View Full Version : Stickpage Introduction

04-21-2010, 06:43 AM
Well I actually posted this on DA several days ago, but never got around to posting it here.

Was wondering if it's good enough for official (will have FLA done once I get out of lazy mode)


just wantin more cc

04-21-2010, 06:54 AM
Takes too long man. The first two shots are ok, but after that....

Remember it's just an intro.

04-21-2010, 06:57 AM
yeah. I kept thinking that.

04-21-2010, 07:46 AM
Ha that's pretty cool actually... but to be honest, cut out the whole arm gun thingy bit, and after the letters have settled into place just make them explode or something.

04-21-2010, 07:58 AM
Yeah, good animation but an intro should usually end with the letters intact, or at least legible.

04-21-2010, 10:55 AM
After the gun arm thingy falls just leave it there. It's far too long at the moment.

04-21-2010, 03:41 PM
I think it's good enough for an official intro. A bit too long, though. Might want to edit it a bit if you can.

stick B pilli
04-21-2010, 03:43 PM
nice and simple effect with the blur also i like the recoil of the cannon and I agree with bubbles the ending part was too long and unnecessary.
but is your intro and you decide how to do it , just very good work.

04-21-2010, 05:52 PM
Yeah, ill see if I can shorten it. Thanks.

04-21-2010, 08:08 PM
just make them explode or something.

Way to make me sad, asshole.

08-21-2013, 03:01 PM
alright this one's from me :)

if you wanna watch it, .swf file is here: