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Sacred
04-13-2010, 05:10 PM
Hey guys. I've been looking around and seen the forum a little more fun recently. So I want to contribute to that fun. I'm going to write a little story about a group of members from the forums who are ordered by the admins themselves to perform a secret mission. The story will be told from my perspective. And yes this idea did come from Devour's zombie story. So props to him for inspiring me.

Here's the story:
Word has been spreading throughout the city that a spam attack is about to happen. To be sure that these rumors are true, the admins and super mods are hiring the first ever assembled Stickpage defense team. Because of the city's reconstruction, it is currently at it's weakest point. And if an attack were to happen, not even the moderators will be able to stop it. The NTFs would be able to help, but they're already tasked for watching over the city from the inside. So ordered from the admins themselves, Mantha and Gavel are searching throughout the city looking for members who are not only capable of fighting off many 1-posted noobs. But also may have to face largely respected members of other websites, if that is the case.

Simply put, I'm writing a story with you members as the characters. I need 10 well-known members throughout the forum as the characters. Sorry NTFs and Mods, but you can't enter as main characters as according to the story. However if you want, I can make you have an appearance in the story as a side character. And the same goes for the rest as to the lesser-known members of the forums. However if you just joined, you will not be allowed in. If you would like to be a part of the story let me know. To enter, put your account name, and your type of personality and skills. If someone already claimed a skill that you want to have, then you'll have to come up with another. Sorry.

If you are a side character, then simply let me know you want to be in. I'll find a spot for you somewhere in the story. Do not give me a background story, you're only a side character. Your story is mine to create.

I'm not exactly sure how long this story will be, so we'll just have to wait and find out.

Main characters list is full. You can still however join as a side character.

MAIN CHARACTERS:
-Sacred
Is very good with aiming and snipers. Also wields a deagle in his pocket for close-ranged encounters. A confused and unhateful member who tries to keep Stickpage safe.
-Devour
Proficient with a medium caliber pistol, but prefers to use hunting knives for their speed, and because they don't make much sound when put into use. He's also trained himself to run very fast so he can get to place to place quickly and quietly. A funny guy who isn't angered easily. Tries not to piss other people off in turn, unless they deserve it. Actually enjoys the sunset or starry nights or things like that, has a twin brother, can kill the noobs involved with the "spam attack" without a second thought, but wouldn't want to kill a normal person if there was any other choice but to do so.
-Unknown, we all just call him The Dude.
Wields an AK-47 with deadly accuracy, also uses throwing knives, the accuracy is ten fold. He can be funny, serious, or a dick. If you annoy him, he'll call you out on it.
-Cosmo
His weapons are 2 silenced Beretta 92FS's, and he's damn good with them. He is trained in the art of killing you without ever ****ing knowing he was there, unless he wanted to play with you a little first then you wish he just killed your ass 2 miles back when he first started to follow you. He is known to smoke a j after he kills, or before, and also during. He really didn't want to be selected for this mission but he was promised a big ol bag of weed (damn you gavel) and he cannot say no to that.
-Myself
Carries a BMG700 that fires .700 bullets.
-ScatMan
Heavy weapons guy. Mainly carries a chain gun around and a shotgun. Hailing from a Russian/American family, ScatMan was trained by his father to be a proud solider, although he also spent time studying electronic devices. As such, ScatMan is skilled in the art of the bullet, and also in that of electronic devices. Not the best English skills, but still gets the message through. Will occasionally shout in Russian, confusing most people. He weighs one-hundred fifty kilograms and stands at two meters tall.
-Tortuga.
Wielded in left hand, a thin rapier of sorts, in right hand a blow-back pistol. Very bold, views things in simple terms. Once he has made his mind, he does not change it.
-Blasphemer
Wields whatever he can find. Notorious for being an asshole. Is often the missing component to a group, however - making sure everything stays in order while completely blasting it OUT of order. A total ****ing tyrant.
-Dinomut
Wields a silenced flamethrower in one hand and a silenced chainsaw in the other. Can burn down an entire warehouse and chaisaw a thousand people to death without the guards hearing a single thing. An expert engineer, he crafted the silent flamethrower and chainsaw combo with the intent of surprising the enemy in large numbers and dispatching them all at once to avoid an extended stealth mission. This however proved to be ineffective and he hit a roadblock when trying to create silenced flames as the brightness of burning bodies was drawing too much attention. He eventually used it simply to surprise the enemy in a quick head on charge and take advantage of the fact that nobody had any idea where he was in the confusion of a burning building. From there he'd use his chainsaw to silently destroy each and every soldier. He wears a fireproof suit in order to protect himself from his own flames. He's been known to utter awesome Sean Connery caliber one-liners after each mission.
-Oblivion EX
Tall stature, squared jaw. Usually silent. Likes to wield weapons such as a Halberd, and keeps a Morning Star by his side in case he has to crack some skulls. Loves him some cigars. If pissed off you better run like **** or else your legs will end up in a tree whilst your head has been smashed into the concrete. Not much is known from where he came, The best anyone can guess is that it was hellish and torturous, and left him with many physical and mental scars. (one of the mental scars is the lack of talking. he will say a few things now and then Including "**** off," "move," "ugh," and "ah shit", but most of the time, unless in hectic situations, these are almost inaudible)

SIDE CHARACTERS (Makes an appearance in the story):
-Sumfink
-Zed
-Scarecrow
-Coldzero
-dfr179
-RUiN
-Floydyboy
-Ashlander
-Wartooth
-snowy
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Post below for story.

Sacred
04-13-2010, 05:10 PM
I will update this post frequently for every new chapter that comes out.

STORY:
PROLOGUE

I woke up to yet another ordinary day. Opening the blinds I looked out at our town of Stickpage. Full of life and imagination, it always put a smile on my face when I looked out at it from my second story window. Hopping out of bed and throwing my clothes on, I threw myself down the stairs to eat some breakfast. I poured my self some Sticko's cereal and ate away at the good flavor. Yet another care-free day of living in the small town of creativity. Stickpage used to be different believe it or not. We used to have a building we called the Portal, where many people would go in with their creations and show them to the public. However many thought this useless as they could simply share the creations as their own without the process of having papers to fill. And the entire city itself has just been refurbished. It looks much cleaner than ever. However, many are still getting used to the new city. So it will take some time for us to completely cope with the new town. All in all however, today would just be another ordinary day in Stickpage. Or at least, that's what I thought...

CHAPTER 1

I heard a knock come from my door. I put my spoon down and walked to the door. Unlocking and opening it, I found Mantha standing at my doorstep. After standing there for a second or two, I put a cheery face on and slightly waved.
"Oh hey Mantha." I said. I always treated Mantha as a friend to me, I never found out though if she thought the same back. Her serious face however made me lower my hand. I didn't know if maybe I had done something wrong. Maybe her recent promotion to super mod came with a requirement to be more formal towards her. Before I could ask what she wanted, she began speaking.
"Sacred, you're needed at the Bat Cave." I grew confused and felt deceived.
"The bat cave?" I asked. The bat cave was the meeting place for all the higher-ups (besides the NTFs of course). Although everyone knew about the bat cave, no one knows where it's located. So when Mantha brought this up to me, I felt a little unbalanced.
"Yes." Mantha said, "You've been called upon by the admins. Now let's get going." She turned around and started walking. She turned back around when she realized I wasn't following.
"Are you coming?" she said.
"Can I at least finished my breakfast first?" Mantha sighed but let me finish quickly. After about a minute I came running out of the house to Mantha's side.
"So..." I said, "Where exactly is the bat cave?"
"I'm not obligated to tell you." she said.
"But, we're going there anyway right?" I said, "So why not tell me? I'll just find out when we get there."
"No you won't." replied Mantha. I grew confused at that moment. But then I saw Mantha pull something out from her pocket. Next thing I knew I was unconscious. Everything was black for a bit, but then I felt the coldness of the ground below my face. I opened my eyes to see a dark cavern wall in front of my eyes. I pushed myself up from off the ground. Regaining my consciousness, I took a look around. I seemed to be in a well-lit cave. So much for knowing the location of the Bat Cave. A voice broke me away from my thoughts, however.
"Wake up." it said. I turned around to see the face of Gavel not too far from me. "Get your mind back in shape. You're needed."
"What exactly am I needed for?" I asked.
"Don't worry about it." he said, "Now head through those doors. Everything will be explained soon." He pointed towards a set of doors that had mysteriously popped up in the cavern wall. Before I could say anything else, Gavel had already walked away. I wasn't sure what for exactly. But as he asked, I walked through the set of doors. What I entered was a large hexagonal room. Looking from left to right, I saw different people who seemed to be getting suited up. When I closed the doors behind me, they all took a look at me, then went back to what they were doing.
"Um, can someone tell me exactly what's going on here?" I asked. Just then I felt a hand on my shoulder. Looking to my right I met eye to eye with a man. He put his hand out to shake.
"Hey there, I'm Devour." he said, "Nice to meet you." I shook hands with him.
"The name's Sacred." I said, "Can you tell me exactly what's going on?"
"Well my friend," Devour started, "You have been summoned by the admins. The reason for that I'm still not sure. All I know is, we need to get suited up."
"Why are we suiting up though?" I asked.
"That I'm not sure either." Devour said, "But if you look over there, you'll see a bunch of lockers with our names on them." He pointed towards one of the walls where a bunch of lockers stood. One of them had my name on it.
"The key to you locker is in your pocket." said Devour. I reached my hand into my pocket to find a key as he said. I went to my locker and opened it. Inside I found an AS50 sniper rifle. I picked it up and it almost made me lean over. Well of course the admins know about my sniping. They pretty much have info on anyone in town. I looked through the green scope that was attached. Looks like this thing has built in night vision. I also pulled out a Deagle. I guess it was for if things got too close.
"Damn!" Devour said as he walked over to me. "That is one badass sniper."
"Yeah it is." I said still overwhelmed by it's awesomeness. "By the way, who are the other guys?"
"Ah. Well see that guy with the sword?" he pointed at him. "That's Tortuga." I knew Tortuga, he was my neighbor after all.
"Now see that dude with the Berettas?" Devour said as he pointed to another, "That's Cosmo. He's really good at being silent when it comes to killing. He also smokes a ****load and really doesn't give a damn. I'm not exactly sure why he's still here."
However apparently Cosmo heard us, because he turned towards us and said, "The only reason why I'm here is because Gav promised a big bag of weed. So don't think I actually want to do this." He then turned back around looking at his Berettas.
"Yeah." Devour said, "Now see that guy over there with the chain gun?" I looked.
"That's ScatMan. He's the only guy that actually volunteered for this job. I'm not sure exactly how he found out about this. But either way, that chain gun looks kick ass." Indeed that chain gun did. "He also carries a shotgun too."
"What about that guy?" I pointed towards a man who stood at least 6'10. He was holding an axe in one hand and a flail in the other.
"Oh him? That's Oblivion." Devour said. The name suited him well. "He doesn't really talk much. So there's not much to say about him." If by not much he meant he didn't want to say anything. That guy looks like he can crack my skull with one punch!
"WORK DAMNIT!" a voice shouted. I looked over to see a guy slamming his pistol against the wall.
"Who's that?" I asked.
"Oh, that's Blasphemer. But we just call him MoD. He's an asshole." You don't say. "I'm not exactly sure why he was even chosen for this mission. Probably because of his short temper." All MoD seemed to have was an array of pistols.
"And that guy with the BMG700," Devour said, "That's Myself. He and that gun can probably blow a hole through an entire building."
I turned my head to see a man holding a chainsaw in one hand, and a flamethrower in the other. They seemed to be on but were not making much noise.
"What about him?" I asked.
"That's Dinomut. Apparently he's created a silenced chainsaw and flamethrower. I'm not sure how that's physically possible, but he's done it."
It seemed like I was introduced to everyone in the room. However I saw someone sitting in the back corner looking at a throwing knife.
"Who's that guy back there?" I asked.
"I'm not exactly sure." Devour said, "He never told us his name, so we kinda just call him the Dude." In his free hand he seemed to be holding an AK-47. "But from what he told us, his accuracy is deadly."
I took a look around at all the badasses that surrounded me in this room. I felt pretty surprised that I was included in the team. But I guess one hell of a sniper is good help
"Oh yeah," I said. "What about you Devour?"
"Me?" he said, "Oh well nothing special. I just carry around a STI .40 and a hunting knife. With weapons like these I can run extremely fast from one place to another." Yeah, that sure is nothing.
Just then, a large screen on the upper portion of the wall turned on.

CHAPTER 2

On the screen appeared Paperclip. Of the admins, Paperclip was more of the community representative. He was more in touch with us then the other admins.
"Perfect," he said, "You're all here. Then I believe it's now time to-"
"Hey Paperclip!" MoD shouted, "Why're we here?!"
"I was just getting to that..." Paperclip said annoyed, "You see, rumors have been going around Stickpage. Apparently people are saying that a spam attack is being planned at this very moment."
"Well is there?" ScatMan asked.
"We're not sure. That's why we've collected you all here. See the thing is-"
"Wait why're you getting us together?" MoD said blurting out again, "If you're not sure it's true then what're we supposed to do? Search the Earth?"
"If you'd shut up and let me talk," Paperclip continued, "I could tell you." Sighing he went back to what he was saying.
"See the thing is, at first we were just going to let the rumors die down overtime. But then something happened that made us think otherwise. It-"
"And what was it?" MoD blurted again.
"MoD if you interrupt me again, you will banned for life this time." Paperclip said now very angry. MoD shut his mouth.
"Ahem." Paperclip continued, "At first we didn't believe this to be true. However something recent made us think otherwise. If you guys haven't noticed, no new citizens have been entering the city."
"Isn't that a good thing?" Cosmo said, "They usually just fill space anyway."
"This is different than just no one coming to the forums anymore. The Registration building on the outskirts of town has been silent for quite a long time. We've phoned it a bunch but no one has been answering. And with the rumors going around, you never know."
"That's impossible." Dinomut said, "For the longest time no one has even really payed attention to our website. Why would we suddenly be under attack?"
"How about you take a good look around." Paper replied, "The city has just been rebuilt. At any moment of all it's at its weakest point. If a spam attack were to happen now, we'd be screwed completely." Everyone went silent, including me. He was right. Of anytime, now would be the best for an attack. We've heard the things other cities say about us. Calling us Dickpage and shit. But I never thought anyone was actually serious on hating our city. Hell we've never done anything to them. So why would they attack in the first place?
"Anyway like I said." Paper started again, "We're not exactly sure if these rumors are true or not. Or in fact if anything is wrong over in the registration building. And at times like these, you can never be too careful."
"So then, why us?" Tortuga asked.
"Well we took a look around the citizens, and we've decided that you 10 are the best suited for this type of mission. With your weapons training and skills, all of you should be able to take care of any trouble easily."
"What happens if we go there and there's a bunch of noobs who are raging from not being enabled into the town?" asked Myself.
"I highly doubt that." Paperclip said, "Now that you guys have been informed of the mission. It's time for you to get moving. The faster you get there, the better."
"How're we getting there?" I asked.
"You'll be transported by an undercover truck we provided." Paperclip said, "You'll be able to move subtly without being noticed by any noobs."
We arrived to the truck after being knocked out again. On the side of the truck, was sprayed, "Noob Killer."
Oh yeah, this is going to be completely undercover...

CHAPTER 3

The man spray-painting "Noob Killer" turned around.
"Well hey there partners." he said, "The name's RUiN. I will be your escort." Well, this is going to be an interesting trip.
"Up there is my partner in crime Floydyboy. You can call him Floyd though." We all looked up to another man in the turret of the truck. He waved and then continued to work on the gun.
"I thought this was supposed to be an undercover mission." Cosmo said.
"Define, 'Undercover'" replied RUiN.
"Not driving around a truck that gives away our mission to the enemy." Tortuga said.
"I don't know about you guys, but I'm digging this guy." MoD said. He then hopped into the truck high-fiving RUiN on the way in. All of us followed seeing as how we had no choice anyway. There was enough room in the back for all of us to slide in. I was farthest on the inside sitting across from MoD. On my right sat Oblivion as the rest settled into their seats. RUiN climbed into his driver's seat and turned around towards us.
"Now all of you be ready. We're heading straight into enemy territory! The ride is going to be a little rough, and I'm sure none of us are going to make it back alive. But that's the price you pay for going into battle!" Doesn't he understand that this is only a surveillance mission? There's a tiny chance there's going to be any "enemy" there anyway. I'm sure we're just going to go over there to find a bunch of lazy asses who don't feel like picking up or fixing there phones.
By the time I finished my thoughts the truck had started up and RUiN had hit the gas pedal. I took a look out the window because I wasn't sure where we even were yet. However it just seemed like we were in the back part of the city. I sat back onto the wall behind me and gripped my sniper. It's still hard to believe I'm on this mission. Hell it's hard to believe that this mission is even happening. This mission itself is a little weird. I mean, they grouped together the most powerful people of Stickpage, just to go make sure that the registration building is fine? Even if there were just a bunch of noobs there, they could've easily sent 1 or 2 NTFs over to calm things down. So what's this all about? There's definitely more to this mission then they're telling us. But I'm already heading out, so why worry? I guess we'll just have to see exactly what's waiting for me. So to pass the time I decided to talk with someone. Seeing how he sat next to me, I said "What's up." to Oblivion. He didn't say anything back. Nor did he even make any movement to acknowledge that he heard me. But I know he did.
"So," I started, "How's that axe and flail of yours? Are you any good with them?" He turned his head slowly and gave me a stare.
"It's a Halberd and a Morning Star." he said, his voice deep and frightening.
"Excuse me?" I said.
"The axe is called a Halberd. And the flail is called a Morning Star."
"Um, okay?" He turned around and looked back ahead of himself. Well, I guess that conversation failed to develop well. I decided not to speak the rest of the way to make things less awkward.

CHAPTER 4

For the first half of the ride no one spoke to each other all that much. It was really awkward. Two people spoke every now and then but it was ended quickly. Eventually however Cosmo spoke up.
"So what do you guys think is over at the registration building?" he said.
"I bet you it's probably nothing." Tortuga replied.
"There needs to be something," said ScatMan in his russian accent, "Why else would the admins send us?"
"They told us exactly why," Devour spoke up, "It's because rumors are spreading and they're really skeptical. So they need someone to send in."
"By why us?" I asked, "Why not send a mod or something?"
"Stickpage just got rebuilt, " Devour said, "Pretty much all the higher-ups are busy keeping peace among the streets. And hell, there are some things we can do that even the mods can't compete with."
"That's true." I said. I suppose he's right. There's nothing wrong or suspicious with this mission. I guess the only thing I'm confused about is why pick me? All I have is good sniping abilities. Hell give anyone a really good sniper and you can say they're good. So why me? Man, I'm worrying too much. I'm already on this mission, so why bother questioning it? Just go to the empty registration building, find out everything is okay, go home, and have some soup. Then I can live my average day like I always do, peaceful-SCREEEEEECH.
The entire truck then started swerving. Everyone almost started falling out of their seats.
"What the hell is going on?!" shouted Dinomut.
"We're being fired at!" RUiN shouted back.
"By who?!" Myself yelled.
"I'm not sure!" RUiN said, "But they're hitting us hard with machine guns! Floyd! Get on the turret!" Floydyboy then nodded and lifted up the hatch above him. He then stood on his seat and grabbed a hold of his turret.
"Those modifications you make on em' safe?" RUiN shouted up to him.
"I'm not sure!" Floyd shouted back, "This is the first time I get to test em!"
"God damnit." RUiN said to himself. Feeling extremely unsafe, I grabbed a hold of my seat and clenched.
"Here goes nothin!" Floyd shouted. He then pulled back a stick and pulled the dual triggers. Out of the cannon fired a glowing light yellow ball at an extremely high speed. Upon impact of where the guns were shooting from, the ball disappeared in an immense explosion.
"Holy shit! It works!" RUiN shouted. Floyd started hitting the gunfire with a barrage over and over. I managed to pull myself up to the front seat as everyone was being tossed and turned across the back.
"Where are they shooting us from?!" I said to him.
"It looks like it's coming from the registration building!" RUiN said still trying to keep the transport stable. Well ****! You gotta be kidding me! So the rumors are true!? I'm not sure yet. But there's only one way to find out.
"Can you get us inside?!" I shouted.
"Of course I can!" shouted RUiN, "I'm the best god damn driver in Stickpage! Get back in your seat! This is going to get rough!" As if it wasn't already. Following instructions, I sat back down in my seat trying to keep my balance.
"Hang on everyone!" I shouted back to them, "It's about to get bumpy!" Everyone then tried harder to keep there balance as RUiN started doing twists and turns that almost flipped the transport. Floyd was still up on the turret and was trying hard not to hit the actual building. After all it was the registration building. Destroying it would be the exact opposite of our mission. But the problem was that the gunfire was coming from inside the building. So we pretty much had no way of successfully killing these attackers without destroying the objective.
"WE'RE HEADING FOR THE BACK PARKING LOT!" RUiN shouted back to us trying to raise his voice above the turret firing, "ONCE WE'RE THERE I'LL MAKE A STOP AND FLOYD WILL HOLD THEM OFF WHILE YOU GUYS EXIT THE VEHICLE! GET INSIDE THE BUILDING AND FIGURE OUT WHAT THE HELL IS GOING ON! FOR STICKPAGE!!!"
Is he crazy?! We're being fired at by hundreds of guns! There's no way we'll make it through the parking lot! After giving us his motivational speech, RUiN took an extremely sharp turn making the vehicle slide. He then ran the transport through a laced fence and came to a complete halt in the parking lot.
"I'LL BE BACK TO PICK YOU GUYS UP IN AN HALF AN HOUR. SYNC YOUR WATCHES, AND BE SURE TO BE IN THIS SAME LOT BY THAT TIME!" RUiN shouted back again. Everyone then began syncing their watches as did I. Once I did I then tried to cope with my surroundings. Floyd had started firing in random directions to scare off our attackers. The door in the back of the car started to slowly open. Quickly everyone started gathering their equipment, as did I. The door slowly widened more. The possibility of me getting shot in that massive gunfire is huge.
Shit, why am I even doing this? The door opened more.
This is stupid, I'm going to get killed! The door was almost fully open as one bullet after another hit the truck. One bullet actually flew inside the truck into the back but luckily just hit the floor.
This is a suicide mission! The door then opened all the way. "GO GO GO!!!" RUiN shouted. My feet moved on their own and I chased behind everyone right out the back of the transport truck straight into gunfire.

FUUUUUUUUUU-

CHAPTER 5

-UUUUUUUUUUUUUUUCK!!!!

I charged ahead with the other for the doors. Bullets flew left and right of me. The sounds of the impacts flying all around me made me spiral. I almost fell but had to keep my balance. Why'd RUiN have to park so god damn far away?! The explosions of Floyd's gun in the distance also smacked my ears. I almost went deaf. But before I knew it I was past the doors inside the building. We were in the entrance room so all was quiet now. Everyone sat there breathing heavily. Most intense moment of my life. I tried to speak, but my throat was filled with gasps and attempts to breathe. Finally Myself spoke up.
"Holy shit! I can't believe we all made it alive." he said.
"Don't get your hopes up," said The Dude, "We still have to infiltrate the building and figure out what the **** is going on."
Loading up his dual pistols on the other side of the room Blasphemer said, "Well they just tried to kill me, so I don't have a problem with that." He's right. Those fagolas just tried to pop a cap in my ass. I'm going to return fire sooner or later. Cosmo lit up a j and put it in his mouth. Figures.
"I guess it's time to get moving." said Tortuga. Everyone got a hold of their breath. We headed for the doors that lead inside. I'm sure we'll be able to get the element of surprise on these guys. We opened the doors and there stood many gunmen on different floors aiming at us. Or not. Quickly all of us split in different directions as more gunfire was laid upon us. I ran to the left and took cover behind a column that sat next to a flower patch for scenery. Next to me Cosmo slid on his knees into cover behind the flower patch, the j still in his mouth.
"Shit man! What do we do?" I said to him.
"We fire back!" he said. He then stood off his knees and fired a shot out of each of his Berettas. Each bullet hit one of the gunmen in the head. He then fired more killing off at least 5 more gunmen. Wanting to do my part I turned the corner of the column and fired at a gunman hitting him the leg. He collapsed quickly. I then went back around the column sliding in another bullet into my AS50. Meanwhile on the right side behind the flower patch sat Scatman, Myself, and Devour. All returning fire. Myself fired his BMG and pierced through 2 gunmen at once. The second was coming up from cover and was hit. Guy never had a chance. The rest of the four ran up ahead and took cover behind a fountain in the middle of the room. Not smart however as they were pinned down.
"Cosmo!" I said, "We need to cover them as they make their move up! Fire at the gunmen on the second level!"
"Gotcha!" he said. We then fired at the second level gunmen. Taking out 3 of them. The others on the right side of the room understood and followed. The 4 up ahead noticed the opening and charged forward killing off all the first level gunmen. I fired off the last gunman's head on the second level. That makes about 5 I killed. In total there was about 30 gunmen. We all met in front of the fountain.
"“There is nothing like a challenge to bring out the best in man.” Dinomut said.
"Thanks for the cover back there." Tortuga said.
"No problem." I replied.
"Why were there so many gunmen?" asked Devour.
"Lots of gunmen, lots of secrets." said ScatMan.

CHAPTER 6

I took a look around the now bullet destroyed lobby of the registration building. I'm going to have to place this in my mind somewhere. Because from the looks of it, this is where it'll all start. My thoughts succumbed when the squad started speaking again. Devour had returned from the clerks desk with what seemed to be a map.
"These are the blueprints of the building." he said. "Now from what our mission says, we need to find out what the hell is going on. So we need to search this place. From this lobby we can go to either the east or west wing of the building. From then on we'll spread our team farther so we can cover more ground." So we decided to divide the team in half. 5 go east, 5 go west. Now this is the part that scared me. Because there were so many people trying to get into Stickpage, they had to divide the building into two wings. The west wing was to cut down how many people who made it to the east wing. That means useless noobs, bots, spammers, and other idiots were taken there. This place was built to be able to withstand those kind of people. What the hell is going on now. And worst part of it was, I was tasked with the west wing. Oh great. Luckily however I was teamed up The Dude, Dinomut, Tortuga, and Myself. I felt pretty safe around those guys. Devour then gave our team a copy of the map and The Dude put it in his pocket.
"Good luck in there guys," Devour said, "You're going to need it." That makes me feel better. Reluctantly I obliged and walked with the other 4 into the hallway with the sign above it saying "West Wing" which seemed it was about to fall off. The hallway was dark. All the lights that would be lighting it up were now off. It was almost impossible to see. Then Myself turned on the flashlight on his BMG. Then The Dude followed turning on the one attached to his AK. We followed them as they slowly lit up the trail. Walking down the almost endless hallway I saw door after door passing us left and right. Every time we passed one, someone would check through the window to see if it's safe. All the rooms were just interview rooms with a table in the middle of it. They would ask the member general questions and if they failed to answer or provide some type of bad info, they would be told to leave the building and be denied registration. Safety first kids. Being in the back with Dinomut made me feel open. Occasionally I turned around to make sure our back was clear. It would be hard to tell but my vision would pull through and assure me no one was behind us.
"Stay quiet," Tortuga whispered, "Anyone can ambush us from anywhere."
"We need somewhere to converse." I said. "Let's find an empty room."
"All the rooms are empty." Myself said.
"You don't know that." I replied. We stopped on a door that came up on our right. Everyone crowded around it. Myself and The Dude both looked at each other and nodded. Slowly opening the door the two peeked in with their flashlights. The room was empty. We all walked inside and closed the door behind us. We had one flashlight on the floor and the other in Myself's hands as he continued to look around the room to secure our perimeter. The Dude then pulled the copy of the map Devour gave us out of his pocket and spread it across the floor.
"So this hallway that we're going down right now eventually splits into a fork." he said, "Although they separate, the hallways meet again at the tip of the wing into a final office. This office was the room for the manager of the building."
"So then where are the guys on the east wing heading to?" I asked.
"From the looks of it," The Dude said, "The east wing is built the exact same way. Except at the end of it rests the CEO's office. That must be the guy who watches over the registration place."
"That would be ZuLu." Dinomut said.
"Really?" Tortuga said confused, "He's been here? No wonder no one's seen him around Stickpage for the longest time."
"Yup," Dinomut said, "He resided here after the reconstruction and took watch over the registration. That's why he really isn't considered an admin of the city anymore." This was news to me. Even I didn't know that.
"Back to what I was saying," The Dude started again, "Since there is five of us, we're going to have to unevenly split us up. Since me and myself have the flashlights, we'll make two different teams."
"Wait," Tortuga said pointing to Myself, "You don't only have the flashlight. He does too."
"That's what I just said." said The Dude.
"No, you said you and yourself." said Tortuga.
"No look! Me and the Myself that's standing up have the flashlights!" replied the frustrated Dude.
"Oh! Okay sorry about that." Tortuga said apologizing. Myself just sighed and shook his head as he looked down.
Then something hit the door. As quickly as we could, we all stood up and aimed our guns at the door. Everything went dead silent. No sound came again, but I just had a feeling....that something was behind that door.

CHAPTER 7

Silence fell upon the room. It was dead silent. The only thing on our focus was the door. Something was behind it. What were we supposed to do? Open it ourselves? Or wait for it to be open? I'm not sure, but we just stood there. It could've been a gunman, but something was different. Something told me it wasn't. Whatever was behind that door was even worse. I clenched my sniper tighter. What if maybe it was nothing? Maybe a rat? It seemed like hours we stood there, really it was only 30 seconds. Then, slowly Myself quietly stepped over to the door, not making a sound. His flashlight had been turned off, and The Dude followed. In the dimness that I could see, Myself put a finger over his mouth making the "be quiet" motion. Already following the order, we stood there. Very slowly, he turned the knob with as little noise as possible. He slowly creaked it open with one hand having his other clenched onto his BMG pointing at the door. It made it 's trip a quarter of the way....SLAM.
The door was smashed wide open and something flew through the door. It jumped at me and I put my sniper in front of me as a shield. It tried putting it's head over to bite at me, but I threw it off and it flew at the floor. I then fired my sniper directly into it. It lay there lifeless.
"JESUS!" I shouted, "WHAT IN THE **** WAS THAT?!"
The Dude and Myself quickly flashed the lights on it. It was a crazed newb. Its mouth wide open and it's eyes colorless. It looked disgusting.
"What the hell is this?" Myself said in an angry tone.
"There's something going on here that's bigger than we thought." Dinomut said.
"You can say that again!" I shouted still in a state of mini-shock. I felt my bones shaking. That was too close. If I hadn't reacted fast enough, I would've been newb-chow.
"I've got no doubt in my mind that this place is crawling with more of them." The Dude said as he continued to secure our perimeter. I finally got my mind back into shape.
"So what were you saying?" Dinomut asked The Dude.
"Right. Well since me and Myself have the flashlights, we'll have to be on different teams. And there will have to be a team of two and another of three. So we have to decide now."
"I think I can handle the team of two, since I've got the BMG." Myself said.
"Okay," The Dude said, "Well then take Tortuga with you. That sword can come in handy if one of those things gets too close for comfort."
"Gotcha." Myself said.
"That means Dinomut and Sacred, you guys are with me." The Dude said. We both nodded.
"The split shouldn't be much farther now, so let's go." The Dude started off. The rest followed and we continued our original search down the single hallway. Then, the split came.
The Dude said, "Good luck you two. Make it back alive at the end."
"You don't have to worry about us." Myself said hunching his BMG over his shoulder, "We'll be fine." Myself then turned around and walked down his hallway on the right. Tortuga followed clenching his weapons. Then they disappeared in the darkness.
"Alright, stay close you guys." The Dude said, "These things can be anywhere. We need to search every room and find out what the **** is going on."
"We'll cover you." I said. We then followed him slowly and continued our search down the hallway room after room. Unsurprisingly, each room was empty. It felt like this was a pointless search. We haven't found one single room with any evidence. Forget evidence, anything at all! I wonder if all the other guys are doing okay.
"Wait! Sh!" The Dude said. Me and Dinomut stopped. "You guys hear that?"
"Hear what?" Dinomut said.
"Hang on hang on." The Dude said quieting Dinomut. We went silent and sat still. I didn't hear anything. But then we stood there for a few seconds, and then something caught my ear. As I listened closer, I noticed it was in the distance. It was.....behind us! We all quickly turned around. Shrieking and shouting was being echoed down the hallway. I looked through the scope of my rifle and turned on night vision. I froze.
"****! RUN!" I shouted. I then started running and the other 2 followed. What I saw, was the entire hallway we walked through being consumed by a raging fleet of newbs. And when I say consumed, I mean the hallway was disappeared in body after body of mindless maniacs. As we ran I fired backwards. I know every now and then I made a dent in the swarm, but it would just be filled again. I don't know. The swarm was in the darkness behind us. I didn't know if it was getting closer or not. All I knew was, it was still chasing us. I ran as fast I can. The Dude fired back with his AK killing off many newbs. Then, Dinomut pulled out a tiny capsule of gasoline. Quickly he opened it and twirled it on the walls and floors that we were passing. The he pulled his flamethrower from behind him and lit the capsule itself. He then threw it backwards and continued to run. As I looked back, I saw the entire hallway light up in flames. Running through burning were the mindless newbs.
"Oh great," I said to Dinomut, "Now they're on fire!"

CHAPTER 8

The hallway lit up. The burning zombies were catching up. Shit if we keep running like this, we'll be screwed. Then an idea popped into my head.
"HEY DINO!" Raising my voice over the sounds of the shrieking.
"WHAT?!" he yelled back.
"PULL OUT YOUR CHAINSAW! I HAVE AN IDEA!" I shouted. He did so and pulled out his chainsaw, "OKAY TURN IT ON WHILE I MESS WITH MY SNIPER."
"WHAT'RE YOU PLANNING?" The Dude shouted still firing back into the swarm of newbs.
"I'M MESSING WITH MY SNIPER'S MODIFICATIONS TO HAVE IT FIRE AS FAST AS I WANT. I'M ALSO INCREASING THE RECOIL." I yelled.
"WHAT'LL THAT DO?!" he yelled.
"JUST HANG ON." I yelled back. Dinomut got his chainsaw running. "OKAY DINOMUT, SET THAT THING TO SPIN TWICE AS FAST."
"IT ALREADY SPINS AT DOUBLE THE SPEED OF A NORMAL CHAINSAW THOUGH." he yelled back.
"I KNOW, JUST DO IT." He complied. He fixed his chainsaw to do so.
"OKAY" I said, "GIVE IT HERE!"
"WHAT? NO! THIS IS MINE!" Dinomut yelled.
"DO YOU WANT TO LIVE THROUGH THIS OR NOT?" I yelled. He reluctantly gave me his chainsaw.
"THANKS!" I yelled. I then swung the chainsaw into the wall on my right and grinded it down the hallway through the wall.
"WHAT THE **** ARE YOU DOING!?!" Dinomut yelled, "YOU COULD BREAK IT!"
"JUST GRAB ONTO MY ARMS AND HANG ON!" I yelled.
"ISN'T THAT A LITTLE GAY?!" The Dude shouted.
"DOES IT ****ING MATTER?!" I yelled. They both grabbed onto my arms. "GOOD!" I yelled. The zombies were now only feet away. I could feel the heat of their burning bodies go against my back. **** I hope this works. I jumped into the air with the chainsaw in the wall still in my grip. In the air I did a full 180 turn, switching the chainsaw into my left hand and the sniper into my right. Aiming my sniper directly at the swarm only inches away.
"WHAT THE FUUUUU-" The Dude shouted in mid air. Then I fired my sniper. Then again. And again. And again. I was firing my sniper at an impossible speed. We started flying backwards. Going at least 5 times faster then originally. The wind was blowing against my back hard. Holding the chainsaw in the wall I held us up in the air with an arm's strength and continued to fire. We were literally flying down the hallway.
"HOLY SHIT!!!" Dinomut shouted. Holy shit indeed. It ****ing worked! The fire got dimmer and next thing you know it disappeared in the darkness.
"YES!" I shouted. My excitement died when we crashed right into and through a door. We hit the ground and skidded. The impact of the door slowed us dramatically and we stopped sliding across the carpet floor. I think I got rug burn. I looked around. This room was different. It seemed like an office.
"WHAT ARE YOU DOING?! YOU'RE GOING TO LET THEM IN!" I heard a voice say. Dinomut stood.
"Who're you?" he said.
"I'm the manager of this place! I was hiding in this room behind that metal door! It was able to keep out the newbs, but now you've destroyed it!" Just then Tortuga and Myself came running into the doorway.
"GUYS!" Tortuga shouted, "THEY'RE COMING!"
"Who's coming?" I said sitting up holding my head.
"A swarm of newbs!" he shouted.
Oh COME ON!

CHAPTER 9

We all stood and quickly re-armed ourselves. Tortuga and Myself came running into the office. The sounds of the shrieks returned, except they were louder this time because they were coming from both hallways. Quickly we did the first thing to come to mind, we took cover behind the managers thick desk and turned in on its side.
"What're you doing?!" the manager shouted.
"Shut up and get down!" Dinomut shouted. Too frightened to understand what's going on, the manager did so.
"Shit, so what do we do now?" Myself asked.
"Well the newbs can only get through that small doorway." The Dude said, "Seeing as how we're pinned down, there's only one thing we can do."
"What?" I said, "Are you crazy? That'll never work! Eventually they're going to break through at our times of reload!"
"Then we'll have to take turns." The Dude replied. "Two at a time. Myself and Tortuga first, then me and Sacred."
"What about me?" Dinomut asked.
"You've already done enough making flaming newbs possible. Sit back. The only other weapon is your chainsaw which won't work in this situation." This being true, Dinomut sighed and sat back. The shrieking grew louder. They were almost here.
"Okay remember," The Dude started, "As soon as you have to reload, shout it out. Then your partner will follow. Once then the other two will start firing. In your time of reload, I want you to reload as fast as possible! Got it?" We all nodded. The shrieking was now close. This is it. Ground zero. Our stand at the source. We either live or die here.
I peeked over the turned table. Here they come. 5...4...3...2...1. Then a newb's face came into view.
"FIRE!" The Dude shouted. Myself and Tortuga then stood and fired there weapons into the incoming swarm. I didn't look, I only heard screaming and the impact of the bullets into flesh. Then I heard the magic word.
"RELOADING!" shouted Myself. Quickly him and Tortuga took cover and I stood with The Dude. We both fired our weapons into the swarm. The second I started firing, I couldn't believe my eyes as it seemed like an infinite number of newbs were infiltrating. Body after body fell in the hall and into the doorway. The Dude, having an AK, was doing a lot more damage. But my sniper still provided a lot of support since I still had it modified into rapid fire mode.
I killed at least 30 before The Dude shouted "RELOADING!" I then practically hurt my ass dropping at an extreme speed. Quickly Myself and Tortuga stood again and started firing. I flew the clip out of my sniper and dropped it on the floor, not worrying about where it goes. I then pulled another from my pocket and slid it into the holster. Then I pulled the joint back and loaded up my sniper. I reloaded quicker than expected. The Dude had just finished loading his AK-47, which is a lot quicker to reload than a sniper. A few seconds later Myself and Tortuga reloaded again. After hearing them say it, me and The Dude stood. But then, there were no more newbs. Everything went silent besides the sound of Tortuga and Myself reloading.
"Did we...kill them all?" I asked.
"No..." The Dude said, "We killed so many, that their bodies blocked up the doorway..."

Devour
04-13-2010, 05:18 PM
You better actually follow through with these. These are awesome to both write about and read about. :D

Devour
-Proficient with a medium caliber pistol, but prefers to use hunting knives for their speed, and because they don't make much sound when put into use. He's also trained himself to run very fast so he can get to place to place quickly and quietly.
A funny guy who isn't angered easily. Tries not to piss other people off in turn, unless they deserve it.

Sacred
04-13-2010, 05:27 PM
You better actually follow through with these. These are awesome to both write about and read about. :D.

Yes, which is exactly why I know to keep up with this. It's depressing to come back the next day to see nothing progressed.

WINK WINK NUDGE NUDGE

Devour
04-13-2010, 06:48 PM
Ok then I'll make a deal with you. Every update you make, I'll make a update for my story. And vice versa for you.
What say you

Sacred
04-13-2010, 06:54 PM
I say a deal's a deal my friend. Let it begin. However if you make any chapter before all my spots are filled then I can't post it. So don't try to pull anything there.

The Dude
04-13-2010, 06:57 PM
Name: Unknown, we all just call him The Dude.
Wields an AK-47 with deadly accuracy, also uses throwing knives, the accuracy is ten fold.
He can be funny, serious, or a dick. If you annoy him, he'll call you out on it.

Sumfink
04-13-2010, 07:18 PM
I'll just be a side character. Any part at all will suit me, really, since I'm not well-known.

Sumfink
Seems to have ties to a great power outside SPP, though obscure within it. No weapon visible, but on rare occasions where he has to fight, he is seen wielding a large, blunt object that can never be glimpsed long enough to be identified... a lamp, perhaps? Shows respect to his enemies, avoids killing as much as possible, though he has no reservations about disarming/disabling. Can usually talk his way out of a bad situation. Sometimes refers to himself in the third person.

Sacred
04-13-2010, 07:32 PM
I'll put you in sumfink. But you're only a side character. So the entire background story you made won't be used, sorry.

But don't worry, you'll still make an appearance.

Cosmo
04-13-2010, 08:26 PM
Cosmo:
His weapons are 2 silenced Beretta 92FS's, and he's damn good with them. He is trained in the art of killing you without ever ****ing knowing he was there, unless he wanted to play with you a little first then you wish he just killed your ass 2 miles back when he first started to follow you. He is known to smoke a j after he kills, or before, and also during.
He really didn't want to be selected for this mission but he was promised a big ol bag of weed (damn you gavel) and he cannot say no to that.

edit: also you 2 better keep to your deal, i want to see them written dammit

Myself
04-13-2010, 09:47 PM
I'm in and I use one of these
http://www.accuratereloading.com/bmg700.jpg
and it shoots these
http://kr.img.blog.yahoo.com/ybi/1/dc/67/funnyblog/folder/1610412/img_1610412_1280584_0?1188881046.jpg

Background story?

No.

Sacred
04-13-2010, 09:49 PM
Can you give me the name? Not really aware of most gun types and names.

Myself
04-13-2010, 09:51 PM
BMG700

It shoots .700 rounds

ScatMan
04-13-2010, 10:06 PM
ScatMan
-He is heavy weapons guy. And this, is his weapon. Basically a spiced up chaingun, has a decent rate of fire. Also carries a shotgun, as depicted below.
(http://www.dreadgazebo.com/gunporn/wp-content/uploads/2007/12/12gaugepump.jpg) http://www.bendarling.net/update_july09/chaingun_hp_final_01.jpg
Backstory: Hailing from a Russian/American family, ScatMan was trained by his father to be a proud solider, although he also spent time studying electronic devices. As such, ScatMan is skilled in the art of the bullet, and also in that of electronic devices. Not the best English skills, but still gets the message through. Will occasionally shout in Russian, confusing most people. He weighs one-hundred fifty kilograms and stands at two meters tall. Always hides his face behind his odd mask and helmet.
IMPORTANT EDIT: I will provide a photo for visual purposes. I think this fits pretty well.
http://i39.tinypic.com/25jwpvr.jpg

Sacred
04-13-2010, 10:12 PM
I'm just going to give you a chain gun.

Tortuga
04-13-2010, 10:52 PM
Tortuga.
Weapon(s):Wielded in left hand, a thin rapier of sorts, in right hand a blow-back pistol, presumably this one (http://upload.wikimedia.org/wikipedia/commons/0/0d/Taurus_PT145_Disassembled.jpg)
Physique: Tall (6'1"ish), abnormally skinny. Very quick and nimble.
Personality: Very bold, views things in simple terms. Once he has made his mind, he does not change it.

Blasphemer
04-13-2010, 11:09 PM
MoD - Blasphemer - Whatever you wanna put me down as -

Wields whatever he can find. Notorious for being an asshole. Is often the missing component to a group, however - making sure everything stays in order while completely blasting it OUT of order.

A total ****ing tyrant.

Sacred
04-13-2010, 11:12 PM
I'm only adding Blasphemer to add story.

Or actually he's just going to be a spot filler. If someone wants to join that I find more suitable for the spot, replaced.

Blasphemer
04-14-2010, 12:18 AM
:c I thought you loved me.

Dinomut
04-14-2010, 12:27 AM
Dinomut
-weilds a silenced flamethrower in one hand and a silenced chainsaw in the other. Can burn down an entire warehouse and chaisaw a thousand people to death without the guards hearing a single thing.

Zed
04-14-2010, 03:08 AM
I'll have a cameo role at the side if you've got one going.

Scarecrow
04-14-2010, 03:20 AM
Side character Scarecrow
Uses one of these (w/ scope)
http://www.magnumresearch.com/BFR.asp

Zero
04-14-2010, 05:41 AM
I can be the side character if you want to. Do I need to make a background story?

Sacred
04-14-2010, 06:49 AM
Do I need to make a background story?

Nope, and all added.

Devour
04-14-2010, 08:30 AM
Cool this is almost filled up

Yummerz
04-14-2010, 08:40 AM
Can be a guy who shows up,saves your live and joins the team but gets killed off after wards?

ScatMan
04-14-2010, 09:05 AM
Can be a guy who shows up,saves your live and joins the team but gets killed off after wards?
http://www.winnipegheights.com/forums/vbclassified/uploaded/cwxv32jv.jpg
Last level of Halo 3, much?

Sacred
04-14-2010, 11:29 AM
Can be a guy who shows up,saves your live and joins the team but gets killed off after wards?

No, but you will be a side character.

Scarecrow
04-14-2010, 03:45 PM
you should totally have some scene or something where i'm on a different mission and our paths cross and i'm killing like 3247984 guys or something B)

Sacred
04-14-2010, 03:54 PM
Scarecrow, it's just not possible to make a scene with you that's not badass. Have no fear. ;D

Scarecrow
04-14-2010, 04:05 PM
Scarecrow, it's just not possible to make a scene with you that's not badass. Have no fear. ;D

k :3

dienuts
04-14-2010, 04:17 PM
:c I thought you loved me.
im not trying to be rude or anything but really sounded gay.

RUiN
04-14-2010, 05:15 PM
RUiN
-Loves using his Double barrel shotgun and any type of object that ends killing someone painfully and makes there remains a mess. Uses his speed to his advantage from years of sports. Is completely bloodthirsty at times. Totally in love with fun. A funny guy in general. Tries not to piss other people off in turn, unless they deserve it. Relates with devour.

Devour
04-14-2010, 05:31 PM
Also when/if ScatMan dies, can I be the one who kills him
I have a disliking for his random spewing of 4chan memes.

Sacred
04-14-2010, 05:37 PM
Eh, RUiN (mr. mcstick) I don't really think you're that well-known among the forums just yet. But I'll make you a side character.

And only one more spot peeps.

ScatMan
04-14-2010, 06:10 PM
Yeah, this looks interesting. I hope this gets started/finished.

Also, I'm surprised I actually made it on the main character list. Thanks for that.

RUiN
04-14-2010, 06:20 PM
Eh, RUiN (mr. mcstick) I don't really think you're that well-known among the forums just yet. But I'll make you a side character.

And only one more spot peeps.

Awwww, not surprised. Worth a try I have to suppose huh?

Floydyboy
04-14-2010, 06:20 PM
Floydyboy
-Tech man. Good with computers and anything mechanical. Has a Desert Eagle pistol and a machete, just in case he has to get into any real fighting. Dislikes most other people but has a grudging respect for a few. Believes he is a good driver, but in truth he is a total speed maniac.

Oblivion EX
04-14-2010, 06:23 PM
Oblivion EX -
Tall stature, squared jaw. Usually silent. Likes to wield weapons such as a Halberd, and keeps a Morning Star by his side in case he has to crack some skulls. Loves him some cigars. If pissed off you better run like **** or else your legs will end up in a tree whilst your head has been smashed into the concrete.

Hrm. I hope I can grab that last spot.

Sacred
04-14-2010, 06:52 PM
Yeah, this looks interesting. I hope this gets started/finished.

Also, I'm surprised I actually made it on the main character list. Thanks for that.

No problem Scat.


Awwww, not surprised. Worth a try I have to suppose huh?


Floydyboy
-Tech man. Good with computers and anything mechanical. Has a Desert Eagle pistol and a machete, just in case he has to get into any real fighting. Dislikes most other people but has a grudging respect for a few. Believes he is a good driver, but in truth he is a total speed maniac.

Sorry floyd, need a little more reknown. I'll make you a side character though, with some tech skills.


Oblivion EX -
Tall stature, squared jaw. Usually silent. Likes to wield weapons such as a Halberd, and keeps a Morning Star by his side in case he has to crack some skulls. Loves him some cigars. If pissed off you better run like **** or else your legs will end up in a tree whilst your head has been smashed into the concrete.

Hrm. I hope I can grab that last spot.

Well you're in luck, bud.

Alright, time to start writing.

Oblivion EX
04-14-2010, 06:56 PM
Huzzah, Thanks man.

Sacred
04-14-2010, 07:09 PM
So I just whipped up a little prologue so that all you readers out there understand what the whole entire setting is of the story:

I woke up to yet another ordinary day. Opening the blinds I looked out at our town of Stickpage. Full of life and imagination, it always put a smile on my face when I looked out at it from my second story window. Hopping out of bed and throwing my clothes on, I threw myself down the stairs to eat some breakfast. I poured my self some Sticko's cereal and ate away at the good flavor. Yet another care-free day of living in the small town of creativity. Stickpage used to be different believe it or not. We used to have a building we called the Portal, where many people would go in with their creations and show them to the public. However many thought this useless as they could simply share the creations as their own without the process of having papers to fill. And the entire city itself has just been refurbished. It looks much cleaner than ever. However, many are still getting used to the new city. So it will take some time for us to completely cope with the new town. All in all however, today would just be another ordinary day in Stickpage. Or at least, that's what I thought...

Devour
04-14-2010, 07:17 PM
Cool, looks like I'd better write an update on my story so that you have to make on on yours

RUiN
04-14-2010, 07:19 PM
Good so far man.

Zed
04-14-2010, 07:35 PM
Where may I purchase these "Stickos"? They sound delicious.

Sacred
04-14-2010, 07:42 PM
They're only in every brand store in town. You just need to look harder.

ScatMan
04-14-2010, 08:19 PM
sAcReD, I updated my bio a bit for some more backstory. You know, flesh up the character. And toned down the chaingun Rate of Fire so it's not so kickass.

Sacred
04-14-2010, 08:28 PM
sAcReD, I updated my bio a bit for some more backstory. You know, flesh up the character. And toned down the chaingun Rate of Fire so it's not so kickass.

Added.

And guys what I plan on doing is at the beginning of the story, is we all just know each other as badass mother****ers. But then when the story gets more in-depth, all the backstories are revealed. So if you haven't added a backstory, and you want your person to actually have some type of characterization, go ahead and add one.

Oblivion EX
04-14-2010, 08:48 PM
I'll get to thinking of something to write for my backstory.

Sacred
04-14-2010, 08:55 PM
CHAPTER 1

I heard a knock come from my door. I put my spoon down and walked to the door. Unlocking and opening it, I found Mantha standing at my doorstep. After standing there for a second or two, I put a cheery face on and slightly waved.
"Oh hey Mantha." I said. I always treated Mantha as a friend to me, I never found out though if she thought the same back. Her serious face however made me lower my hand. I didn't know if maybe I had done something wrong. Maybe her recent promotion to super mod came with a requirement to be more formal towards her. Before I could ask what she wanted, she began speaking.
"Sacred, you're needed at the Bat Cave." I grew confused and felt deceived.
"The bat cave?" I asked. The bat cave was the meeting place for all the higher-ups (besides the NTFs of course). Although everyone knew about the bat cave, no one knows where it's located. So when Mantha brought this up to me, I felt a little unbalanced.
"Yes." Mantha said, "You've been called upon by the admins. Now let's get going." She turned around and started walking. She turned back around when she realized I wasn't following.
"Are you coming?" she said.
"Can I at least finished my breakfast first?" Mantha sighed but let me finish quickly. After about a minute I came running out of the house to Mantha's side.
"So..." I said, "Where exactly is the bat cave?"
"I'm not obligated to tell you." she said.
"But, we're going there anyway right?" I said, "So why not tell me? I'll just find out when we get there."
"No you won't." replied Mantha. I grew confused at that moment. But then I saw Mantha pull something out from her pocket. Next thing I knew I was unconscious. Everything was black for a bit, but then I felt the coldness of the ground below my face. I opened my eyes to see a dark cavern wall in front of my eyes. I pushed myself up from off the ground. Regaining my consciousness, I took a look around. I seemed to be in a well-lit cave. So much for knowing the location of the Bat Cave. A voice broke me away from my thoughts, however.
"Wake up." it said. I turned around to see the face of Gavel not too far from me. "Get your mind back in shape. You're needed."
"What exactly am I needed for?" I asked.
"Don't worry about it." he said, "Now head through those doors. Everything will be explained soon." He pointed towards a set of doors that had mysteriously popped up in the cavern wall. Before I could say anything else, Gavel had already walked away. I wasn't sure what for exactly. But as he asked, I walked through the set of doors. What I entered was a large hexagonal room. Looking from left to right, I saw different people who seemed to be getting suited up. When I closed the doors behind me, they all took a look at me, then went back to what they were doing.
"Um, can someone tell me exactly what's going on here?" I asked. Just then I felt a hand on my shoulder. Looking to my right I met eye to eye with a man. He put his hand out to shake.
"Hey there, I'm Devour." he said, "Nice to meet you." I shook hands with him.
"The name's Sacred." I said, "Can you tell me exactly what's going on?"
"Well my friend," Devour started, "You have been summoned by the admins. The reason for that I'm still not sure. All I know is, we need to get suited up."
"Why are we suiting up though?" I asked.
"That I'm not sure either." Devour said, "But if you look over there, you'll see a bunch of lockers with our names on them." He pointed towards one of the walls where a bunch of lockers stood. One of them had my name on it.
"The key to you locker is in your pocket." said Devour. I reached my hand into my pocket to find a key as he said. I went to my locker and opened it. Inside I found an AS50 sniper rifle. I picked it up and it almost made me lean over. Well of course the admins know about my sniping. They pretty much have info on anyone in town. I looked through the green scope that was attached. Looks like this thing has built in night vision. I also pulled out a Deagle. I guess it was for if things got too close.
"Damn!" Devour said as he walked over to me. "That is one badass sniper."
"Yeah it is." I said still overwhelmed by it's awesomeness. "By the way, who are the other guys?"
"Ah. Well see that guy with the sword?" he pointed at him. "That's Tortuga." I knew Tortuga, he was my neighbor after all.
"Now see that dude with the Berettas?" Devour said as he pointed to another, "That's Cosmo. He's really good at being silent when it comes to killing. He also smokes a ****load and really doesn't give a damn. I'm not exactly sure why he's still here."
However apparently Cosmo heard us, because he turned towards us and said, "The only reason why I'm here is because Gav promised a big bag of weed. So don't think I actually want to do this." He then turned back around looking at his Berettas.
"Yeah." Devour said, "Now see that guy over there with the chain gun?" I looked.
"That's ScatMan. He's the only guy that actually volunteered for this job. I'm not sure exactly sure how he found out about this. But either way, that chain gun looks kick ass." Indeed that chain gun did. "He also carries a shotgun too."
"What about that guy?" I pointed towards a man who stood at least 6'10. He was holding an axe in one hand and a flail in the other.
"Oh him? That's Oblivion." Devour said. The name suited him well. "He doesn't really talk much. So there's not much to say about him." If by not much he meant he didn't want to say anything. That guy looks like he can crack my skull with one punch!
"WORK DAMNIT!" a voice shouted. I looked over to see a guy slamming his pistol against the wall.
"Who's that?" I asked.
"Oh, that's Blasphemer. But we just call him MoD. He's an asshole." You don't say. "I'm not exactly sure why he was even chosen for this mission. Probably because of his short temper." All MoD seemed to have was an array of pistols.
"And that guy with the BMG700," Devour said, "That's Myself. He and that gun can probably blow a hole through an entire building."
I turned my head to see a man holding a chainsaw in one hand, and a flamethrower in the other. They seemed to be on but were not making much noise.
"What about him?" I asked.
"That's Dinomut. Apparently he's created a silenced chainsaw and flamethrower. I'm not sure how that's physically possible, but he's done it."
It seemed like I was introduced to everyone in the room. However I saw someone sitting in the back corner looking at a throwing knife.
"Who's that guy back there?" I asked.
"I'm not exactly sure." Devour said, "He never told us his name, so we kinda just call him the Dude." In his free hand he seemed to be holding an AK-47. "But from what he told us, his accuracy is deadly."
I took a look around at all the badasses that surrounded me in this room. I felt pretty surprised that I was included in the team. But I guess one hell of a sniper is good help
"Oh yeah," I said. "What about you Devour?"
"Me?" he said, "Oh well nothing special. I just carry around a STI .40 and a hunting knife. With weapons like these I can run extremely fast from one place to another." Yeah, that sure is nothing.
Just then, a large screen on the upper portion of the wall turned on.

Devour
04-14-2010, 09:22 PM
-Devour
Proficient with a medium caliber pistol, but prefers to use hunting knives for their speed, and because they don't make much sound when put into use. He's also trained himself to run very fast so he can get to place to place quickly and quietly. A funny guy who isn't angered easily. Tries not to piss other people off in turn, unless they deserve it.

Backstory: Actually enjoys the sunset or starry nights or things like that, has a twin brother, can kill the noobs involved with the "spam attack" without a second thought, but wouldn't want to kill a normal person if there was any other choice but to do so.

Edit: Good stuff so far. Can't wait to see how it turns out.
I was assuming you'd google some random pistol use that, instead of me actually saying "I carry around a medium caliber pistol."
Instead I shall be more specific. I carry around an STI .40 (Google images help if you want more info on it)

Sacred
04-14-2010, 09:30 PM
Backstory: Actually enjoys the sunset or starry nights or things like that, has a twin brother, can kill the noobs involved with the "spam attack" without a second thought, but wouldn't want to kill a normal person if there was any other choice but to do so.

Updated .

Zero
04-14-2010, 09:38 PM
Great story! Kept me entertained to the end. Apparently, no story here has ever done that before(Except 2, I suppose). Keep up the good work though.

Devour
04-14-2010, 09:54 PM
Edit: Good stuff so far. Can't wait to see how it turns out.
I was assuming you'd google some random pistol use that, instead of me actually saying "I carry around a medium caliber pistol."
Instead I shall be more specific. I carry around an STI .40 (Google images help if you want more info on it)

Edited my post, but I fear it may be lost with the new page.

Sacred
04-14-2010, 09:58 PM
It has not been lost for I am efficient.

The Dude
04-14-2010, 10:44 PM
I laughed about Cosmo just being there for a huge bag of weed.
Keep it going sAcReD.

Scarecrow
04-14-2010, 11:46 PM
I turned my head to see a man holding a chainsaw in one hand, and a flamethrower in the other. They seemed to be on but were not making much noise.
"What about him?" I asked.
"That's Dinomut. Apparently he's created a silenced chainsaw and flamethrower. I'm not sure how that's physically possible, but he's done it."

I chuckled, nice one


I don't know if you have plans for where this is going, but if you need any ideas, here's one: you could make this a prequel to mine and devour's story; an attempt to prevent the noob outbreak... that in the end, after a dramatic and exciting adventure, JUST BARELY fails : o!!!

Devour
04-15-2010, 12:06 AM
This is a pretty swell idea

Sacred
04-15-2010, 01:00 AM
We'll have to see where it goes. I don't want to spoil anything, but I do have an idea of what's going to happen in the future of this story.

Sumfink
04-15-2010, 04:31 AM
That's pretty sweet writing, can't wait to see how it turns out.

And I know I'm just a side character, but I'd appreciate it if you could get in at least one epic lamp-kill.

Scar
04-15-2010, 05:17 AM
hey can i join?..

errr...this may sound weird but...lol...

Name: Daniel
carries a Sonic Yoyo(can this be accepted?if not,ill be carrying a silenced Dragonuv
http://www.imt.net/~mele/images/dragunov1.gif (http://www.imt.net/%7Emele/images/dragunov1.gif))
also carries a first aid pack.
he can be funny..

ScatMan
04-15-2010, 07:49 AM
Wow, that's nice so far. I lol'd at the part where MoD comes in.

Zed
04-15-2010, 08:09 AM
I'm loving it so far. Can't wait for more.

Sacred
04-15-2010, 08:21 AM
hey can i join?..

errr...this may sound weird but...lol...

Name: Daniel
carries a Sonic Yoyo(can this be accepted?if not,ill be carrying a silenced Dragonuv
http://www.imt.net/~mele/images/dragunov1.gif (http://www.imt.net/%7Emele/images/dragunov1.gif))
also carries a first aid pack.
he can be funny..

Failing to read big red font makes me want to not even let you be a side character.

ScatMan
04-15-2010, 08:45 AM
Hey, one quick question.
Are any connections between the main characters (How ScatMan knows Mantha, how Devour feels toward The Dude, etc) going to be explained besides you and Tortuga being neighbors? Like history between them?

Sacred
04-15-2010, 04:43 PM
Probably .

Oblivion EX
04-15-2010, 04:49 PM
Update to my backstory:
Not much is known from where he came, The best anyone can guess is that it was hellish and torturous, and left him with many physical and mental scars. (one of the mental scars is the lack of talking. he will say a few things now and then Including "**** off," "move," "ugh," and "ah shit", but most of the time, unless in hectic situations, these are almost inaudible)

Sacred
04-15-2010, 06:19 PM
CHAPTER 2

On the screen appeared Paperclip. Of the admins, Paperclip was more of the community representative. He was more in touch with us then the other admins.
"Perfect," he said, "You're all here. Then I believe it's now time to-"
"Hey Paperclip!" MoD shouted, "Why're we here?!"
"I was just getting to that..." Paperclip said annoyed, "You see, rumors have been going around Stickpage. Apparently people are saying that a spam attack is being planned at this very moment."
"Well is there?" ScatMan asked.
"We're not sure. That's why we've collected you all here. See the thing is-"
"Wait why're you getting us together?" MoD said blurting out again, "If you're not sure it's true then what're we supposed to do? Search the Earth?"
"If you'd shut up and let me talk," Paperclip continued, "I could tell you." Sighing he went back to what he was saying.
"See the thing is, at first we were just going to let the rumors die down overtime. But then something happened that made us think otherwise. It-"
"And what was it?" MoD blurted again.
"MoD if you interrupt me again, you will banned for life this time." Paperclip said now very angry. MoD shut his mouth.
"Ahem." Paperclip continued, "At first we didn't believe this to be true. However something recent made us think otherwise. If you guys haven't noticed, no new citizens have been entering the city."
"Isn't that a good thing?" Cosmo said, "They usually just fill space anyway."
"This is different than just no one coming to the forums anymore. The Registration building on the outskirts of town has been silent for quite a long time. We've phoned it a bunch but no one has been answering. And with the rumors going around, you never know."
"That's impossible." Dinomut said, "For the longest time no one has even really payed attention to our website. Why would we suddenly be under attack?"
"How about you take a good look around." Paper replied, "The city has just been rebuilt. At any moment of all it's at its weakest point. If a spam attack were to happen now, we'd be screwed completely." Everyone went silent, including me. He was right. Of anytime, now would be the best for an attack. We've heard the things other cities say about us. Calling us Dickpage and shit. But I never thought anyone was actually serious on hating our city. Hell we've never done anything to them. So why would they attack in the first place?
"Anyway like I said." Paper started again, "We're not exactly sure if these rumors are true or not. Or in fact if anything is wrong over in the registration building. And at times like these, you can never be too careful."
"So then, why us?" Tortuga asked.
"Well we took a look around the citizens, and we've decided that you 10 are the best suited for this type of mission. With your weapons training and skills, all of you should be able to take care of any trouble easily."
"What happens if we go there and there's a bunch of noobs who are raging from not being enabled into the town?" asked Myself.
"I highly doubt that." Paperclip said, "Now that you guys have been informed of the mission. It's time for you to get moving. The faster you get there, the better."
"How're we getting there?" I asked.
"You'll be transported by an undercover truck we provided." Paperclip said, "You'll be able to move subtly without being noticed by any noobs."
We arrived to the truck after being knocked out again. On the side of the truck, was sprayed, "Noob Killer."
Oh yeah, this is going to be completely undercover...

Oblivion EX
04-15-2010, 06:32 PM
Oh my this is getting good, I can't wait to see the next chapter.

RUiN
04-15-2010, 06:48 PM
It is getting good, nice job so far man. Any way you could tell me what I'm doing in the story?

Time to check devours now.

Devour
04-15-2010, 06:52 PM
I am currently enrolled in driver classes and it is very hard for me to write on my part. Scarecrow is doing the next part and he doesn't have the same deal as me.

RUiN
04-15-2010, 07:20 PM
Aw that sucks.

Dinomut
04-15-2010, 07:48 PM
Backstory
- an expert engineer, he crafted the silent flamethrower and chainsaw combo with the intent of surprising the enemy in large numbers and dispatching them all at once to avoid an extended stealth mission. This however proved to be ineffective and he hit a roadblock when trying to create silenced flames as the brightness of burning bodies was drawing too much attention. He eventually used it simply to surprise the enemy in a quick head on charge and take advantage of the fact that nobody had any idea where he was in the confusion of a burning building. From there he'd use his chainsaw to silently destroy each and every soldier and, if necessary, tank/airplane nearby silently and ridiculously with the cover of a roaring inferno (he's fireproof by the way). He's been known to utter awesome Sean Connery caliber one-liners after each mission.
This strategy, however, would prove difficult for the other team members to cope with without dying, so he's made you all Cuban cigars with a fireproof serum inside, so it is now required that everyone has at least two Cuban cigars whenever initiating a mission.

Sacred
04-15-2010, 08:03 PM
Okay Dinomut. I understand how you create these amazingly awesome stories about how you're kickass, but let's tone it down a bit.

I don't really like making someone indestructible.

Zero
04-15-2010, 09:26 PM
I lol'd at the end. Good job man!

Dinomut
04-15-2010, 09:54 PM
He's fireproof, not bullet proof. Or punch proof. His weaknesses are water (derp) and concrete buildings where fire doesn't exactly spread well.

Sacred
04-15-2010, 09:55 PM
I'll accept your character. But I'm going to tweak it a little bit. I think I used indestructible out of context. I meant to see like an all-powerful person. So far I think the whole flamethrower and chainsaw that's silenced is already close to the limits.

Just let me know if you're okay with my tweaking.

Dinomut
04-15-2010, 09:58 PM
what about the cuban cigars

Sacred
04-15-2010, 10:00 PM
I'd like to have it as you being your own character. You're the only fireproof one. Makes you more unique.

Tortuga
04-15-2010, 10:03 PM
Moar !

Sacred
04-15-2010, 10:04 PM
Moar !

In time my friend.

ScatMan
04-15-2010, 10:34 PM
I think the video screen that opens up should be like a captcha and Devour's all like "Uh, eight, e, Pi- is that a square? I don't have a key for this... Are those hieroglyphics?"

Devour
04-15-2010, 10:39 PM
But I am much too smart to mistake Pi for a square

Sacred
04-15-2010, 11:09 PM
Unless it's a square pie! :O

ScatMan
04-15-2010, 11:24 PM
Or Pi squared.
I meant like "Okay, Pi- Wait, is that character which comes after pi a square?"

Devour
04-15-2010, 11:52 PM
The idiot personality suits you or MoD better.

Blasphemer
04-16-2010, 12:42 AM
Naw, I'm more the whole HEY WHY THE **** DONT WE KILL YOU INSTEAD YOU DUMB SHIT WHAT HAVE YOU DONE THIS ENTIRE TIME personality. The raging asshole.

Ashlander
04-16-2010, 12:48 AM
Ill be a side character too. Just uses a plain old .45. Ballsy, proud, generally has bad luck. Probably will die from a refridgerator falling on him, or some other dumb shit.

Sacred
04-16-2010, 12:52 AM
Don't worry MoD. I'm just making you a raging asshole in the beginning. Over time your character will have more of story. That is however, if you create one.

Blasphemer
04-16-2010, 12:59 AM
That sounds like something I can do.


Sad story style?

Anyways, I'm off.

Zed
04-16-2010, 03:49 AM
The raging asshole.

http://forums.stickpage.com/showthread.php?32600-Mhmm-i-like-this-style.

Kieran.
04-16-2010, 03:59 AM
I'm confused to how that relates. Zed.

Digichris
04-16-2010, 04:07 AM
http://forums.stickpage.com/showthread.php?32600-Mhmm-i-like-this-style.

http://www.mzzt.net/tf2/crit/450207/snipe/FE0315/You%20have%20been%20assassinated./default/%A0.png

Zed
04-16-2010, 06:17 AM
I'm confused to how that relates. Zed.

Raging arsehole. Furthest right animation. Geddit?

Kieran.
04-16-2010, 06:26 AM
oohhhh -.-#

ScatMan
04-16-2010, 07:21 AM
I wasn't calling Devour an idiot; I don't have a death wish. Seeing as how this town of Stickpage takes place in the internet or something, I thought it would make sense throw in those godamn annoying captchas.

Devour
04-16-2010, 08:19 AM
O i c

Sacred
04-16-2010, 09:58 AM
I get what you're saying Scat. But I'm trying to make this just like a city. I'm not trying to
make it sound like a city in cybernetic space.

Although that would be interesting.

ScatMan
04-16-2010, 10:03 AM
Yeah, I just thought that with the whole spam attack, Admins, noobs, etc. Ah well. The video could start out as a rickroll if you're taking themes from Stickpage.

Digichris
04-18-2010, 02:01 PM
Awesome story, loving it so far.

Sacred
04-18-2010, 04:50 PM
Sorry I haven't updated over the weekend guys. It was one hell of a busy few days.

Oblivion EX
04-18-2010, 05:04 PM
It's okay, we still love you.

Sacred
04-18-2010, 05:09 PM
It's okay, we still love you.

Phew. For a second there I got scared.

ScatMan
04-19-2010, 12:31 PM
Hm. I almost forgot to ask you something.
So, is it set up so that you determine everything that goes on or will we each have some amount of decision making power with our characters even slightly? I'm bot talking full-on RPG control, just like minor, eh, 'shifts' in events.

Sacred
04-20-2010, 04:49 PM
The only thing you guys get to affect is your own background story. Simply because those will be used as the story progresses.

Sacred
04-20-2010, 05:15 PM
CHAPTER 3

The man spray-painting "Noob Killer" turned around.
"Well hey there partners." he said, "The name's RUiN. I will be your escort." Well, this is going to be an interesting trip.
"Up there is my partner in crime Floydyboy. You can call him Floyd though." We all looked up to another man in the turret of the truck. He waved and then continued to work on the gun.
"I thought this was supposed to be an undercover mission." Cosmo said.
"Define, 'Undercover'" replied RUiN.
"Not driving around a truck that gives away our mission to the enemy." Tortuga said.
"I don't know about you guys, but I'm digging this guy." MoD said. He then hopped into the truck high-fiving RUiN on the way in. All of us followed seeing as how we had no choice anyway. There was enough room in the back for all of us to slide in. I was farthest on the inside sitting across from MoD. On my right sat Oblivion as the rest settled into their seats. RUiN climbed into his driver's seat and turned around towards us.
"Now all of you be ready. We're heading straight into enemy territory! The ride is going to be a little rough, and I'm sure none of us are going to make it back alive. But that's the price you pay for going into battle!" Doesn't he understand that this is only a surveillance mission? There's a tiny chance there's going to be any "enemy" there anyway. I'm sure we're just going to go over there to find a bunch of lazy asses who don't feel like picking up or fixing there phones.
By the time I finished my thoughts the truck had started up and RUiN had hit the gas pedal. I took a look out the window because I wasn't sure where we even were yet. However it just seemed like we were in the back part of the city. I sat back onto the wall behind me and gripped my sniper. It's still hard to believe I'm on this mission. Hell it's hard to believe that this mission is even happening. This mission itself is a little weird. I mean, they grouped together the most powerful people of Stickpage, just to go make sure that the registration building is fine? Even if there were just a bunch of noobs there, they could've easily sent 1 or 2 NTFs over to calm things down. So what's this all about? There's definitely more to this mission then they're telling us. But I'm already heading out, so why worry? I guess we'll just have to see exactly what's waiting for me. So to pass the time I decided to talk with someone. Seeing how he sat next to me, I said "What's up." to Oblivion. He didn't say anything back. Nor did he even make any movement to acknowledge that he heard me. But I know he did.
"So," I started, "How's that axe and flail of yours? Are you any good with them?" He turned his head slowly and gave me a stare.
"It's a Halberd and a Morning Star." he said, his voice deep and frightening.
"Excuse me?" I said.
"The axe is called a Halberd. And the flail is called a Morning Star."
"Um, okay?" He turned around and looked back ahead of himself. Well, I guess that conversation failed to develop well. I decided not to speak the rest of the way to make things less awkward.

Floydyboy
04-21-2010, 01:29 AM
Woohoo! I made my first appearance!

Zero
04-21-2010, 02:43 AM
Nice story mate. ;)

ScatMan
04-21-2010, 08:49 AM
http://images.starcraftmazter.net/4chan/for_forums/cool_story_bro.jpg

Scarecrow
04-21-2010, 03:38 PM
cool_story_bro.jpg

**** off

RUiN
04-21-2010, 05:06 PM
Woohoo! I made my first appearance!

Haha your my partner. Thats cool.

Well thanks for making me the kickass escort Sacred.

Sacred
04-21-2010, 05:11 PM
Haha your my partner. Thats cool.

Well thanks for making me the kickass escort Sacred.

Yup. There had to be some type of patriotic person in the story.

RUiN
04-21-2010, 05:16 PM
I'm surprised I wasn't at the gun actually. Lol. Have to like the role though, it fits.

Wartooth
04-21-2010, 05:16 PM
I'd love to make an appearance.. damn, if only if I was around during the start of this thread.

RUiN
04-21-2010, 05:26 PM
Are you in?

ScatMan
04-21-2010, 06:37 PM
**** off
Dude, I was being 9001% serious
It is a cool story

Oblivion EX
04-21-2010, 07:09 PM
Sacred, I must ask, what does this truck look like? just any old truck or some kind of military sort of thing? Because I so want to draw that scene between your character and mine. Priceless.

RUiN
04-21-2010, 07:16 PM
Dude, I was being 9001% serious
It is a cool story

The gay ass picture was annoying.

Devour
04-21-2010, 07:32 PM
@Scatman: So is your excessive use of memes. They are not funny and everyone would appreciate if you never used a meme on Stickpage ever. You'd probably seem like a normal guy once you stopped with those ****ing things.

Oh and I can't wait until the action starts on the story.

RUiN
04-21-2010, 07:34 PM
I hope I don't get sniped. (Damn you if that makes you write that. Lol JK)

Wartooth
04-21-2010, 09:23 PM
Are you in?

I requested..dur

ScatMan
04-21-2010, 09:26 PM
@Scatman: So is your excessive use of memes. They are not funny and everyone would appreciate if you never used a meme on Stickpage ever. You'd probably seem like a normal guy once you stopped with those ****ing things.

Oh and I can't wait until the action starts on the story.
Yeah, that was a little unnecessary. I'm gonna cut back on the memes. Go on a diet.

Sacred
04-21-2010, 09:52 PM
Sacred, I must ask, what does this truck look like? just any old truck or some kind of military sort of thing? Because I so want to draw that scene between your character and mine. Priceless.

Yeah picture it as the back of an army transport truck.


I requested..dur

You're in.

Oblivion EX
04-21-2010, 10:10 PM
Yeah picture it as the back of an army transport truck.

Sweet, I'll get to drawing that tomorrow, any specific things you want on your character? or any specific way you want him to look?

While I'm at it, I want the whole group (major characters only) to pm me with what they would like they're characters to look like physically, and I might just make us a group picture for this story.

Sacred
04-21-2010, 10:28 PM
Sweet, I'll get to drawing that tomorrow, any specific things you want on your character? or any specific way you want him to look?

While I'm at it, I want the whole group (major characters only) to pm me with what they would like they're characters to look like physically, and I might just make us a group picture for this story.

Ha cool. Well I'm a 5'7 guy with brown hair down to my ears and bangs covering my whole forehead. Glasses are optional. And if you want to draw the sniper I use...
http://future-weapons.org/images/AS50_sniper_rifle.jpg

ScatMan
04-22-2010, 07:38 AM
Alright, for future refference (Since people aren't going back to look at the second page) I posted a visual reference to what I look like for the story. The shotgun also gets a better visual look as shown in the pic.

Oblivion EX
04-22-2010, 06:19 PM
I have begun work on my first drawing based on this story, I maybe choose more scenes later to to this with, But I will decide later when more story has been posted.

RUiN
04-22-2010, 07:08 PM
That sounds cool. Can't wait to see it.

Sacred
04-22-2010, 07:39 PM
Next chapter is where shit gets real everyone.

Kick it.

RUiN
04-22-2010, 08:04 PM
Whens it coming?

Sacred
04-22-2010, 08:17 PM
Whenever I feel like it.

GAWD!

RUiN
04-22-2010, 08:19 PM
Lol. We won't hold it against you.

















Very often.

Oblivion EX
04-22-2010, 08:22 PM
Next chapter is where shit gets real everyone.

Kick it.

You gotta FIGHT... for your RIGHT... TO PAAAARTAAY!

RUiN
04-22-2010, 08:24 PM
You gotta FIGHT... for your RIGHT... TO PAAAARTAAY!

With me driving, hell yea.

Oblivion EX
04-22-2010, 08:33 PM
With me driving, hell yea.

Question, do you know what i was referencing?

RUiN
04-22-2010, 08:47 PM
I was referencing the party part. And I can guess but I don't know.
Beastie Boys song?

Oblivion EX
04-22-2010, 08:51 PM
I was referencing the party part. And I can guess but I don't know.
Beastie Boys song?

You would be correct.

Floydyboy
04-23-2010, 12:54 AM
Might I ask what kind of turret I'm manning?

Sacred
04-23-2010, 01:12 PM
Might I ask what kind of turret I'm manning?

You'll find out.

Oblivion EX
04-23-2010, 01:33 PM
I am most definitely anticipating the next chapter, I hope it's as good as I am imagining it to be.

RUiN
04-23-2010, 06:33 PM
It will be. Lol. And yes I know that song its ok. Ruined by gays.

Sacred
04-24-2010, 01:15 AM
CHAPTER 4

For the first half of the ride no one spoke to each other all that much. It was really awkward. Two people spoke every now and then but it was ended quickly. Eventually however Cosmo spoke up.
"So what do you guys think is over at the registration building?" he said.
"I bet you it's probably nothing." Tortuga replied.
"There needs to be something," said ScatMan in his russian accent, "Why else would the admins send us?"
"They told us exactly why," Devour spoke up, "It's because rumors are spreading and they're really skeptical. So they need someone to send in."
"By why us?" I asked, "Why not send a mod or something?"
"Stickpage just got rebuilt, " Devour said, "Pretty much all the higher-ups are busy keeping peace among the streets. And hell, there are some things we can do that even the mods can't compete with."
"That's true." I said. I suppose he's right. There's nothing wrong or suspicious with this mission. I guess the only thing I'm confused about is why pick me? All I have is good sniping abilities. Hell give anyone a really good sniper and you can say they're good. So why me? Man, I'm worrying too much. I'm already on this mission, so why bother questioning it? Just go to the empty registration building, find out everything is okay, go home, and have some soup. Then I can live my average day like I always do, peaceful-SCREEEEEECH.
The entire truck then started swerving. Everyone almost started falling out of their seats.
"What the hell is going on?!" shouted Dinomut.
"We're being fired at!" RUiN shouted back.
"By who?!" Myself yelled.
"I'm not sure!" RUiN said, "But they're hitting us hard with machine guns! Floyd! Get on the turret!" Floydyboy then nodded and lifted up the hatch above him. He then stood on his seat and grabbed a hold of his turret.
"Those modifications you make on em' safe?" RUiN shouted up to him.
"I'm not sure!" Floyd shouted back, "This is the first time I get to test em!"
"God damnit." RUiN said to himself. Feeling extremely unsafe, I grabbed a hold of my seat and clenched.
"Here goes nothin!" Floyd shouted. He then pulled back a stick and pulled the dual triggers. Out of the cannon fired a glowing light yellow ball at an extremely high speed. Upon impact of where the guns were shooting from, the ball disappeared in an immense explosion.
"Holy shit! It works!" RUiN shouted. Floyd started hitting the gunfire with a barrage over and over. I managed to pull myself up to the front seat as everyone was being tossed and turned across the back.
"Where are they shooting us from?!" I said to him.
"It looks like it's coming from the registration building!" RUiN said still trying to keep the transport stable. Well ****! You gotta be kidding me! So the rumors are true!? I'm not sure yet. But there's only one way to find out.
"Can you get us inside?!" I shouted.
"Of course I can!" shouted RUiN, "I'm the best god damn driver in Stickpage! Get back in your seat! This is going to get rough!" As if it wasn't already. Following instructions, I sat back down in my seat trying to keep my balance.
"Hang on everyone!" I shouted back to them, "It's about to get bumpy!" Everyone then tried harder to keep there balance as RUiN started doing twists and turns that almost flipped the transport. Floyd was still up on the turret and was trying hard not to hit the actual building. After all it was the registration building. Destroying it would be the exact opposite of our mission. But the problem was that the gunfire was coming from inside the building. So we pretty much had no way of successfully killing these attackers without destroying the objective.
"WE'RE HEADING FOR THE BACK PARKING LOT!" RUiN shouted back to us trying to raise his voice above the turret firing, "ONCE WE'RE THERE I'LL MAKE A STOP AND FLOYD WILL HOLD THEM OFF WHILE YOU GUYS EXIT THE VEHICLE! GET INSIDE THE BUILDING AND FIGURE OUT WHAT THE HELL IS GOING ON! FOR STICKPAGE!!!"
Is he crazy?! We're being fired at by hundreds of guns! There's no way we'll make it through the parking lot! After giving us his motivational speech, RUiN took an extremely sharp turn making the vehicle slide. He then ran the transport through a laced fence and came to a complete halt in the parking lot.
"I'LL BE BACK TO PICK YOU GUYS UP IN AN HALF AN HOUR. SYNC YOUR WATCHES, AND BE SURE TO BE IN THIS SAME LOT BY THAT TIME!" RUiN shouted back again. Everyone then began syncing their watches as did I. Once I did I then tried to cope with my surroundings. Floyd had started firing in random directions to scare off our attackers. The door in the back of the car started to slowly open. Quickly everyone started gathering their equipment, as did I. The door slowly widened more. The possibility of me getting shot in that massive gunfire is huge.
Shit, why am I even doing this? The door opened more.
This is stupid, I'm going to get killed! The door was almost fully open as one bullet after another hit the truck. One bullet actually flew inside the truck into the back but luckily just hit the floor.
This is a suicide mission! The door then opened all the way. "GO GO GO!!!" RUiN shouted. My feet moved on their own and I chased behind everyone right out the back of the transport truck straight into gunfire.

FUUUUUUUUUU-

Blasphemer
04-24-2010, 02:03 AM
Alright, inside joke. Every time somebody mentions a Mod or whatever, have me say MY NAME IS SPELT WITH A CAPITAL D or perk up and look angry.

RUiN
04-24-2010, 08:21 AM
Love it . Never thought I'd be in it so much. Lol. Its going great.

Sacred
04-24-2010, 12:33 PM
Well I mean when you join as a side character, you hope you can progress the story further and actually be involved. Your dreams get crushed however if you're just a character who pops up for a moment and then gets killed.

Tovarich Ivanov
04-24-2010, 01:03 PM
can i'm be in?

Oblivion EX
04-24-2010, 01:13 PM
Haha, I just imagined everyone in the truck sliding around, and me just sitting there looking like I'm getting pissed, without budging an inch.

Zed
04-24-2010, 01:24 PM
Nice work.

Btw, I've given you a post reserved for updates on the basis that you'll probably hit the character limit eventually.

ScatMan
04-24-2010, 01:29 PM
All I can picture of me is a big dude weighing down one side of the truck. Like, everything's tilted towards me and the truck's all sideways. :D

Oblivion EX
04-24-2010, 01:42 PM
All I can picture of me is a big dude weighing down one side of the truck. Like, everything's tilted towards me and the truck's all sideways. :D

I dunno scatman, based on your description, you aren't THAT heavy. I mean if you and I were on the same side of the truck then yes, we might weigh it down a bit. Even then It's a military grade truck, it would take a helluva lot to weigh it down. Like a bus full of 300+ pound kids or something.

ScatMan
04-24-2010, 01:51 PM
Yeah, I was just picturing a humor-ified version of that scene with some fatass weighing down the truck and like the left wheels aren't touching the ground. Like some shit out of a cartoon. Obviously I wouldn't be able to weigh down a military truck with only 150 kilograms.

Sacred
04-24-2010, 01:57 PM
Nice work.

Btw, I've given you a post reserved for updates on the basis that you'll probably hit the character limit eventually.

Oh hey thanks Zed. I really appreciate it.

Blasphemer
04-24-2010, 04:33 PM
I dont think I was mentioned once in that last update.


What? You expect me to be silent over this? I best be like arming a ****ing bomb or something.

RUiN
04-24-2010, 07:38 PM
Lol. Don't worry you'll be in next time guaranteed.

Floydyboy
04-24-2010, 07:39 PM
CHAPTER 4
"Those modifications you make on em' safe?" RUiN shouted up to him.
"I'm not sure!" Floyd shouted back, "This is the first time I get to test em!"
"God damnit." RUiN said to himself. Feeling extremely unsafe, I grabbed a hold of my seat and clenched.

I could imagine myself saying that. Nice.

ScatMan
04-24-2010, 07:45 PM
I dont think I was mentioned once in that last update.


What? You expect me to be silent over this? I best be like arming a ****ing bomb or something.

Maybe you were sneaking around, clinging to the underside of the truck. Being a sneaky mother****er.

RUiN
04-24-2010, 10:51 PM
I could imagine myself saying that. Nice.

Same with me saying damnit so much.

Sacred
04-25-2010, 12:27 AM
CHAPTER 5

-UUUUUUUUUUUUUUUCK!!!!

I charged ahead with the other for the doors. Bullets flew left and right of me. The sounds of the impacts flying all around me made me spiral. I almost fell but had to keep my balance. Why'd RUiN have to park so god damn far away?! The explosions of Floyd's gun in the distance also smacked my ears. I almost went deaf. But before I knew it I was past the doors inside the building. We were in the entrance room so all was quiet now. Everyone sat there breathing heavily. Most intense moment of my life. I tried to speak, but my throat was filled with gasps and attempts to breathe. Finally Myself spoke up.
"Holy shit! I can't believe we all made it alive." he said.
"Don't get your hopes up," said The Dude, "We still have to infiltrate the building and figure out what the **** is going on."
Loading up his dual pistols on the other side of the room Blasphemer said, "Well they just tried to kill me, so I don't have a problem with that." He's right. Those fagolas just tried to pop a cap in my ass. I'm going to return fire sooner or later. Cosmo lit up a j and put it in his mouth. Figures.
"I guess it's time to get moving." said Tortuga. Everyone got a hold of their breath. We headed for the doors that lead inside. I'm sure we'll be able to get the element of surprise on these guys. We opened the doors and there stood many gunmen on different floors aiming at us. Or not. Quickly all of us split in different directions as more gunfire was laid upon us. I ran to the left and took cover behind a column that sat next to a flower patch for scenery. Next to me Cosmo slid on his knees into cover behind the flower patch, the j still in his mouth.
"Shit man! What do we do?" I said to him.
"We fire back!" he said. He then stood off his knees and fired a shot out of each of his Berettas. Each bullet hit one of the gunmen in the head. He then fired more killing off at least 5 more gunmen. Wanting to do my part I turned the corner of the column and fired at a gunman hitting him the leg. He collapsed quickly. I then went back around the column sliding in another bullet into my AS50. Meanwhile on the right side behind the flower patch sat Scatman, Myself, and Devour. All returning fire. Myself fired his BMG and pierced through 2 gunmen at once. The second was coming up from cover and was hit. Guy never had a chance. The rest of the four ran up ahead and took cover behind a fountain in the middle of the room. Not smart however as they were pinned down.
"Cosmo!" I said, "We need to cover them as they make their move up! Fire at the gunmen on the second level!"
"Gotcha!" he said. We then fired at the second level gunmen. Taking out 3 of them. The others on the right side of the room understood and followed. The 4 up ahead noticed the opening and charged forward killing off all the first level gunmen. I fired off the last gunman's head on the second level. That makes about 5 I killed. In total there was about 30 gunmen. We all met in front of the fountain.
"“There is nothing like a challenge to bring out the best in man.” Dinomut said.
"Thanks for the cover back there." Tortuga said.
"No problem." I replied.
"Why were there so many gunmen?" asked Devour.
"Lots of gunmen, lots of secrets." said ScatMan.

RUiN
04-25-2010, 12:30 AM
Nice. Like the cliff hanger.

Those fagolas just tried to pop a cap in my ass.
Win.

Oblivion EX
04-25-2010, 12:37 AM
Epicness in it's truest form.

Cosmo
04-25-2010, 07:13 AM
bad-****ing-ass

ScatMan
04-25-2010, 11:39 AM
**** yeah, I'm shooting with Devour and Myself. You know, when this gets finished and maybe beefed up a little bit it could make an awesome movie.

Sacred
04-25-2010, 12:22 PM
CHAPTER 6

I took a look around the now bullet destroyed lobby of the registration building. I'm going to have to place this in my mind somewhere. Because from the looks of it, this is where it'll all start. My thoughts succumbed when the squad started speaking again. Devour had returned from the clerks desk with what seemed to be a map.
"These are the blueprints of the building." he said. "Now from what our mission says, we need to find out what the hell is going on. So we need to search this place. From this lobby we can go to either the east or west wing of the building. From then on we'll spread our team farther so we can cover more ground." So we decided to divide the team in half. 5 go east, 5 go west. Now this is the part that scared me. Because there were so many people trying to get into Stickpage, they had to divide the building into two wings. The west wing was to cut down how many people who made it to the east wing. That means useless noobs, bots, spammers, and other idiots were taken there. This place was built to be able to withstand those kind of people. What the hell is going on now. And worst part of it was, I was tasked with the west wing. Oh great. Luckily however I was teamed up The Dude, Dinomut, Tortuga, and Myself. I felt pretty safe around those guys. Devour then gave our team a copy of the map and The Dude put it in his pocket.
"Good luck in there guys," Devour said, "You're going to need it." That makes me feel better. Reluctantly I obliged and walked with the other 4 into the hallway with the sign above it saying "West Wing" which seemed it was about to fall off. The hallway was dark. All the lights that would be lighting it up were now off. It was almost impossible to see. Then Myself turned on the flashlight on his BMG. Then The Dude followed turning on the one attached to his AK. We followed them as they slowly lit up the trail. Walking down the almost endless hallway I saw door after door passing us left and right. Every time we passed one, someone would check through the window to see if it's safe. All the rooms were just interview rooms with a table in the middle of it. They would ask the member general questions and if they failed to answer or provide some type of bad info, they would be told to leave the building and be denied registration. Safety first kids. Being in the back with Dinomut made me feel open. Occasionally I turned around to make sure our back was clear. It would be hard to tell but my vision would pull through and assure me no one was behind us.
"Stay quiet," Tortuga whispered, "Anyone can ambush us from anywhere."
"We need somewhere to converse." I said. "Let's find an empty room."
"All the rooms are empty." Myself said.
"You don't know that." I replied. We stopped on a door that came up on our right. Everyone crowded around it. Myself and The Dude both looked at each other and nodded. Slowly opening the door the two peeked in with their flashlights. The room was empty. We all walked inside and closed the door behind us. We had one flashlight on the floor and the other in Myself's hands as he continued to look around the room to secure our perimeter. The Dude then pulled the copy of the map Devour gave us out of his pocket and spread it across the floor.
"So this hallway that we're going down right now eventually splits into a fork." he said, "Although they separate, the hallways meet again at the tip of the wing into a final office. This office was the room for the manager of the building."
"So then where are the guys on the east wing heading to?" I asked.
"From the looks of it," The Dude said, "The east wing is built the exact same way. Except at the end of it rests the CEO's office. That must be the guy who watches over the registration place."
"That would be ZuLu." Dinomut said.
"Really?" Tortuga said confused, "He's been here? No wonder no one's seen him around Stickpage for the longest time."
"Yup," Dinomut said, "He resided here after the reconstruction and took watch over the registration. That's why he really isn't considered an admin of the city anymore." This was news to me. Even I didn't know that.
"Back to what I was saying," The Dude started again, "Since there is five of us, we're going to have to unevenly split us up. Since me and myself have the flashlights, we'll make two different teams."
"Wait," Tortuga said pointing to Myself, "You don't only have the flashlight. He does too."
"That's what I just said." said The Dude.
"No, you said you and yourself." said Tortuga.
"No look! Me and the Myself that's standing up have the flashlights!" replied the frustrated Dude.
"Oh! Okay sorry about that." Tortuga said apologizing. Myself just sighed and shook his head as he looked down.
Then something hit the door. As quickly as we could, we all stood up and aimed our guns at the door. Everything went dead silent. No sound came again, but I just had a feeling....that something was behind that door.

Oblivion EX
04-25-2010, 12:38 PM
Sweet, still epic as ever. I hope the next chapter is about us East Wing folk.

Sacred
04-25-2010, 02:40 PM
Sweet, still epic as ever. I hope the next chapter is about us East Wing folk.

It's from my perspective. So that's unlikely. But don't worry the story goes on for a long time.

RUiN
04-25-2010, 02:42 PM
Then Myself turned on the flashlight on his BMG. Then The Dude followed turning on the one attached to his AK.

Then something hit the door. As quickly as we could, we all stood up and aimed our guns at the door. Everything went dead silent. No sound came again, but I just had a feeling....that something was behind that door.

The redundancy kind of annoyed me but other than that its going great.

Sacred
04-25-2010, 05:36 PM
The redundancy kind of annoyed me but other than that its going great.

Shut up, I was proving a point.

Tortuga
04-25-2010, 06:09 PM
Shut up, I was proving a point.

AH! the door is evil.

Floydyboy
04-25-2010, 06:20 PM
To bad I can't fit the turret in there. I could blast the shit of everything.

Cosmo
04-25-2010, 07:23 PM
GO GO GO GO WRITE WRITE WRITE WRITE

do it

The Dude
04-25-2010, 08:16 PM
Yay, you're shaping me up to look like a total bad ass!

:D

Blasphemer
04-26-2010, 08:14 AM
EAST SIDE MOTHER****ERS

You know it

Snowy
04-26-2010, 08:21 AM
Could I be some random girl found hiding inside somebodys backpack? :D

Zero
04-26-2010, 08:25 AM
So, Your this small snowy?

Snowy
04-26-2010, 08:28 AM
Nope its just a big backpack. B)

Zero
04-26-2010, 08:29 AM
It must be one hell of a backpack to make you fit inside there. O.o

Blasphemer
04-26-2010, 08:30 AM
Could I be some random girl found hiding on top of MoD's dick? :D
Fixed for truth

Scarecrow
04-26-2010, 08:37 AM
It must be one hell of a backpack to make you fit inside there. O.o

>implying that she is too large for the backpack

in b4 "are you calling me fat?"

Sacred
04-26-2010, 10:47 AM
I'll just put you as a side character snowy. And you'll make an appearance as devours sister in the story as well. :D

Devour
04-26-2010, 05:01 PM
It must be one hell of a backpack to make you fit inside there. O.o

Lol she would probably fit in a backpack actually. Not a school one for sure but a medium sized backpack could work for sure.
It would make a good punching bag.










Just kidding obviously.

Sacred
04-26-2010, 09:11 PM
CHAPTER 7

Silence fell upon the room. It was dead silent. The only thing on our focus was the door. Something was behind it. What were we supposed to do? Open it ourselves? Or wait for it to be open? I'm not sure, but we just stood there. It could've been a gunman, but something was different. Something told me it wasn't. Whatever was behind that door was even worse. I clenched my sniper tighter. What if maybe it was nothing? Maybe a rat? It seemed like hours we stood there, really it was only 30 seconds. Then, slowly Myself quietly stepped over to the door, not making a sound. His flashlight had been turned off, and The Dude followed. In the dimness that I could see, Myself put a finger over his mouth making the "be quiet" motion. Already following the order, we stood there. Very slowly, he turned the knob with as little noise as possible. He slowly creaked it open with one hand having his other clenched onto his BMG pointing at the door. It made it 's trip a quarter of the way....SLAM.
The door was smashed wide open and something flew through the door. It jumped at me and I put my sniper in front of me as a shield. It tried putting it's head over to bite at me, but I threw it off and it flew at the floor. I then fired my sniper directly into it. It lay there lifeless.
"JESUS!" I shouted, "WHAT IN THE **** WAS THAT?!"
The Dude and Myself quickly flashed the lights on it. It was a crazed newb. Its mouth wide open and it's eyes colorless. It looked disgusting.
"What the hell is this?" Myself said in an angry tone.
"There's something going on here that's bigger than we thought." Dinomut said.
"You can say that again!" I shouted still in a state of mini-shock. I felt my bones shaking. That was too close. If I hadn't reacted fast enough, I would've been newb-chow.
"I've got no doubt in my mind that this place is crawling with more of them." The Dude said as he continued to secure our perimeter. I finally got my mind back into shape.
"So what were you saying?" Dinomut asked The Dude.
"Right. Well since me and Myself have the flashlights, we'll have to be on different teams. And there will have to be a team of two and another of three. So we have to decide now."
"I think I can handle the team of two, since I've got the BMG." Myself said.
"Okay," The Dude said, "Well then take Tortuga with you. That sword can come in handy if one of those things gets too close for comfort."
"Gotcha." Myself said.
"That means Dinomut and Sacred, you guys are with me." The Dude said. We both nodded.
"The split shouldn't be much farther now, so let's go." The Dude started off. The rest followed and we continued our original search down the single hallway. Then, the split came.
The Dude said, "Good luck you two. Make it back alive at the end."
"You don't have to worry about us." Myself said hunching his BMG over his shoulder, "We'll be fine." Myself then turned around and walked down his hallway on the right. Tortuga followed clenching his weapons. Then they disappeared in the darkness.
"Alright, stay close you guys." The Dude said, "These things can be anywhere. We need to search every room and find out what the **** is going on."
"We'll cover you." I said. We then followed him slowly and continued our search down the hallway room after room. Unsurprisingly, each room was empty. It felt like this was a pointless search. We haven't found one single room with any evidence. Forget evidence, anything at all! I wonder if all the other guys are doing okay.
"Wait! Sh!" The Dude said. Me and Dinomut stopped. "You guys hear that?"
"Hear what?" Dinomut said.
"Hang on hang on." The Dude said quieting Dinomut. We went silent and sat still. I didn't hear anything. But then we stood there for a few seconds, and then something caught my ear. As I listened closer, I noticed it was in the distance. It was.....behind us! We all quickly turned around. Shrieking and shouting was being echoed down the hallway. I looked through the scope of my rifle and turned on night vision. I froze.
"****! RUN!" I shouted. I then started running and the other 2 followed. What I saw, was the entire hallway we walked through being consumed by a raging fleet of newbs. And when I say consumed, I mean the hallway was disappeared in body after body of mindless maniacs. As we ran I fired backwards. I know every now and then I made a dent in the swarm, but it would just be filled again. I don't know. The swarm was in the darkness behind us. I didn't know if it was getting closer or not. All I knew was, it was still chasing us. I ran as fast I can. The Dude fired back with his AK killing off many newbs. Then, Dinomut pulled out a tiny capsule of gasoline. Quickly he opened it and twirled it on the walls and floors that we were passing. The he pulled his flamethrower from behind him and lit the capsule itself. He then threw it backwards and continued to run. As I looked back, I saw the entire hallway light up in flames. Running through burning were the mindless newbs.
"Oh great," I said to Dinomut, "Now they're on fire!"

Oblivion EX
04-26-2010, 09:24 PM
I came. Shit man, this is getting intense.

Btw, I swear when that first newb jumped you, I heard the Hunter's scream from L4D...

Snowy
04-26-2010, 09:35 PM
I like it. Good writing :D
Maybe I could be the newly registered user whos all terrified of whats going on and I try following you guys for safety, even if you dont want me. And then say I get cornered or trapped some point in the future, and I transform into some crazy awesome thing that kills everything, and fall unconscious after o:

Zero
04-26-2010, 09:41 PM
Lol. I laughed at the part of "Now they're on fire!". Classic man. XD

Dinomut
04-26-2010, 09:46 PM
This is like, the best thing ever.

Sacred
04-26-2010, 09:49 PM
Thanks for all the compliments guys. It's only going to get more awesome.

The Dude
04-26-2010, 10:06 PM
Hey Sacred, I just wanna let you know...

I love you <3

Sacred
04-26-2010, 10:23 PM
Your guys' love has inspired me to write a second chapter within the night of the first. And if you thought that last chapter was awesome....well, just read. ;)
Also, read this while listening to fast paced action music. Makes it all the better.

CHAPTER 8

The hallway lit up. The burning zombies were catching up. Shit if we keep running like this, we'll be screwed. Then an idea popped into my head.
"HEY DINO!" Raising my voice over the sounds of the shrieking.
"WHAT?!" he yelled back.
"PULL OUT YOUR CHAINSAW! I HAVE AN IDEA!" I shouted. He did so and pulled out his chainsaw, "OKAY TURN IT ON WHILE I MESS WITH MY SNIPER."
"WHAT'RE YOU PLANNING?" The Dude shouted still firing back into the swarm of newbs.
"I'M MESSING WITH MY SNIPER'S MODIFICATIONS TO HAVE IT FIRE AS FAST AS I WANT. I'M ALSO INCREASING THE RECOIL." I yelled.
"WHAT'LL THAT DO?!" he yelled.
"JUST HANG ON." I yelled back. Dinomut got his chainsaw running. "OKAY DINOMUT, SET THAT THING TO SPIN TWICE AS FAST."
"IT ALREADY SPINS AT DOUBLE THE SPEED OF A NORMAL CHAINSAW THOUGH." he yelled back.
"I KNOW, JUST DO IT." He complied. He fixed his chainsaw to do so.
"OKAY" I said, "GIVE IT HERE!"
"WHAT? NO! THIS IS MINE!" Dinomut yelled.
"DO YOU WANT TO LIVE THROUGH THIS OR NOT?" I yelled. He reluctantly gave me his chainsaw.
"THANKS!" I yelled. I then swung the chainsaw into the wall on my right and grinded it down the hallway through the wall.
"WHAT THE **** ARE YOU DOING!?!" Dinomut yelled, "YOU COULD BREAK IT!"
"JUST GRAB ONTO MY ARMS AND HANG ON!" I yelled.
"ISN'T THAT A LITTLE GAY?!" The Dude shouted.
"DOES IT ****ING MATTER?!" I yelled. They both grabbed onto my arms. "GOOD!" I yelled. The zombies were now only feet away. I could feel the heat of their burning bodies go against my back. **** I hope this works. I jumped into the air with the chainsaw in the wall still in my grip. In the air I did a full 180 turn, switching the chainsaw into my left hand and the sniper into my right. Aiming my sniper directly at the swarm only inches away.
"WHAT THE FUUUUU-" The Dude shouted in mid air. Then I fired my sniper. Then again. And again. And again. I was firing my sniper at an impossible speed. We started flying backwards. Going at least 5 times faster then originally. The wind was blowing against my back hard. Holding the chainsaw in the wall I held us up in the air with an arm's strength and continued to fire. We were literally flying down the hallway.
"HOLY SHIT!!!" Dinomut shouted. Holy shit indeed. It ****ing worked! The fire got dimmer and next thing you know it disappeared in the darkness.
"YES!" I shouted. My excitement died when we crashed right into and through a door. We hit the ground and skidded. The impact of the door slowed us dramatically and we stopped sliding across the carpet floor. I think I got rug burn. I looked around. This room was different. It seemed like an office.
"WHAT ARE YOU DOING?! YOU'RE GOING TO LET THEM IN!" I heard a voice say. Dinomut stood.
"Who're you?" he said.
"I'm the manager of this place! I was hiding in this room behind that metal door! It was able to keep out the newbs, but now you've destroyed it!" Just then Tortuga and Myself came running into the doorway.
"GUYS!" Tortuga shouted, "THEY'RE COMING!"
"Who's coming?" I said sitting up holding my head.
"A swarm of newbs!" he shouted.
Oh COME ON!




Lots of caps, I know.

The Dude
04-26-2010, 10:34 PM
Yayyyy :D

Tortuga
04-26-2010, 10:37 PM
Shit man. Encore! Encore!

Go for a third!

Sacred
04-26-2010, 10:38 PM
Let me take a shower first. I get my best ideas when I'm wet.

The Dude
04-26-2010, 10:38 PM
Let me take a shower first. I get my best ideas when I'm wet.

Seeing me naked wasn't enough?

Sacred
04-26-2010, 10:43 PM
Seeing me naked wasn't enough?

That's just for my own pleasure.

The Dude
04-26-2010, 10:45 PM
That's just for my own pleasure.
My bad.

Oblivion EX
04-26-2010, 11:07 PM
Shiiiiiiiiiit, I listened to this: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=b4kU4Nuuo3Q While reading that... **** that was intense.

Sacred
04-26-2010, 11:29 PM
Yeah that's enough for me tonight. Updates tomorrow.

Zero
04-26-2010, 11:34 PM
Damn. It was intense with that song. More!!!

Dinomut
04-26-2010, 11:40 PM
hahahahhahahahahhahahahah **** yeah man, using the recoil of the sniper to push yourself backwards while riding on a chainsaw! We need more of this.

Sacred
04-26-2010, 11:42 PM
hahahahhahahahahhahahahah **** yeah man, using the recoil of the sniper to push yourself backwards while riding on a chainsaw! We need more of this.

More of it will come.

Blasphemer
04-27-2010, 12:23 AM
Right. Now do our side of the story and have us meet up

RUiN
04-27-2010, 06:14 AM
That was great. Bad ass man.

Sacred
04-28-2010, 11:05 AM
Sorry for the late update, last night was a busy night.


CHAPTER 9

We all stood and quickly re-armed ourselves. Tortuga and Myself came running into the office. The sounds of the shrieks returned, except they were louder this time because they were coming from both hallways. Quickly we did the first thing to come to mind, we took cover behind the managers thick desk and turned in on its side.
"What're you doing?!" the manager shouted.
"Shut up and get down!" Dinomut shouted. Too frightened to understand what's going on, the manager did so.
"Shit, so what do we do now?" Myself asked.
"Well the newbs can only get through that small doorway." The Dude said, "Seeing as how we're pinned down, there's only one thing we can do."
"What?" I said, "Are you crazy? That'll never work! Eventually they're going to break through at our times of reload!"
"Then we'll have to take turns." The Dude replied. "Two at a time. Myself and Tortuga first, then me and Sacred."
"What about me?" Dinomut asked.
"You've already done enough making flaming newbs possible. Sit back. The only other weapon is your chainsaw which won't work in this situation." This being true, Dinomut sighed and sat back. The shrieking grew louder. They were almost here.
"Okay remember," The Dude started, "As soon as you have to reload, shout it out. Then your partner will follow. Once then the other two will start firing. In your time of reload, I want you to reload as fast as possible! Got it?" We all nodded. The shrieking was now close. This is it. Ground zero. Our stand at the source. We either live or die here.
I peeked over the turned table. Here they come. 5...4...3...2...1. Then a newb's face came into view.
"FIRE!" The Dude shouted. Myself and Tortuga then stood and fired there weapons into the incoming swarm. I didn't look, I only heard screaming and the impact of the bullets into flesh. Then I heard the magic word.
"RELOADING!" shouted Myself. Quickly him and Tortuga took cover and I stood with The Dude. We both fired our weapons into the swarm. The second I started firing, I couldn't believe my eyes as it seemed like an infinite number of newbs were infiltrating. Body after body fell in the hall and into the doorway. The Dude, having an AK, was doing a lot more damage. But my sniper still provided a lot of support since I still had it modified into rapid fire mode.
I killed at least 30 before The Dude shouted "RELOADING!" I then practically hurt my ass dropping at an extreme speed. Quickly Myself and Tortuga stood again and started firing. I flew the clip out of my sniper and dropped it on the floor, not worrying about where it goes. I then pulled another from my pocket and slid it into the holster. Then I pulled the joint back and loaded up my sniper. I reloaded quicker than expected. The Dude had just finished loading his AK-47, which is a lot quicker to reload than a sniper. A few seconds later Myself and Tortuga reloaded again. After hearing them say it, me and The Dude stood. But then, there were no more newbs. Everything went silent besides the sound of Tortuga and Myself reloading.
"Did we...kill them all?" I asked.
"No..." The Dude said, "We killed so many, that their bodies blocked up the doorway..."

Oblivion EX
04-28-2010, 01:10 PM
Shit man. keep it going.

Blasphemer
04-28-2010, 01:22 PM
I has sad you is focusing on that side only.

Oblivion EX
04-28-2010, 01:47 PM
I has sad you is focusing on that side only.

As sacred has said before, the story is from his point of view. so there really wont be a chapter about us :C not until we meet and perhaps tell stories of what happened.

Sacred
04-28-2010, 03:03 PM
Sorry mates. But don't worry. I'm not playing favorites in this story. Your times will shine.

Oblivion EX
04-28-2010, 03:41 PM
Can't wait :

The Dude
04-28-2010, 05:29 PM
lmao their bodies cockblocked the doorway.

RUiN
04-28-2010, 07:38 PM
lmao their bodies cockblocked the doorway.

Typical noobs. Always cockblocking.

AlphaCentaurus
04-28-2010, 08:00 PM
idk if I can still get in as a side character? if so...

Name: Alpha
Characteristics: Quite young, brown hair, good agility

RUiN
04-28-2010, 08:02 PM
They strike again.

Zero
04-28-2010, 09:05 PM
"No..." The Dude said, "We killed so many, that their bodies blocked up the doorway..."
I lol'd at this part.

Excellion1498
01-20-2012, 03:59 PM
Can I be a side character? Nickname Cel?

Ashlander
01-20-2012, 05:00 PM
CMPunk, i have new news about the hackers! They plan to attack the White House! You have to do something!

Blue
01-20-2012, 05:13 PM
CMPunk, i have new news about the hackers! They plan to attack the White House! You have to do something!

Epic lulz ensured at Blue's house. No imaginary friends

Ashlander
01-20-2012, 05:16 PM
Oh damn i thought this was the other one. The titles are SO close.

Scarecrow
01-20-2012, 09:47 PM
no this is the GOOD thread

MadMirrors
02-01-2012, 07:50 PM
sup I'm from FA maybe you should have some FA side characters.

Sacred
02-01-2012, 07:53 PM
When I originally created this story, my idea on FA being in this story was just mentions of it being basically another nation overall. And that all the attacks on us would make us suspicious that FA was at fault. But that was a long time ago.

Excellion1498
02-02-2012, 03:55 AM
Will this ever be finished?

Sacred
02-02-2012, 07:27 AM
Who knows. I might revisit it one day if I feel inspired to. Make it better with more plot. It'd just be nice to have all my friends back who were in this on the forums. :(