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megaanims
04-09-2010, 12:52 AM
http://pivotup.com/files/1yosplfq.gif
my best so far
http://pivotup.com/files/rt8skueg.gif
I like this one

Scar
04-09-2010, 02:48 AM
u can go to Pivot Tutorials and look for the tutorials u want...

off-topic: u can go to youtube and type in FlyingPanda1990 and check out his vids...the combo generator...try to resume and pause fast to get
the frames...

(im gonna get flamed)

Zero
04-09-2010, 04:11 AM
Smooth.: ]

Zed
04-09-2010, 05:08 AM
When you do runs you need an extra frame at full extension.

On the last one, the guy who's thrown gets shaky when he lands.

Also on the last one, I would have been inclined to ease out of the camera movement. Without that it looks a bit confusing. It also doesn't quite flow properly around there. The guy who is standing still stops moving before the guy who is running starts, which means there are a couple of frames where the running guy's momentum is completely destroyed.

After the throw I think he should have stepped his back foot forwards rather than his front foot back.

On the top one, I can see what you're trying to do and why you did it, but without the easing it looks really jittery. Maybe bring him down at more of an angle and push him off again at a similar angle so that the part of him on the floor can move back at the right speed but without his centre of gravity being jerked too far back.

Positions are looking good though.

megaanims
04-09-2010, 07:38 AM
u can go to Pivot Tutorials and look for the tutorials u want...

off-topic: u can go to youtube and type in FlyingPanda1990 and check out his vids...the combo generator...try to resume and pause fast to get
the frames...

(im gonna get flamed)
I won't flame you,lol,I don't need tutorials,I know my basics.
@ coldzero:
screw you, I need a better comment.
@ zed:
amazing cc there man, thanks.

Cronos
04-09-2010, 08:27 AM
http://pivotup.com/files/rt8skueg.gif
I like this one

Now this, I like. Apart from a few minor hicups its pretty good. Keep that style and just perfect it.

bubbles
04-09-2010, 09:31 AM
Well once I got used to your style I really liked them, there aren't any real flaws what-so-ever.

megaanims
04-09-2010, 08:38 PM
thanks crono,yeah I might keep that style,just polish it a bit,thanks for all the comments except for coldzero.