) i guess its good. http://filebox.me/files/i5r02q055_aseries.gif

bubbles
04-09-2010, 11:27 AM
Here is a preview. (run away from droids.) i guess its good. http://filebox.me/files/i5r02q055_aseries.gif
It was good until the very last bit with the snappy movement, it just seems so irrelevent and out of place and it doesn't look very good either. But the rest of the animation is brilliant.

Peppar
04-09-2010, 11:31 AM
Yeah, :/ the lower body was bent wrong, when i straightened it, it made a snap.

bubbles
04-09-2010, 11:43 AM
Yeah, :/ the lower body was bent wrong, when i straightened it, it made a snap.It's not the back I'm talking about, it's the front leg. It should be easy enough to go back and edit, once you do that, it will earn the rank of sexah.

Sumfink
04-09-2010, 01:21 PM
The walk is smooth, but too slow and wayyy off balance.

Covalence
04-09-2010, 07:05 PM
jeez, you got a lot better from a week ago
keep up the good progress, and listen to the advice everyone else is giving you

seeing as i can't really criticize anything with the last animation due to stuff already being pointed out, i'll wait for you to tack on more stuff to the animation