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Dinomut
04-20-2008, 06:17 PM
Heres my first EZtoon in a year.
http://i216.photobucket.com/albums/cc256/drocksta1/MyFirst.gif
tips and/or CC please

axerman1001
04-20-2008, 06:33 PM
so/so but for first thats good

ItachiDarkanime
04-20-2008, 06:41 PM
wow.. i love how you made the blast look i wouldnt have any intention span to make it look that good! Great job...

OGrilla2
04-20-2008, 07:04 PM
The smoke looks very awesome. It needs a little bit more shading, though, around the bright areas. They stick out just a tad too much.

It's very slow and the backblast was half-assed, but for taking such a long break, I'd say you did well.

tgayfox
04-20-2008, 07:22 PM
The smoke looks very well drawn. The animation of the stick was bad though.

kinto
04-20-2008, 10:01 PM
There is zero easing, but you need to finish it damnit!

Jet
04-21-2008, 12:40 AM
to short.
needs more EFFORT.

Jackanack
04-25-2008, 05:29 PM
The stick dude doesn't look that good, but the beam was l33t h4x0r. That means I liked it.

the afro ninja
05-07-2008, 09:50 PM
Nice smoke blast, i mean really nice except for the fact that its unfinished.