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Mark
04-27-2010, 04:35 PM
I think this is my best flash ever. Im gonna go make some more.
http://www.truploader.com/uploads/189827Flashcom.swf

If possible could some one give me some C&C. I wanna gets better

Dash!
http://www.truploader.com/uploads/887760Flashcom.swf

Vendetta
04-28-2010, 03:09 AM
You're definitely improving, the first one was very smooth, but a little wobbly. The second one had great particles, but the dash lacked anticipation.

Mark
04-28-2010, 04:30 AM
You're definitely improving, the first one was very smooth, but a little wobbly. The second one had great particles, but the dash lacked anticipation.
Thanks Vendetta How would I add anticipation to the dash? should he lean forward some more?

Peppar
04-28-2010, 05:01 AM
Yes. And on the legs, if you are applying lots of force. The combo was awesome.

Zero
04-28-2010, 05:14 AM
Well, there's one i want to clarify first. Did you meant that trail in his head in the first animation? Or did you bend that accidentally with the selection tool?