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Cronos
04-21-2010, 06:43 AM
Well I actually posted this on DA several days ago, but never got around to posting it here.

Was wondering if it's good enough for official (will have FLA done once I get out of lazy mode)

http://cronosxiii.deviantart.com/art/Stickpage-Introduction-160801565

just wantin more cc

Gyohdonz
04-21-2010, 06:54 AM
Takes too long man. The first two shots are ok, but after that....

Remember it's just an intro.

Cronos
04-21-2010, 06:57 AM
yeah. I kept thinking that.

Bonk
04-21-2010, 07:46 AM
Ha that's pretty cool actually... but to be honest, cut out the whole arm gun thingy bit, and after the letters have settled into place just make them explode or something.

Vendetta
04-21-2010, 07:58 AM
Yeah, good animation but an intro should usually end with the letters intact, or at least legible.

bubbles
04-21-2010, 10:55 AM
After the gun arm thingy falls just leave it there. It's far too long at the moment.

-Hawk-
04-21-2010, 03:41 PM
I think it's good enough for an official intro. A bit too long, though. Might want to edit it a bit if you can.

stick B pilli
04-21-2010, 03:43 PM
nice and simple effect with the blur also i like the recoil of the cannon and I agree with bubbles the ending part was too long and unnecessary.
but is your intro and you decide how to do it , just very good work.

Cronos
04-21-2010, 05:52 PM
Yeah, ill see if I can shorten it. Thanks.

Kitsune
04-21-2010, 08:08 PM
just make them explode or something.

Way to make me sad, asshole.

BBHSN98
08-21-2013, 03:01 PM
alright this one's from me :)
http://www.filz.us/view/b14f68f3-b04/

if you wanna watch it, .swf file is here:
http://bbhsn98.deviantart.com/art/NFSTR-like-Intro-Stickpage-394943151?ga_submit_new=10%253A1377118834