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doc
04-20-2010, 02:33 PM
THIS IS BEING UPDATED, JUST WITH THE SAME LINK

Just put my combo competition one up

So im doin the stickpage tournament (TLTFT) and wanna make it into inter, but was put in beginner. So here I am...
Finally all put into one thread :D
http://www.truploader.com/view/690552
Most recent one in blue

CC is GREATLY appreciated!

Edit: #7 and #8 are up, use the link! 4/22

Edit: #9, the combo competition, just put up

So, in your opinion, is this stuff good enough for intermediate?

Zed
04-20-2010, 02:48 PM
You need a frame where the kick is in contact with the red guy otherwise it doesn't look like it hit him. It's quite nice movement though.

doc
04-20-2010, 03:50 PM
haha ya i didnt think anyone would notice that. Unfortunately, I put the two of them a little too far away for the leg to reach, and didnt feel like going back to change it :P

Kitsune
04-20-2010, 09:42 PM
you have every part of the body doing a certain action at the same time. the animation looks fine, but if the blue guy's upper body (after the kick) started moving down 2 or 3 frames AFTER the legs started to come down then there's this nice sense of organic lack of concurrency.

doc
04-21-2010, 02:12 PM
Oh, i see what youre saying. Ya, that makes sense. Thanks!
Ill probably have #7 up in a bit

Edit: #7's up! Thanks again for the comments everyone!

doc
04-22-2010, 03:44 PM
bump... hey everyone! :D

RUiN
04-22-2010, 05:50 PM
The kicks are still pretty stiff but your improving.

doc
04-23-2010, 08:30 PM
Awesome thanks ruin!

doc
04-25-2010, 05:49 AM
bump
comon guys i really need some cc :(

Edit: Just put up my combo comp, would love some cc on that (#9)

doc
04-26-2010, 01:14 PM
helooooo!
Is there a reason nobody's responding to this? theres 9 animations in that swf, and theres only 2 responses