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Monica
04-22-2010, 05:02 PM
New:
http://imageflock.com/img/1272248125.gif

Animations:
Run animation (http://imageflock.com/img/1271977464.gif)
Lemon vs Sasha(This was for another site, my name there being Sasha) (http://imageflock.com/img/1255269291.gif)
Wu Run (I know it looks weird.) (http://imageflock.com/img/1255336193.gif)
Shooting (My worst.) (http://imageflock.com/img/1255443519.gif)
Drunken madness (http://pimp.darkdemon.org/8802/1262362334.gif)
3D flip (http://imageflock.com/img/1255786137.gif)
Gif raped sprite animation (http://imageflock.com/img/1272248125.gif)

Here's the .piv file to my sprite animation, so you can watch it without the horrible gif rape.
http://pivotup.com/files/ow6enp3x.piv

That's it for now and if i work on any others i'll be sure to upload them right here.

Peppar
04-22-2010, 05:06 PM
You are good. You got all the basics. Except, probably work on stiffness a bit. I might be wrong. Good job!

Monica
04-22-2010, 05:13 PM
Thanks for the comment Peppar, and yes, i do need a work on stiffness a little bit. :x

RUiN
04-22-2010, 05:22 PM
It all looks really nice. Stiff a little end the run animation in something else. It could be epic.

Vorpal
04-22-2010, 05:23 PM
Hey baby, jk.
But seriously where the **** have you been? That was a breath of fresh air, props.

Monica
04-22-2010, 05:29 PM
Thanks everyone, wasnt really expecting more comments so quickly but i guess that's because i've been around inactive forums so much, but thank you. ^ ~ ^

Monica
04-22-2010, 05:39 PM
*Updated
Added in two new animations, a 3D flip/barrelroll..And some random drunk..thing, Enjoy? x3

Mark
04-22-2010, 07:48 PM
OH MY FUMPING GOD.......your so epic x3

I really like your sig animation.
How do you ease your animatinos!?!?!?!?!? i need to know

Monica
04-22-2010, 09:02 PM
How do i ease? Well, with my mouse of course.

Gyohdonz
04-22-2010, 11:06 PM
How do i ease? Well, with my mouse of course.

Beautiful answer.

Welcome to the Pivot Section, we were in need of high quality animators like yourself.

Monica
04-22-2010, 11:11 PM
Cheers i just found it hard over at other forums due to trolls and what not, it's nice to have a warm welcome.

Zero
04-22-2010, 11:13 PM
Epic animations you got there.

Not_Nish
04-23-2010, 02:51 AM
This is really good stuff... waaay better than I expected. Well done.

Peppar
04-23-2010, 04:16 AM
Cheers i just found it hard over at other forums due to trolls and what not, it's nice to have a warm welcome. Yep. Now all you have to do is, Please stay. Please.

Monica
04-23-2010, 04:21 AM
You have terrible timming, im thinking of leaving already for personal reasons.

Zed
04-23-2010, 04:48 AM
Nice animations. It's good to have you here. If I may criticise broadly rather than going in too deep for lack of time, I'd do more with the knee joint than you are, and probably leave it bent longer whenever a foot is coming forwards - you're coming close to scuffing your feet. Also, watch the physics in the second and last ones. You're going down too early, losing some horizontal momentum. But like everyone's said, good work, well done.

Monica
04-23-2010, 04:59 AM
Detailed, yet short post, thank you Zed. :x

Skylinee77
04-23-2010, 05:15 AM
Nice, i liked the first, second, and the last one

Peppar
04-23-2010, 06:04 PM
You have terrible timming, im thinking of leaving already for personal reasons. nooooooooooo.

Monica
04-23-2010, 06:42 PM
Dont panic, i've actually decided to stay. xD
Might be updating soon, depends if i can be bothered.

Peppar
04-23-2010, 07:28 PM
:D. Thank you.

Monica
04-23-2010, 07:32 PM
Wont be updating for a while now, pivots gone and screwed itself, feel free to check out my art thread and my easytoon thread.

Oblivion EX
04-23-2010, 07:51 PM
:C that sucks, how did it "screw" itself?

Monica
04-23-2010, 07:55 PM
Just wont open, and i cant be bothered redownloading.

Oblivion EX
04-23-2010, 08:07 PM
aw, that sucks, you're really good, I just hope you can get it fixed soon so you can improve even more.

Monica
04-23-2010, 08:15 PM
Might redownload later, but then i still dont think i would be bothered animating with pivot right this second.

Scarecrow
04-23-2010, 11:42 PM
I really like your run animation, my only problem with it would be that when he jumps over the block, it looks sort of like he just jumps... next to it?

is there maybe some crossover of the green figure on top of the side of the block?

Monica
04-24-2010, 12:13 AM
Yeah there was, your the first to notice that.

bubbles
04-24-2010, 03:48 AM
Darn darn darn darn darn! Yet another epic person who is better than me! Ergh...they're awsome. :(

Monica
04-24-2010, 05:26 AM
Lol, fair enough, thanks.

Scarecrow
04-24-2010, 09:05 AM
Yeah there was, your the first to notice that.

some of us will notice these things, most of us won't though

mizu
04-24-2010, 11:47 AM
damn monica how many threads have you made?

Yummerz
04-24-2010, 11:50 AM
damn monica how many threads have you made?

3.
One in easytoon
One in pivot.
One in art.

Zed
04-24-2010, 01:39 PM
Lol.
I wonder what monica will say when she see's this...

She won't. She'll see me quoting a deleted post and need never know of the conversation that preceded it. Now stop scaring away the new members. Or at least scare away the ones like AwesomeDude1000.

zawmbee
04-24-2010, 01:41 PM
I miss that guy :'(
He just loved polls.

Not_Nish
04-24-2010, 01:43 PM
We should make a thread just for guys like awesomedude1000, 1ilike300pies and Resident Evil rocks.

Zed
04-24-2010, 01:45 PM
We have searched long and hard for a way to ban people from specific sections. We wanted MoD confined to Literature and Pivot. Unfortunately, no such plug-in exists for Vbulettin. Yet.

Now back on topic people. This can be taken to the chat thread if you really feel like it.

bubbles
04-24-2010, 01:48 PM
We have searched long and hard for a way to ban people from specific sections. We wanted MoD confined to Literature and Pivot. Unfortunately, no such plug-in exists for Vbulettin. Yet.

Now back on topic people. This can be taken to the chat thread if you really feel like it.
But don't we allready have a chat thread?

Zed
04-24-2010, 01:49 PM
Yes. That's the point. So go there.

mizu
04-24-2010, 02:48 PM
i was just joking.

Monica
04-24-2010, 03:27 PM
Come on guys, get back on topic please. :x

Yummerz
04-24-2010, 03:29 PM
Sorry.
How much frames are on that run?

It looks so good!LOl,you will never know what we were talking about...Right peppar?

Monica
04-24-2010, 04:08 PM
I actually dont even remember, i dont have the .piv anymore due to my laptop being broken. <.>

Peppar
04-24-2010, 04:49 PM
D: Your animations are so beautiful.

bluergh
04-24-2010, 05:26 PM
Everything i've seen by you is just amazing. O.O

mizu
04-24-2010, 05:50 PM
Monica you've been and spp for a few days now and your already so damn popular. you're probably the most popular one on spp.

Cronos
04-24-2010, 06:44 PM
http://imageflock.com/img/1255786137.gif


bravo .

Monica
04-24-2010, 06:46 PM
Most popular on SPP..i highly doubt that.

Tortuga
04-24-2010, 08:18 PM
No it's just that a majority of the people that have commented here are tools.

mizu
04-24-2010, 08:32 PM
No it's just that a majority of the people that have commented here are tools.No it's just that a majority of the people that have commented here know a good animator when they see one

Scarecrow
04-24-2010, 10:37 PM
We have searched long and hard for a way to ban people from specific sections. We wanted MoD confined to Literature and Pivot. Unfortunately, no such plug-in exists for Vbulettin. Yet.

Now back on topic people. This can be taken to the chat thread if you really feel like it.

what are you talking about? all you need to do is create a new group, give that group permissions only to access literature and pivot, and then assign him as the only member of that group.



No it's just that a majority of the people that have commented here know a good animator when they see one

lmao who the **** do you think you are




i'll stop posting off topic now.

Monica
04-24-2010, 10:39 PM
Yes, yes you will good sir.

mizu
04-25-2010, 05:50 AM
you seem like a really nice person a great animator and an excellent addition to forums ^_^. please posst some more animations there just so fucking good.T_T.

Zed
04-25-2010, 06:05 AM
what are you talking about? all you need to do is create a new group, give that group permissions only to access literature and pivot, and then assign him as the only member of that group.


You're good. Only problems are that it would be quite a lot of effort, permanent (unless even more effort was applied), and would have to be done by an admin.


No it's just that a majority of the people that have commented here are tools.


No it's just that a majority of the people that have commented here know a good animator when they see one

You're both right. Good animator, but being a girl automatically generates this insane frenzy which amplifies any traits by five.

In the interest of relevance, have some cc.


http://imageflock.com/img/1271977464.gif

As usual with any pivot run, the low frame rate is causing issues. I think the main one here is the cross-over. It's difficult to see the legs switching unless you concentrate. I would suggest a frame for the leg in the air where the knee is bent as much as possible with the upper leg about thirty degrees down from horizontal and with the foot on the ground directly below the foot in the air. Not certain though. Would have to see it. You'd probably want to extend that leg in the air a bit further forwards in the following frame too to get a more circular motion on the front foot.

Arms on the first run are perfect.

The box that he jumps over rotates, presumably for perspective. That can be fine, but the bit he jumps through later doesn't. You need consistency on that. I would say the box is a bit slow too. Maybe one less frame of it being in the picture, or that extra frame in the run I mentioned would sort it out too.

After he lands from the box-jump, he loses a lot of momentum by pausing on the ground to absorb the impact for too long. I think he should probably land with just one foot and go straight into the run but lower to the ground than usual for the first stride. That or fall forwards.

On the second piece of running, I'm not so sure about the arms. I think I'd circle them once more before moving them back. I'm never a big fan of the arms-back kind of running, but I understand it's necessary for the upcoming jump. Best to minimise the length of time it's done for.

The very end is, for all intents and purposes, perfect. The right-most arm as he twists is awkward if you watch it very closely. It changes direction too quickly coming out of the roll. I couldn't suggest a way to fix it though, and it's so small it doesn't really matter.

Everything there is a tiny tiny thing, and some of it's probably more to do with my style and preferences than actual mistakes. It's still very good.

Peppar
04-25-2010, 06:13 AM
Can not really think of anything else to c&c.

Monica
04-25-2010, 06:52 AM
Yarp, im pretty sure Zed just covered it all..

Monica
04-25-2010, 08:12 PM
*Updated
I actually havent done a sprite animation in quite a while, it's rusty..and gif raped, but it's something?

Oblivion EX
04-25-2010, 10:33 PM
It looked fine to me. I couldn't tell a difference between gif raped, and not gif raped.

also, why cut the size in half? it kills the little guys :C I could barely tell that sasuke was sasuke.

Monica
04-26-2010, 01:37 AM
Sasuke good at morphing his face.

poppetje3D
04-26-2010, 07:30 AM
Soroku , Stop spamming.
I don't care if you quit pivot , no one does.

As for the animations , They are nice.
Maybe make something longer , with a plot and a background.
Good job.

Monica
04-26-2010, 09:39 AM
Me, make a plotted animation? That's a laugh. xD

Gyohdonz
04-26-2010, 01:39 PM
I'm wondering if people can be banned for low intelligence.

Anyway, I've never really liked sprite animations, but I liked this one. A lot.

Maybe that's because I watch naruto, I dunno.

Yummerz
04-26-2010, 01:45 PM
Maybe its because your generally just awesome?
And naruto is Awesome.
You see what im getting at?




Monica.
So,after looking a your animation they seem pretty ....******* Awesome.
And who's this Katrina?
Arch Nemi-sis?

Excuse the terrible pun.

Monica
04-26-2010, 04:00 PM
Katrina is my close friend, we see each other as family, thats all. xD
Why do you ask?

Zed
04-26-2010, 04:18 PM
I'm wondering if people can be banned for low intelligence.

He can have his infraction level increased by the amount his post count just dropped. I think that's fair.


The new animation was nice. I never really like teleport effects, but you didn't really over-do them like some people. Since I've never made anything like that I don't actually know how hard it is or how to improve so I can't say much more on it.

Peppar
04-26-2010, 05:38 PM
And who's this Katrina?
Arch Nemi-sis?

Arch nemi-sis? I can not excuse that. Bad puns are no-nos :c


Katrina is my close friend, we see each other as family, thats all. xD
Why do you ask? Oh.

Yummerz
04-27-2010, 09:18 AM
Katrina is my close friend, we see each other as family, thats all. xD
Why do you ask?

http://forums.stickpage.com/showthread.php?32864-I-m-competing-with-you-Monica.-D
Maybe that why...

mizu
04-29-2010, 09:57 PM
Ive tried to make a sprite animation in pivot and sucked hard. you are a good animator ^_^.